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Posted: 13 years ago



U, ME,AUR...?

PART 29

Hai friends,

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Special thanks for ABISAMRAT GUNJAN,who helped me in this part.thank you dear.👏


What can Rano say.She searched for the words,that can make her geet understand easily.

Gudia..Maan is a good person.How can I taunt him.He saved your life today.If something happened to you can we survive.He didn't touch you intentionally..He just helped you.And now he is going to be your husband.Other than family,only a husband has the right to touch,kiss or hug a girl.Now he is also a part of our family.After marriage also,Noone should touch you other than Maan.Maan has all the right over you than us..

She yawned n took her mama's hand between her hands and kept it under her cheeks.

Ye shadhi kya hai?

Shadhi ek ladka aur ek ladki ke beechka pavithra rishtha hai.jahaan dono har janam saath nibhaneka wadha karthi hai.

Hmm

..hamesha ek dusreka khushika khayaal rakhenge.har sukduk baatenge. Ek baar haath taamliya tho zindagi bar imandari se nibana padega..pyaarse,vishwas se,ek dusrei ki achai burai ko samachke

hmm.

Maan tumse bohut pyaar kartha hai..

Hmm.

ISILIYE TUMSE SHADHI KARNA CHATHA HAI.Tumbhi usey unse zyadha pyaar karogi.

Hmm.

..agar usko kisi bath ko lekhar gussa bhi aagaya na..tho bhi tum usey gussa nehi korogi..balki tum ye sochogi..wo gussa kyun hain..aur tum usey shanth karoge..har achey aur burei waqt par saath rahogi..

hmm🥱.she said in a slow voice.She was listening to her mother in heriness. drowsiness.

Rano stopped.She saw geet yawning continuosly.

Neend aarahi hey beta.

Hmmm.🥱

Tho soja..kal bath karthey hain.'

gud night mama.

Geet slept peacefully..Rano kissed her fore head and made her way towards the wardrobe.She took Geets new dress, jewels and the needed accessories she should wear for the engagement.Rano stayed with geet in her room that night.

Later at night ,Rano heared her screaming again Chunni,chunni,..mama..blood..chunni'

Chunniko Kuch nehi hua hai gudia

She is fine na mama..She asked in her sleep..

Haan gudia...she is fine..you sleep..

she patted geet slowly..n she again drifted to her sleep.

Rano silently prayed,Bapaji how many days will it take for geet to recover from this incident.Please..help her..I cant see her awakening every night like this.

Next morning in the Farm house

The farm house was beautifully decorated with flowers and lightings.All the villagers helped them in all ways.Maan was admiring the helping tendency and care of them .Every arrangements looked simple,but admirable.

His securities had arrived..They are not much injured'so they were back to their duties.Maan sent most of them to Geets house to take care of her.Hearing Maan's marriage they were also surprised.but they went on with their duty taking care of their boss's would be wife.

Maan took the phone n called Adi.

Where are you both now?

IDK..sir.. I can only say Far away from delhi.

ADDDi..you are irritating me..

You never let me know where we are heading to.

Give it to the driver.

Adi gave the phone to the driver.

When will you reach HP?

Within 2 hrs sir.

Ok.Be careful.dont stop anywhere.

ok sir

.Give back to Adi.

Yes sir.He gave.

Jjjiii sir.

You have the securities with you..

Yes sir..as you said ..few of them are bbb..b..efore and after our car sir.Pls.sir..Can you tttelll me where are we going.I asked kaladidi..ssshe too refused to say..

Let it be a surprise for you Adi.Take care of you both..bye.

Surprise'hu hu hu'for me..this is also a surprise'maansir speaking politely n caring.he he..n securities for staffs.so strange n unbelievable.

Nakul came there n said Dr.lakshmi wants to meet you..

Ok.send her .

Welcome Dr.Aap yahaan ..kuch kaam tha..

Yes.Iwant to speak to you personally..If you are not busy ,shall we speak for a few min

Sure Dr.betiye.

Thanks.I'll come straightly to the matter..I don't want you to get married to Geet.

What..He was shocked.But why..

Any reason.

I think u must have known by this time..

I didn't get you..

Maan was confused.😕

You know maan geet is not mature enough to get married..You are educated and now you must have known this..she is still a child at heart..she don't know what a married life means to..She will not be a perfect wife for you.

I know.

You know..then why you are doing this..

He smiled at her.

What do you know about me Dr.I'm a business man..I can judge peopleand their charectors easily..I know Geet is childish.Thats the quality I like her very much.I don't have any problem with that.

