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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

ok forst things...awesome part...precap got me more confused..geet is chutki right...uff
secondly i understand everything u write...sorry for not liking or commenting at times as i dont get pc and using fone its difficult to comment...continue soon...

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Nice part
Loved it
Thanx for the PM

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savie_

@savie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

hey ..

luved it alot...

so dis is how dey met ..

no maaneet ..

koi baat nhi

thanks for the pm ..

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chandreyeeroy

@chandreyeeroy

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

😭ok so my dear leverne & preethia and all my readers see geet is chutki and neil loves geet but geet doesnt love him back yes both are phisically close because desires cannot be supressed but they are limited to kissing ang hugging but kiss also not on lips...she waited for a man who would luv her and she would love him bak all dis while and thus wen she found maan she knew he is d only 1 she can luv and agreed 4 marriage

so i hope after reading this update n focussing on wat is highlighted wid red ur doubts will be cleard n if still nt do not hesitste 2 ask in cmmnts...happy reading😃

part 19---

No she was not wrong at her part……………….she thought him to be her respect because respect is what is most precious to a girl

Yes neil was loved by his chutki but love without definition…………………dedication without want……………….they were inseparable

Neil called dev……………..LT. DEV SINGH KHURANA his one of best friends………………..yes in army it was difficult to make friends you always have a fear to loose them ,,,,,life for them was more unpredictable……………….black commandoes naa

The relationship he shared with his chutki was only known by dev

Neil-dev how are you yaar

Dev- ill call you back in a minute im entering a lift

After a minute neil called her to say that he had a meeting with one of airforce officers and that she has to be a part of it

Dev called back neil

Dev-im fine what about you

Neil-fine………………listen can we meet at caf lesly within half an hour for signing the petition and we can also discuss the bhumgaon issue since airforse and army will be required in that area

Dev- fine meet you at the caf

Maan called geet-

Maan-geet where are you

Geet- maan I just finished an addvertisement for buiscuit company

Maan-oh so are you free after that

Geet-ummm maan im sorry but I have a meeting planned up my sleeve

Maan- no jaan its ok work is immportant na I do understand

Geet- hmmm…………..thanxxx maan umm now its 10:30 na my meeting will be over by 12 so can we meet for lunch

Maan- wait let me check wheather I have lunch meeting or not………………….umm no but ill have to return by four

Geet-maan if we meet at 12 we will take an hour at maxim for lunch so you will be obviously free by four unlesss……………………..

Maan-yaa so till four you can book for our unless part

Geet-besharam kahike

Maan-you can tag me no.1 at besharmi

Geet-ok bye

Maan- bye geetu darling

Geet was about to yell but he cut the phone

At caf leslie----

Neil hugs dev

Neil-so finally we will be able to plan something for this bhumgaon

Dev-terrorists have attacked the houses and captured them in their own houses

Suddenly chutki comes from behind dev and hugs neil quiet unknown to the fact that dev is sitting there

Neil hugs her back and kisses her hair

Neil- chutki meet de………………….

Chutki turns and dev spits his coffee

Dev-geeettt

And dev stands up in a jerk geet turns back to find a shocked dev

She smiles and makes him sit and takes her seat

Dev-teri chutki is geet……………………..oh my god ,geet is your love,itsss geeet

Neil-yes its geet,teri hone vaali bhabhi geet

Geet-haan mai neil ke liye chutki hoon aur baaki sab ke liye geet,(she holds devs hand)dev I cannot reveal my identity but since you know it and you are going to be a part of my family so I think its best that you know everything about me………………….yes im neils love and neils life but im also going to be a part of maans life and infact I already am

Dev- I understand everything but are you marryind maanbhai for family and soceity or because you love him

Geet-im marrying for others cause they want me to lead a normal life but then I could have selected some random person and married him…………………….i don't know if I love your brother now or not because its half a month that I have met him ,but I surely know that if I can love somebody be somebodys wife it is only maan

Dev-bhabhi I respect you more for telling me truth

Geet- thankyou dev

Neil-im soo happy for you chutki that you got a loving family with tears in eyes

Dev-don't worry I never let your chutki face defeat we both will protecy her hai na neil

