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Posted: 13 years ago
Uff Muski still updating ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 69

there r girls who may be educated having degress but not aware of sexual aspects.. lot of them simply mug the subjects & don't try to understand.. again lot to do with exposure..wat u see & kind of people u talk to..etc etc.. from the beginning I have mentioned geet was not very inteligent types..but her genie helped her to study..especailly if u remeber the circuit diagram bit ...she even asked maan aacha..we did this in 12th...
a reader wanted me to include maan's reactions..as Nt is narrating the past to him.. I have added that in bracket..hope it makes sense..the current track is past ..after 5months in US...Nt found out that Geet is pregnant & trying to help her out with it

A day after Nt gave her a book on sex education. Geet read it & read it again & again. She held her stomach & screamed.. di di..
Nt excepeted every thing but not this.. she held Nt 's hand & rested on her stomach.. di yah dehko kya hain. Nt closed her eyes.. it was supposed to be such a special moment.. but this dodo was impossible
(Maan's heart missed a beat.. ho mera dodo.. she didn't know that was amy's first kick.. )
nt '
its the baby kicking
Geet '
di iska matlab yeh genie hain
(Maan just wanted to kiss her right now... hold her close to his heart... away from this mean world.. away from himself)
nt closed her eyes sadly
Geet ' I have baby genie inside me
she looked around..trying to peep in..
(Maan dodo.. he sobbed)
her face twinkled with joy & delight. She was thrilled. Mujhe genie ko batna hain, he will be surprised.
(I am ..sweetly though...yet so much of pain he felt deep within) she immediately ran to call him ..nt didn't want to say anything.. that would be for the best she thought.

She called Khurana Mansion & for her luck or bad luck nakul answered the call
(Maan was surprised & angry she called me.. she did.. he was really curisous ..then why he never knew abt it..)
Geet '
nakul genie kanha hain?
Nakul ' sahab abhi yanha nahi rahthen..he said painfully
(Maan cursed himself)
Geet '
mujhe genie se abhi baat karni hain
nakul tried to explain her every thing from the beginning.. he started telling her abt the family not accepting kavitha & maan's relation & so he left home, business, money & they stay separately with her..
suddenly Geet realized ..maan is with kavitha.. so it won't be right to tell him abt their baby..definitely kavitha won't accept & it will lead to complications in his life...she didn't hear the whole thing..she just cut the call abruptly.
(Maan closed his eyes - oh dodo puri baat tho sunlathi...)

Nt ' kya huwa Geet.
Geet ' genie ki tho kavitha ke saath shaadi hogayen hogi.. he moved in with her.
Nt hugged her & cried.
But strangely Geet was not crying.. she was very excited abt the baby genie. .especially because it was part of genie in her.


Geet immediately called home to her mama ' she excitedly screamed mama main pregnant hoon
nt was horrified...
(Maan smiled with tears & scared.. knowing she would do that..she could never hide anything from her parents.. even if they don't approve ..she will fight with them & convince them.. )
rano fainted & brij took the phone from her
brij '
kya huwa Geet ?
Kya kaha tumne mama ko
Geet '
mama ko kya huwa?
Nt snatched the phone from Geet '
iske kahne ka matlab hain ..main pregnant hoom
brij ' congrats.. yeh tho aachi baat hain
Geet made angry face & looked at Nt
nt ' aunty ji se meri baat kardijijyen
brij ' thai ji unhe dehk rahi hain..I will get her to call u back


nt cut the call & shouted tu kuch karne se phelen sochthi nahi hain kya
geet made a frowning face aapne meren genie ko aapna kyun kaha?
Nt exhaled sharply.. tujhe pata hain bhi hain.. teren aisen kahne se aunti ji ko kitna sadma puncha hain
mama ko kya huwa?
Nt ' she fainted
Geet '
she would have forgotten to take her BP medicine
nt ' nahi.. unhe sadma puncha ki unki bin byahi beti maa ban gayen
Geet didn't like those words...it meant deep.. she never thought wat they shared could be wrong. Her genie can't be wrong. Mama ko galat laga hoga
she didn't hear to me properly

(his head dipped in shame...they did something shameful.. & he was ashamed of himself..)


nt ' dehk Geet tu pehlen hi bahut gadbad kar chuki hain..now just keep quiet & listen to me & do wat I say.
Nt was shocked for once she didn't say anything..just went back to her room.. Nt managed to built up story to rano.. saying that Geet was excited for Nt having a secong baby so soon etc.