She doesn't know what the outer world is.She knows only her family,this villagers and their love.I convinced her papa for her higher studies staying in hostel.,bcoz if she was away from them ,she could know about other world.she may get out of her childishness.

wo samajdar nehi hai tho kya hua..mei samach sakthi hoon na..I can make her understand .Do you think I will not let geet to complete her studies.I also want wife to be educated.

I really appreciate your concern towards her Dr .I can promise you,she will continue her studies even after our marriage..Do you have any more questions or doubts..

Yes...but..

You can be frank with me Dr.I want to clear all your doubts.I dont want anyone to doubt our marriage..

After chunnis death she asked me a question.Why chunni said she was raped.whats meant by rape..the girl who doesn't know what is sexual abusement..Will she be a perfect wife for you.if you want 2 marry her..why don't u wait till she is matured..

Dr.do you think that is the only reason needed for a married life.is there no value of love or care in life.Sex is a part of marriage.I can wait for her even after our marriage also.I want to protect her at present.marriage is the only way I can keep her with me.

You are too stubborn..

Yes I am..I don't deny it.If I make a decision,I'll never get back of it.and I always keep my words also.any more doubts.

no.Congrats maan..I'm convinced with your answers and I'm happy for you both also.

Thanx Dr.

Ok.see you in the evening.

Bye.Dr.Have a nice day.

Thanks ..But its ur day.have a wonderful evening.bye.

Precap:Maneets Engagement below in few hrs..😃

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12.10..2011..2.10p.m.

pls wait for few hrs ...im updating..today double dhamaka hoga.
Part 30...below dears...read it..
MY 2nd FF-Geetanjali'S LINK I'VE GIVEN BELOW

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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

U, ME,AUR...?

PART 30

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.

Part 30

Few Hrs later.

Adi and Kala reached the farm house.

Namaste daadima..Adi wished..

Namaste Adi.. kala'you both have arrived.I am waiting for you both only..how was your journey..

NiceDaadi..I'm so so happy'kala screamed in joy hugging daadi..

Adi looked at the house beautifully decorated.Entering hoshiarpur Kala said they are going to Khurana's farm house.But the purpose for what they are here ,she didn't tell him.

Hello Maan sir..

Hello Adi.How was your journey.

Fine sir.May I know whats going now..I cant hold my curiosity.and kala didi why r u so happy..you didn't say me anything.

Your maan sir 's engagement today and marriage day after tomorrow.

Whaaa..aaat.?Adi's jaws dropped and his eyes opened wide..He stood stunned.

Yes.

congrats sir.Im really happy for you.

Thank you.You are the lucky person to be here..Now noone knows other than you of Kc..Keep it as a secret..dont tell anyone specially media.We kept it secret bcoz there r some problem to be solved.and.Maan wants some time to keep away this news till all problems are solved.

He..he.he..ji daadi..I'll keep silent'So,we did Maan sirs marriage purchase.

Yes..

So you know didi..

Yes Adi.

You too hide it from me.All through the way I was asking you..you never uttered a word.

What to do.Thats an order from daadi.daadi you must have seen adis face throughout the journey'He was talking to himself and making all faces..

She laughed.Nakul came with juice for all.

Nakul n kala started to talk with each other the works done n what more preparations they must do.

Kalaakka.whats your patidev telling.

About ur story of sudden marriage.aur kya.I want to meet ur would be.

Akka.wait till evening.

After sometime,They all started to unpack the things they got from Delhi.

Daadi and Maan was happy with Kala's selections.Kala showed the wedding dress that rosy had delivered..n the engagement rings,mangalsutr ..etc..

All are so beautiful.

Chotu do you like it.

Its absolutely fantastic..Ur choices are so gud kalaakka..

Maan took the chocolates,icecream powder and balloons from there and started to move towards kitchen.

You keep it chotu.I'll keep in Kitchen.

No.Im not going to keep it.I'm going to make icecream.

What.I'll make .u go.

No.I'll make akka.You help Dadi.

Kala knows Maan knows cooking.But he never cooks when chefs n servants r there.but why today.she looked at Nakul confusingly.

I was also like this for the last 2 days.maan babu gives more surprises nowadays.Nakul said to kala..u know sometimesI thought i got mad..

tho aap ab kese hai..

i'm relieved.. u n ur chotu...he said in a complaining voice.

They saw him making icecream and placing it in the freezer.

Nakul,Kala n Adi continued helping Daadi to make preparations for evening..

It was evening.All works were finished

Daadi came to maans room. she gave him a simple formal dress as he use to wear to college.

Maan ,wear this for engagement.

Daadi..Its new.But,I didn't see this dress today while unpacking.

Yes.I bought this for you.

When.

Just like that.Will you be questioning like this or will you get ready also.the guests have started to arrive.

Yes.just five minutes..He wore the blue shirt n jeans and got ready for his engagement and came down.

Maan sent his car to pick Geets family .

