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absolutely loved it ... very moving and touching...sad what NT did...she confessed to maan, but i really wish she had confessed this to geet as well...but i guess that is maan's job...he made the mistake of believing someone else other than his gf and best friend...but at the end the one who suffers the most are the kids...poor kunal...he missed 10 years of his dad's love and affection due to NT ...please make them meet soon i know geet will not take him back that easily...he has a steep slope to climb to convince her, but stilll
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absolutely loved it ... very moving and touching...sad what NT did...she confessed to maan, but i really wish she had confessed this to geet as well...but i guess that is maan's job...he made the mistake of believing someone else other than his gf and best friend...but at the end the one who suffers the most are the kids...poor kunal...he missed 10 years of his dad's love and affection due to NT ...please make them meet soon i know geet will not take him back that easily...he has a steep slope to climb to convince her, but stilll


Thank you so much! I loved your comment! 🤗 I know, but Maan was so wrong in believing someone else over his best friend and girlfriend. I know, 10 years is a long long time. I can't imagine growing up without one of the parents. Please keep reading and keep enjoying. And keep leaving nice long comments, 😆

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Thank you so much for your comments. I really appreciate them! Please keep them coming and enjoy the next chapter.

Chapter 13

She went to the canteen dazed. Kunal was Geet's and Maan's son and apparently it seemed as if Maan did not know the existence of his son. Nandini sighed. What could have possibly gone wrong in their relationship? Geet was still in love with him. It showed in her eyes. She was trying her hardest not to care about him but she did. A lot.

She saw Meera, Yash and Dev seated there. They all looked exhausted. Should she tell them? Although this was Geet's personal matter, there was nothing personal in friendship.

She walked to their table and sat down. 'Guys, I just found out something right now. I don't know if I should be saying this right now but I'm just too shocked to think.' Nandini started. They all looked at her confused.

'What's wrong Nandini? Is everything alright? What did you find out?' Yash asked obviously very concerned.

She took a deep breath. 'I found out who Kunal's father is. He is in this hospital at the moment. It seems like Geet has not acknowledged to him that she is a doctor here and I don't think he knows about Kunal.' She said in a rush.

They all looked at her with the are-you-crazy expression. She said, 'I'm telling the truth. He's Maan. Maan Singh Khurana. The businessman.'

Meera gasped. 'Are you serious? Maan Singh Khurana is Kunal's father? Whoa, that is a shock. How did you find out? What's up?'

'Maan was talking to Kunal and Geet was hiding behind curtains watching them with a tearful expression. I had always wondered why Maan used to look so familiar to me. Thinking about it, it's because of Kunal. They look really alike. I'm surprised none of us noticed.'

'Yeah, me too. So Geet doesn't want Maan to find out? Oh man, I don't know what she should do. I feel so bad for her and in a way for him too. He has not known his son for a decade.' Dev added.

'I know, it's pretty sad. I don't know what we should do either.' Their conversation continued on this topic and they tried thinking of ways how they should approach Geet or whether they should or not at all.

Kunal and Geet left for home. He was so excited about his meeting with Maan, she realized. Little did he know that Maan was his father. He would find out soon enough.

They had a dinner full of conversation. Rano had just returned from Pune and she was all excited seeing her daughter and grandson. She noticed that Geet was not her usual self and that there was something nagging her. Kunal went upstairs to do his homework and mother and daughter decided to catch up.

'What's wrong Geet? Why do you seem to be so sad?'

'Mama, Maan's here. His mother had an accident and she's admitted in Sanjivani. Kunal and Maan talked. Mama, am I being selfish by not telling Kunal about Maan?' Geet asked.

'I don't know Geet. But if you're feeling that way, you should probably tell Kunal. I can always see questions in his eyes. I don't want you to be too late in this case.'

'Yes Mama. I'm planning to tell him tonight so that if they meet again, Kunal can talk to him with the knowledge that the man standing opposite him is his father. I'll go tell him now. Thanks Mama. I love you.'