Neil nodded and the three indulged in a group hug

They discussed the project and both geet and dev drove towards KC to meet maan

Precap----

Maaneet and their besharmi

Shaadi exitment and arrival of muski rohan for their marriage and their surprise to maaneet

cmmnt na plss deariesss😭

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Very nice update. Now that u have clarified N & C relationship it is easier to understand them. But one thing confuses me. N loves C but C does not love him in the way N loves her. Agreed sometimes u care for a person to the extent u can kill or be killed for him/her. It is truly a nameless relationship. No name to it but still it exists. So far N has accepted this. But will he continue to do so after he sees her getting close and intimate with Maan? As fro Maan why is she not telling him about this dual personality of hers. After all she is not bound either by ethics or by law not to reveal this to him. And now that she is going to get married to him should she tell him all that happened to her and also tell him all about Neil? after all in a marriage transparency and honesty is very important. One other thing which I can't understand is why is she so intimate with Neil? Or should I say why does she allow N to be so intimate with her? has she not considered Maan's reaction to this intimacy? i mean she is a 28 tear old and not an innocent teenager that she does not understand what N feels for her. This part is a bit confusing to understand. so think this over and try to sort out these emotions dear.

Hope u did not mind what I have said but i only gave u my POV.

Thanx a lot for the pm.

PS: Sorry dear but i wrote the above before I read part 19. Now Geet's character is getting very much clearer. She is honest enough to admit that she does not know if she loves Maan or not but she does want to spend her life with him only. her honesty with Dev and Neil is commendable. But will she tell all this to Maan? Or is ur story going to revolve around this point. if so then it should be really interesting to read. Carry on dear and don't get upset we are there to give u our honest opinions ok. thanx for the pm.

Edited by Mehek25 - 14 years ago

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Tinu

@007jindal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

omg to geet is chutki. n she don't love maan.

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

awesome parts...

so chutki is geet, and neil and dev are friends
so poor maan, geet is just marrying him for family oh no I feel sorry for maan 😭

Edited by zaara2212 - 14 years ago

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

well quite clear now...

so she doesnt love maan yet but if one person she wants to spend her married life it will b maan...

sorry but i feel that keeping maan in dark she is cheating him and the love he has for her...

well security thing can b one reason but her dual life shudnt b only transparent to neil and dev but the person whom she is actually settling...well she admitted she doesnt love maan but when she says she loves him isnt that cheating and lying outright to him...

idk probably i might hv misinterpreted the point u want to say...i might b wrong in grasping wat u want to portray...

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

part 19 ... awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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chandreyeeroy

@chandreyeeroy

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Mehek25
Very nice update. Now that u have clarified N & C relationship it is easier to understand them. But one thing confuses me. N loves C but C does not love him in the way N loves her. Agreed sometimes u care for a person to the extent u can kill or be killed for him/her. It is truly a nameless relationship. No name to it but still it exists. So far N has accepted this. But will he continue to do so after he sees her getting close and intimate with Maan? As fro Maan why is she not telling him about this dual personality of hers. After all she is not bound either by ethics or by law not to reveal this to him. And now that she is going to get married to him should she tell him all that happened to her and also tell him all about Neil? after all in a marriage transparency and honesty is very important. One other thing which I can't understand is why is she so intimate with Neil? Or should I say why does she allow N to be so intimate with her? has she not considered Maan's reaction to this intimacy? i mean she is a 28 tear old and not an innocent teenager that she does not understand what N feels for her. This part is a bit confusing to understand. so think this over and try to sort out these emotions dear.

Hope u did not mind what I have said but i only gave u my POV.
Thanx a lot for the pm.

PS: Sorry dear but i wrote the above before I read part 19. Now Geet's character is getting very much clearer. She is honest enough to admit that she does not know if she loves Maan or not but she does want to spend her life with him only. her honesty with Dev and Neil is commendable. But will she tell all this to Maan? Or is ur story going to revolve around this point. if so then it should be really interesting to read. Carry on dear and don't get upset we are there to give u our honest opinions ok. thanx for the pm.

see anyone who knows about her dual life will fear for her and ask questions ...she could have handled tht but tht persons safety wud be questiond and thats not acceptable to her...i do understand ur point of transperacy in marriage but she will hide it for his well being...and neils love is onesided which both kno well so neil will never have a problem wid maan and about geet -neil closeness yes she allowed neil to kiss her(desires cant be hid na)but it is neil who told her tht she shud maintain distance and stay away from him for maan so neilsss a throughout +ve charectr

dear thnxxx soo soo very much 4 questioning i feel releivd 2 hv helped u ,thnxxx a lot dear😃