They were welcomed by Daadi.

Geet was dressed in a simple beautiful blue suit with suitable jewels.She looked like an angel.Maan could not take his eyes out of her.Daadi took them inside and introduced kala and Adi to them.Geets papa,chachu n vicky left Rano with them and joined other villagers..

Kala.this is geet.Geet this is kala.Nakulki wife.kala is like a sister to maan.

Namaste didi.

Kala,How is my Bahu.

Daadi.she looks beautiful .chotisi gudia jesi..

She put kala tika at the back of geets ears and kissed her forehead.

All calls me gudia only.

Hmm.that must be true.tumho itni pyaari.so,you are the one who stole our chotu.

Who is chotu.

Your Future husband .i call him chotu..like all calls u gudia.

Oh.

Ok.I'll go n attend the guests Daadi.

Maan came there.

If you all don't mind Can I take geet with me for few minutes.

Maan ..Are you joking.Sablog hain yahaan.this is not city.You can't take her like this.And its time for engagement.

Dadi,If you don't want her to send her with me alone,Then you also can come with me.I'm taking her only to the kitchen.

What.

To kitchen for five min.

Ok. Rano you go with them. I'll take care ofthe guests.

Ji.

Maan took them to the kitchen.

He gave Geet the chocolate box,blown balloons in which he made a smiley with sry note and then opened the freezer and gave her all flavours of icecream.

Wow Maan'Ye sab Mereliye.

Yes.I told you na..I'll give you the gifts before engagements.I kept my promise.So, now friends..ok..

She took his hands and said ok.you are so sweet..

Sweet or mei.

My mummy never gives me lots of icecream..you are so good ..ithna sara ..sirf meriliye'She had a childish excitement on her face.that gave more glow to her face..

Gudia,Now keep it inside.You can have it later.

Per mama..let she have one.

You don't know beta..She will mess up..let she have after the engagement.Rano placed it back in the fridge.Lets go.. Its getting late.

Daadi gave the rings to Rano .How is it Rano.Tumahare damadh ka selection hai..

Bohut sundar hai..

The diamonds glittered in the lights,which made all notice the rings.

Maan and Geet were standing opposite to each other.

Gudia,ye ring maan ko pehnatho.

She did as her mother said.

It was maans turn to wear the ring.When Daadi interrupted.One min maan.All were shocked n confused why she said to stop.

Daadi ..what..

You are from city maan.You know what should u do now.

Mei samji nehi daadi.

u didnt propose her before ..Its so sudden..so,I want you to propose to my bahu..If she accepts then you can continue.He was emberassed.

Daadi..mei..you are kidding me..

No maan..I'm serious..u must ask her now.

How can I dadi..sab ke saamne..

When u asked for her hands,you didnt think like this..ab kyun sharmarahi ho...I wont accept till u propose her'n I should hear her saying Yes..thats my decision..

Maan sir,you have no choice left..do as daadi says..

Chotu,u can do.sharmana math..

Maan went on his knees.😳 And asked

Geet will you marry me..😳

She giggled .She has not seen anyone like this before.And his posture made her giggled.

Maan was lost in her laugh. How many times this girl will make me fell for her.

Vicky pulled her and said'.Say yes didi..

Yes.Maan took her hand in his and slipped the ring in it.It looked more beautiful in her fingers.He slowly took her hands to his lips and placed a small peck.

His hot breathe and his lips sent a small shiver in her body.She instantly turn towards her mama n about to say something.

Rano stopped her..thodi der liye chup raho gudia.All clapped and congratulated them.They both took blessings from the elders.

Precap:Geet repeated her annoying question..this time before Maan???

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12.10..2011..7.oo0p.m.

Part 31...Pls wait...
Geetanjali..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1912811&PID=47621410

You are my love...
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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


😉Hai friends..

I hope i 've successfully made the answer that

satisfies a little all...hope so..
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
so ossum update s dear
so now maan ll say the reason i think so
but may be this time say understand dear
that from nowonwards he can touch her becoz there are in raltion of maariage
dear u are married so
make her to understand in her words
think ur son is asking and u are saying him in the elder manner
u ll get the answer dear
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely
plz geetanjali bi update karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ...awesome...awesome...
both parts r really wonderful...
specially the ans given by maan to doctor is fabbb...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
totally its beautiful...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by geetsweet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing updates Valli...That proposal was so romantic...So Geet was so sleepy she did not hear much in sleep and will ask the question again...LOL
btw i loved the way Maan explained things to the Dr.
there is no need to worry...he understands her...tabhi to uske liye apne haathon se icecream banayi
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm...
will read and comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update but very curious to know hw maan will handle his angel n protect her from this cruel world continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

loved both d parts ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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