'Don't worry. And I love you too.'

Geet went upstairs into Kunal's room. She looked at him doing his homework. 'Kunal, I need to talk to you.'

'Yes Mama? What is it?'

She tried breathing evenly. 'It's about your father.' With that, his eyes went wide. His mother was going to tell him about his father?

'You know, when I was in university, I fell in love with your father. He was in love with me too. Everything was going perfect. We had it all planned out. But then everything went wrong. I don't know how or what. I don't know whose fault it was but everything went wrong.' She looked at Kunal who it seemed was trying to absorb everything so far.

'Then I had you. Everything was perfect for me again. Kunal, I'm sure your father would have loved you. But you see, I never told him that you existed. He would have come to me and married me if he knew about you. I didn't want that to happen. He would convince me of marriage but I wanted him to marry for me, not for you. I'm sorry Aditya for being so selfish. I never told you and I never gave you a chance to understand.' She looked at her son with tears in her eyes. It seemed like he was having trouble holding them in too.

He asked her. 'Mama, why are you telling this to me now?'

'Because I think I've cheated you long enough. I thought you deserved to know. Aren't you going to ask me who he is?' Geet asked.

'I don't need to. I figured that if you wanted me to know, you'll tell me on your own.'

'Oh Kunal. I'm so sorry for not telling you this earlier but I have to do this now. He's Maan. Maan Singh Khurana's your father.'

He gasped. Maan Singh Khurana was his father? The man he was talking to today was his father? The man he was planning to fix his mother with was already his father? How could this be possible? He looked at tears falling down his mother's cheeks and he knew it was true. His mother would never lie. He didn't know how to react. He knew it had taken a lot for his mother to tell him the truth but it also hurt him that she didn't tell him earlier. Hadn't he deserved to know? Then he reminded himself, he never asked. If he would have, she would have told him. And she was crying. Her tears made her weak. It didn't matter. She was always there for him.

Suddenly, he smiled. He now had a plan. He looked at his mother, went to her and held her hands. 'Don't worry Mama. I'm not mad at you. I can understand how hard this was for you to tell me. I love you and nothing will change that. I'm not going to tell Dad that he's my dad.'

Geet looked at her son and ached for him. He was going to put himself in misery for her. She knew how badly he wanted a father; and now that he had one he wouldn't go to him. She was so unfair. But he understood. Things were going to be alright after all.

They slept in each others' arms that night. Geet did not have the heart to go back to her room. She wanted her baby beside her. Rano went and checked on them, smiled and shut the door.

Morning came soon enough. Sunlight poured through the window and the house was in chaos again. 'Mama, you know that next week I'm singing right? You better get off the hospital on Saturday or I'll never talk to you again.' He pouted. The following Saturday was a talent show in his school. He participated in that each year and was always among the top competitors. His break would begin right after the talent show.

Geet laughed hugging him. 'Of course I'll be there. Is that something to ask? The world's greatest to-be-singer is going to sing, how can I miss that?' Hearing that, Kunal chuckled. His mother always said that. He sobered up. 'Mama, you know Pinky right? She's going to be there.'

Geet tried to hide her smile. Pinky was her son's first crush. She was nine years old and was already beautiful. Kunal wanted to impress her. 'Don't worry Kunal. She'll love your singing. You're the most handsome man I've ever seen; let's see how long she can stay away from you.'

'And that's why I love you.' He kissed his mother's forehead. His school bus honked and Kunal ran to the bus with his bag dangling in his arms. He turned and waved.

Geet went to the hospital in the best possible mood. She looked dazzling in a lime green Punjabi choodidar and with a wide smile on her face.

'Geet.' She heard.

She turned and acknowledged him with her heart pounding. 'Maan.'

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Chapter 14

They stood staring at each other. Time held no meaning. There was nobody in this world but them. Nobody else held any significance. He was looking as wonderful as always in his white tracks and white sleeveless vest.