the whole time Geet was reminded of that night.. his touch.. the thought of it made her feel something different. Geet got really confused & went & knocked Nt 's door at night
Nt got worried & came out ..r
u alright, stomach main pain ho raha hian kya
Geet '
nahi .. mujhe kuch puchna hian
nt sleepily '
umm
Geet '
wo sab log karthen hain kya?
Nt was too sleepy to understand ' wat
Geet '
wonhi jo picture main dekha tha..wo..genie..aur
(Maan almost blushed ...still tears in his eyes.. she was such a cuty..wat did he do to her)
nt looked behind rahul was sleeping ..she came out '
haan
Geet thought for a moment '
aap bhi
nt's eye popped opened.. & she blushed in embarrassment
(Maan looked away.. with a smile.. )
Geet '
bolona di
nt nodded

geet - wo sab kuch..

nt wanted close her ears.. when she went into detail
Geet '
lekin kyun?
(Maan knew she will have millions of questions on that... how he wish he was there.. to answer her questions.. like always.. & she would blindly believe him)
Nt didn't know wat to say ..she thought for a moment ' it is way to express love.
Abhi mama ko tumhe pyar karna hain tho wat will she do..
Geet '
she will kiss me..hug me.. put in her lap & tell me stories
nt ' waisen hi when two people in love want to express their feeling they express it like this.
Geet smiled..
nt '
main so javoon plz
nt didn't realize she didn't tell her the physical aspect abt it...she just told the feelings attached to it.. but that was true for Geet.. Maan did express his love to her. Thats when she slowly realized she actually loved him.. thats why she accepted his love & cherished it even though she never knew wat it meant.

she spent the whole night in his room.. she teased him.. so u love me..
(he nodded sadly)
aab tho tum buren fasen because ..main bhi to phir love karti hoon na tum se..she kissed his photo.
(he laughed .. tears rolling down his eyes non stop)
Usdin tho bada kah rahen the.. ur mine.. only mine..
(he covered his mouth.. he did... how could he.. so much of feelings he had for her deep in him & he never realized it)
she blushed & kissed him again
.. I am urs only urs.
Oh genie.. I love u tum se jada
... she was so excited..knowing that they loved each other..his not being there never mattered. She knew he only loved her..especially the way he claimed her...that night. Now realizing wat it meant she was 200% sure he can't love anyone else the way he loves her

-maitri part 69-

Precap
Geet fighting with Nt

-PREV PART 68 NEXT PART 70-

thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
will PM later
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me First Again

Geet is such a dodo she told her mother that she is pregnant and fought with NT to call Genie [Amy] her's Maan is really a genie when she needed him the Most she called him to tell that she is bearing a lil Genie tu woh GAYAB ho gaya
Poor NT raat ko so bhi nahi sakti thi or embarrassment alagLike sub karte han? App bhiif she didnt do this to Rany kahan se atta
Maan missed alot the most precious Moments of his Life... he definitely feeling Sad listening all this...

PreCap: Geet is angry with NTwhy bcz she told maanCont. soon Di
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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HAIN..BABAJI ..YAH KYA HO GAYA..MEREN LIKE HI NAHI ..HAIN,

NAHI ...YEH NAHI HO SAKTA..MUSKAN CRYING...

wiping tears thanking the sweeties who commented & liked my update
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Edited by -MUSKANpmLIST- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is by far the bst naintara i've evr read.

nt and her husband has done so much for geet and then later for maan n geet's kid as well.

i'm glad that they both realize their luv. sooo looking forward to reading whn they c eachother after all of this...what their reaction wud b like and how will they express eachother the gush of emotions piling up high.

thank u for an adorable read. plzz update soon.
Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome... dekhna yeh h ki jb maaneet confront krenge to kya hoga?
Edited by krati5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
whoaaa. muski... cont soon.. finally maan finds out.. whole truth
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wow she is really an extinct species.
loved it .
god i'm waiting for next update for all ur ffs.
waitng.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Muski, what I loved abt this update are those tiny details u gave .. like Maan's reactions while listening to NT .. then the convo btw NT and Dodo .. dodo asking her if NT did the same and so on ..

Dodo is soo innocent so is her love it is sooo pure .. ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... muski maan still doesnt remember that night na...
waise i know some reader asked u to include maan's reactions but the update with out those bracket reactions was better... well its just my opinion...
looks like more of past is coming out still..atleast the precap tells me that...
as usual awesome update... am waiting to see maan-geet conversation once maan knows all the truth from NT...
confession... will be sweet to see... 😃

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