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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great update, so sam and sasha played the dirty game, what to see how geet helps him in this case.
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey by the way s tat camera on in maan's room????????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
I so so hate this silly Sam.
Wonder what she wants from Maan.
Looks like she has made a very good plan to trap him.
Hope Geet's camera system recorded it all.
Geet was so waiting for Maan and was in for a shock.
Good that Geet sensed something wrong
I am sure she will be able to figure out everything pretty soon
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
oh my god this sasha n sameera r 🤬
n maan has offed the camera also
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice
now geet can show the camera as evidence na
superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahhh... such a cliff hanger ending...
plz update sooonnn...
plz plz plz...
piiillliiizzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aahhh mujhe laga hi tha that these girls are planning something against my innocent sa bachcha Maan...

Sure Geet wont fall for the trick and she would stand by Maan...

And I'm glad that Geet has installed that camera in Maan's cabin... though Maan switched it off when he was leaving for home...but I'm sure these girls must have planned all these drama in his cabin when he had gone for a meeting at Kishangunj and it must have been recorded...

Now this will spoil all their plans... Shruti I hope aisa hi ho...and dare you hurt my Maaneet...



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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 33

Shocked Dev, Vikrant, Yash and Pratham rushed to KC, Geet was taken inside by NT, and she was more confused than shocked.

Inspector Sonny was standing outside KC with 4 constables, the guard was not allowing them in,

G: sir, you may be some Inspector, but you can not force me to open the locks, do you have any warrant?

I: you will teach me law s****, your Khurana boss is there; I have come to arrest him

G: sir, please mind your language, you should not use abusive language, I am talking decently to you,

I: decently my foot, I will take you also on charges of delaying and hiding the criminal

G: who ever you are referring to, sir, but you can not call him a criminal, until and unless proven so

I: your tongue is longer then your post

G: sir, whatever it may be but unless you produce some paper you are not allowed in, Khurana's as the citizen of this country have certain rights

Just then the four arrived; the Guard wished them and told them what was happening there

I: oye, Vikrant talk to me

V: Sonny?

I: remember I told you some day I will catch you red-handed, its ok that I did not catch you but I will not leave this small one of yours

V: Sonny you dare not touch him (holds his collar)

I: ha ha ha, I will see to it that he rots in jail for his lifetime

V: he has done nothing, and you also know Sonny he is not capable of such things

I: why, is he not Mard (man)?

V: SONNY!

Yash came in,

Y: Sonny, you know him since long, then how can you believe some random call

I: oh I did not see you Saale saab

Y: Sonny, mind your tongue, I am not your saala

I: yes, just because of that Maan, I will not spare him

Y: you will not do any such thing (anger in his eyes)

I: yes, I will not but aw will, Hari Ram, go to the Judge and ask him to sign the arrest warrant, I have called the sub inspector he has the papers ready

Yash and Vikrant were about to pound on Sonny, but Dev held them; he was surprised now, how come Sonny became a police officer, last when he met him 4 yrs back, he was an alcoholic, cursing Vikrant and Yash with his every breath, and holding the two for the ill fate of his fiance, and the truth was that the two have found her raped and lying on the road, they just out of humanity took her to the hospital for treatment, she even told this in her statement, but may be Sonny still thinks that they were the one's responsible; but where is she? Did she die?

Dev was thinking hard on how to amend things with Sonny, if he would have known that one misapprehension can lead to such hatred that instead of being grateful he was holding them responsible.

Dev asked the guard to open the lock

D: Inspector, you can

I: the whole Khurana men are here good, even the old man (he entered the premise) where is his chamber?

D: let me show you (he guided him inside, unable to understand who was this girl)

I: at least some one here has some brains, BTW you must be Dev, (Dev nodded) I met you then, but you supported them

D: they saved her life, they were not the one's who did all that, and even she said the same

I: you all can not fool me; I know Myra and Maan came in to visit her before the police took her statement

D: just because they were her classmates

I: yes and they used that to blackmail her emotionally

D: ok, think whatever you want to think, but there was a time once when you realized on Maan so much that you even twice allowed her to go to that trip with them just because Maan was also going

I: that was my mistake

D: time will tell

As they entered the cabin they saw Maan sleeping on the sofa, his clothes were in a disheveled state with a wound on his forehead, Sameera was sitting in the corner bundled up in a small ball her clothes were torn from many places, Sonny made a call and asked for lady constable and went near Maan, he opened his eyes with his fingers and noted Maan's dilated eyes, then he checked his position and clothes, he rubbed his forehead to check the wound

Then he turned to Sameera and approached her, as Sameera raised her face that was hidden Sonny was surprised

I: oh, interesting, Sam baby, no doubt that you called the police first instead of calling your B***** brother.

Sameera was shocked to see that Sonny was the Inspector, she not even in her dreams thought that he would have ended up being a police officer.

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Posted: 13 years ago
I wish kash ki maan ney camera off naa kiya hota but dis idiot did...

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