He is beautiful.

She is beautiful.

I've missed him.

I've missed her.

It all happened ages ago.

It all happened a blue moon ago.

I don't want to talk to you.

I'm not leaving without talking to you.

I hate you so much. You hurt me.

I still love you. I thought you hurt me. I ended up hurting both of us.

You're going to be sorry.

I am sorry.

I'll never forgive you.

Please forgive me.

They just stood looking at each other. They didn't realize when people passed by or what was happening. Maan wanted to talk to her and found that he couldn't find the right words. Is this what love did to a man? he asked himself. No, not love; but when he betrayed the woman he loved, then a man couldn't quite find the right words to explain himself.

'How've you been Geet?' He finally broke the silence. And cursed himself. Is that the best he could do? He was always witty, what happened to him? He was always good at starting conversations, how lame could he get?

Geet eyed him curiously after breaking from her trance. 'I've been well. You don't look too bad yourself.' She ached to touch him. She ached to tell him how good he looked. She also ached to slap him.

He saw that her face remained expressionless. So she had managed to change that about herself. A decade ago, he was able to figure out her emotions without her saying anything. Not anymore. A decade was a very long time. He sighed. This was going to be more difficult than he had expected.

'What are you doing here?' he managed to ask her. What the hell was wrong with him? Why was he fumbling with words?

She gave him one of her quick smiles and his stomach did a somersault. Her quick smiles had always driven him crazy. They came out of the blue and were very genuine. It was as if she had just shared a private joke.

'I was one of the doctors who operated on your mother. She's doing well, isn't she? I'm so glad she's getting better.' She looked at him as he did not reply.

'So you knew I was here? Anyways, thank you so much for my mother. I don't know what I would have done if anything had happened to her. I owe you one.' You owe me a lot Maan, you owe me a lot. Before that thought completed forming in her mind, she saw the emotional look on his face that showed how deep he was in with his mother. Her heart softened. She wouldn't let that happen, she thought close to a panic. She wouldn't let her heart soften. She'd become even more vulnerable to him than she already was. She couldn't allow that again. She hardened her heart again with great difficulty. She reminded herself why she nearly detested him. She wouldn't allow him to take advantage of her weakness.

'Yes Maan. I knew you were here. It's really sweet of you to pass by and ask me how I was. Now just go away. Somebody must be waiting for you. You're wasting their time. I'm a doctor and I need to get back.' Since when did she dimiss somebody like that? She had never dismissed him before.

'You were not like this a decade ago.' He muttered under his breath. Why did he have to change the things that were happening that blue moon ago? Why did his ego always come in-between their relationship? She was always the one to pacify things between themselves. This time it would be him. Long ago, she would take the blame for his wrong-doings. Now he was growing up. He was learning how to accept responsibility.

'Because you had not hurt me a decade ago,' she whispered to herself. She didn't mean for that to come out aloud. She needed to control her tongue. She was slipping things without realizing it. She was slipping her emotions that way.

'If you're done talking, I'd like to leave Maan. I have a lot of things to do. You're wasting my time. Have a good day and I really hope that she gets well soon.' With that she turned. He couldn't just let it go like that, he thought. This was not the confrontation he was wishing for or hoping for. He grabbed her hand and realized instantaneously the mistake he made. She whirled around her face flushed with anger.

'Don't you dare put your filthy hands on me, Khanna. What was between me and you was a long time back. Nobody gave you permission to put your hands on me. Just go to other women, you're probably just breaking their hearts. Just go find a s**t; she'll suit you the best. But who knows how you'll treat her all the same?' She was so furious that she hadn't realized what she was saying; she hadn't realized that she was almost screaming at him. She became furious with herself. She wouldn't show him how much she ached; how much he had hurt her. When the meaning of her words penetrated in her brain, she stood there mortified. No matter how close she was to detesting him, she had no right to say that. She had no right to insult him that bad.

He was getting mad at her. How could she talk to him like that? How could they have grown so distant? It's been your fault all along, he reminded himself. She has all the rights to say all she wants. He calmed himself down.

She just stomped to her cabin. Maan stood there watching her. He made a decision and followed her. Geet went to her desk and folded her hands. Her back was facing the door and she didn't see Maan standing near the door. She stood there staring at her hands thinking about their confrontation. Her back was slumped and she looked completely dejected. It hurt Maan to think that he was the reason for that posture; he was the reason for all the unhappiness in her life.

'Geet.' His voice broke as he said her name. He wanted to break down. He wanted to be held by her. He wanted to be comforted by her.

Geet heard the catch in his voice. She almost went to him to soothe his hurt away. He was hurting. She didn't know the reason but he was hurting. No, I will not be the latest woman in his list to fall for him again. I made the mistake once and I'm not going to repeat it. I have more sense than that, she thought. 'You don't understand it when I say I don't want to talk to you, do you?'

'I just want to say a few things Geet. Then you can decide what you want to do with me. Please give me a chance. Just one chance.' He wanted her arms around him. He wanted her to soothe him. He also knew that his wants were impossible at that time.

Geet wanted to slap him very hard for making her go through this again. She didn't want to feel miserable again because of him. She wouldn't let that happen.

'Maan, please leave me alone. I don't want my husband to come here and see you talking to me. Leave me and my family alone. Don't even think of splitting is because we have a kid, too. None of your dirty tricks are going to work.'

Hearing that, his world shattered.

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Chapter 15

He left the room silently. Geet stood there staring at the space he was in. She had known that she had needed to get out of that situation really fast and she just said the first thing that had entered her mind. It didn't take her long to find out why it was a mistake. If Maan ever found out about Kunal being his son, he would hate her for saying that Kunal was somebody else's son.

How could she have done that? She just stole Maan's right to Kunal. Tears welled up in her eyes again. She couldn't give herself more pain than she had already endured. She had to live with her self-respect all her life. She didn't find any respect for herself for lying. She made another decision and went running.

She saw him walking blindly towards the car park. Her heart did another flip-flop. So he did care if I was married, she thought. It oddly pleased her. She didn't want to be pleased but she was more than pleased. He did care. Even if only for his selfish reasons, he did care.

'Maan.' She shouted out.

Now what does she want? Hasn't she said enough? She is married. Now why is she coming running behind me? Won't her husband have a problem now? He thought bitterly. Her previous statement had completely rocked his life. He couldn't think of anything but her and what she had said. All the flashbacks came to him. The sweet Geet. The angry Geet. The beautiful Geet. His Geet. And now she was no longer his. She was somebody else's. For God's sake, she had another man's child! He was so angry with himself and her that he curled his fist and jammed it on the light post.

Geet saw this and gave a horrified shriek. Her mind was screaming just listen to me, as she ran towards him with the speed she didn't know she had. His fist was bleeding profusely. He still has that damn temper, she thought as she whirled him around. She saw that his eyes were red from tears and fury. She backed up. She had never seen the fury in his eyes. She didn't want to be the recipient for that fury but she was.

Maan saw her back away with a scared look. Damn, I've even managed to freak her out. What else do I need to do? His eyes softened as his eyes bore on hers. She wasn't too steady he realized. Before either of them could realize what he had done, he touched her cheek ever so lightly. Her eyes watered. She saw the blood smeared on them and grabbed his hand and took him inside the hospital.

She dismissed all the curious glances and took him to her cabin. She had a few basic things in her closet. She went there to get antiseptic and a bandage. She turned to him and motioned him to sit down. She saw that he was still very stubborn and refused to take a seat. She sighed. How was she supposed to tell him the truth if he was being so stubborn?

'Maan, sit down.' He ignored her again.

'Maan, I said sit down.' When he ignored her again, she pushed him down to the chair. He looked at her with a bewildered expression. Some things never change, he thought.

'Are you mad?' she asked him while cleaning his cut. 'What the hell were you thinking doing things like that? Have you seriously lost your mind? Who does that? I told you, you need anger management classes. But no, you just don't want to listen to me. You just never listen. One of these days, you'll seriously do something drastic. Have you ever thought of your mom or Annie? If they see you like this, do you think they'll be pleased? What if something would have happened to you?'

Maan smiled. This was the Geet he knew. The Geet that cared. Although she was married to somebody else, she still cared. Maan, don't think of things like that about a married woman, he reminded himself.

'Are you going to reply or what? What do you think I'm blabbering for?' she asked him getting angry.

He burst into laughter. 'So you do admit that you blabber! I told you all those times that all you do is blabber. You never listened to me either.' Geet felt a lot better listening to his laughter.

She pretended to get mad at him. 'Maan, you retard! You still make me sound like a fool! You say anything like that and I'll yank your bandage and make sure that your fist hurts.' She turned serious. 'Maan, why did you do that? Tell me the truth.'

'You want the truth? It's the truth you'll get. Because I couldn't bear the thought of you married to someone else. I couldn't think of you with someone other than me.'

'Maan, what was between me and you was a very long time ago. You cheated on me. I know that and you know that so don't even think of denying. One more thing before you can leave.' She took a deep breath. She had no idea of how he'd react. 'I'm not married. I said that so that you would leave me alone.' She said that in a rush.

Maan was ecstatic. She was not married! Thank God her conscience never let her lie. Thank God for that! He looked at her so lovingly that she felt a blush climb to her cheeks. She gave herself another mental jolt. She was doing it again. In those few minutes, she was in love with Maan all over again. But she would not give him the satisfaction of letting him know that! Then it was Maan's turn to get angry.

'Why the hell did you lie to me? Why did you have to lie to me? Do you know how much you hurt me? Do you know what I felt in those few moments? I thought my whole lifetime passed before my eyes. How could you do that to me? How could you Geet?'

Geet rose her voice. 'Do you know how I felt when you cheated on me? You actually had the nerve to cheat on me! You spineless jerk! If you didn't want me, you should have told me on my face. I would not disgrace myself by begging you to stay with me. And now you have the nerve to barge into my life again? Get lost Maan!' she was almost in tears when she was done with this.

Maan heard the hurt in her voice and cursed himself again. Maybe it was time to clear every misunderstanding between them. He went to he and it hurt him tremendously when she backed a step. She did not trust him. Why should she? He asked himself for the millionth time trying to cause as much pain to him as was possible. You did not do anything to gain her trust either, did you? You had come here to talk it through and look; you've nearly screwed it up again.

'Geet, I'm sorry. Please let me explain. Please.' Before she had a chance to protest, the decision was removed from her hands. Her beeper went off. She was called to the emergency room. Maan let her go.

'Maan, I don't want to see you again.' She repeated for the hundredth time. 'Leave me alone. You're coming in between my duties. I'm a good doctor Maan. Please don't take this away from me. You took everything else away from me, please let me stay with this. Please,' she begged quietly.

If she asked him even for his life at that moment with that look, he would have gladly obliged her. Staying away was a bigger problem. He wouldn't come in her way for some time, but the next time he would, would be a greater deal, he promised himself.

'OK Geet, you go. Have a pleasant day.' He smiled at her and patted her cheek. 'Bye.' He would let her go for now, but a time would come when she would not let him go. Surely such a time would come?

Why did her heart break when he said bye? She couldn't understand that so she smiled at him and left. She kept thinking of him though. She was thinking of all the moments they had spent a decade ago. When she thought of the day she was to go tell him that she was pregnant, she hardened her heart again. She would not think of him, she promised herself.

Little did she know that was close to impossible.

Nisha
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fabulous updates...i love it


Thank you Dreamy. Happy Independence Day!

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awesome upate read all the parts in one go continue soon
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