NEW FF ON MAANEET:NAINA TORE - Page 17

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Read all parts,WAS loving it UNTIL u ruined Geet's charactr.
I agree if Neil lovs Geet,its ok bt Geet's behaviour towards Neil????? I HATED IT,ACTUALLY.
Cant accept it to b ONLY respect

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

In any society,either its US or India;In any times,either past,present or future being a girl I dont get even Single point to say that Girl knowingly encourages a person whom she doesn't lov...
UNACCEPTABLE FOR ME.
Comment is on wat I understood from ur ff

Part 20-

As maan was waiting for her-----

Maan-7 minutes…………………uff she is 7 minutes late

He was still muttering under his breath when geet reached maan

Geet-im sorry but this time its not me but the traffic which is to be blamed

Maan-huh oh no I don't have any problem geet

Geet raised her eyebrow

Maan-well yes I was only thinking of giving you a piece of mind

Geet-and………..

Maan-time related………………..umm you know me well or are you a speacialist in pcycology you know like part time job and all

Geet suddenly held his hands which were on the table and asked him with a pleading face

Geet-maan can you please cancel the meeting

Maan concerned-geet what happened you suddenly

Geet- maan please I have a lot to tell you

With that geet placed a note of 500 under maans cup of coffee and pulled him out of the resturant

Maan-ggeeettt whats wrong…………………

Geet placed her hand on his lips and signalled him to keep quiet

Geet-driver ji aap KM me vaapis jayie aur dadi se kahiega ki saahab kal vaapas ayenge

She called dev

Dev-bhabhi kya……………….

Geet- dev,me n maan are going to lonavela and will be back till tommorow………………remmember my parents don't know anything about this and dadi knows that has gone to lonavela but doesn't know about me

Dev- bhabhi par……………….

Geet-shadi se pahle yun milna shayad badon ko acha na lage magar mughe maan se kuch baat karni hai……………..unhe apne baare me kuch batani hai

Dev-geet tum bhai ko kya………….

Geet-dev don't worry we both will be fine

Maan after hearing the conversation btw geet and dev knew that she was disturbed and wanted to find solace in him

Geet after driving for 3 hours reached lonavela an off side place famous for sceneric beauty mainly having hills and small waterfalls with a dam.

Maan-geet ham lonavela me ja kaha rahe hai

Geet parked the car outside an empty cottage

Maan-geet yeh ti khali hai aur yeh kiska hai

Geet opened the door and maan was astonished to see it was a cozy cottage with a small cot and a table inside,outside was a varandah and apart from the only room it had a kitchen and a washroom………………………..the whole size of the cottage was not even half of khurana mansions kitchen

Maan was now anxious and went to the varandah to see the scenery outside……………..

Geet came and stood beside him-maan you look like a small kid exploring the cottage

Maan- how I wish I turn into a kid

Geet-hmmm……………….kash waisa hota

Maan-geet congratulations by the way

Geet twitched her eyebrow

Maan- for breaking your maun vrat

Geet slowly came into his embrace and said

Geet-maan mai yaha apko ek maksat se layi hun mai apko apne baare me batane layi hun………………………pata nahi mai apko jo batane vaali hun uske baad aap mughe apnana chahenge bhi ya nahi…………………….magar agar hum ek nayi zindagi shuru karenge to apko mere bare me janne ka haq hai…………………………………

Maan-geet mai tumhe chodne ka nahi soch sakta ……………………………………..tum jo bolna hai mughe dil kholke bol sakti ho

Geet-maan wo

Precap-what is geet going to tell maan

hii guys...aftr 2 days finally my laptop got well so heres a very small update bcoz with my lappy evn i ws nt well...i promise d next update will follow soon

sekhonpuneet-im so srry tht i cud nt update d main prt nw bt in next update geet will tell maan n all my dear readers evrything

lovely update dear...precap...what is geet gonna tell maan..pls take care of urself also..

hii freinds n im srry tht i ws nt able 2 pm u d link 2 lst prt actually my health is goin down a bit n im feeling weak...i hope dis update clears maans thought n also ur doubts tht geet doesnt love maan...plss dis n next update r very imp ...so if u all have any doubt plss i beg u 2 ask

part 21----

Geet-maan,I have always lived my life on the edge

Mughe samajhna shayad apke liye mushkil ho kyun ki mere kai roop hai

Zindagi me maine aisi kai imtehaan diye hai jiski aap soch bhi nahi sakte

Kabhi na chahte hue,kabhi majboor hokar

Chupte chupate mai ek aisi zindagi jine lagi hun jise na hi mai chod sakti hoon na hi mai use apna sakti hoon

Dhoke,thokar yeh sab to jaisi ab mamuli si baat hai mere liye

Aap sochte honge ki har ek ki life me struggles aur pareshanian to hoti hi hai

Parantu maan meri zindagi me roshni ka dariyan ki disha hi alag hai

Maan held her tighter

Maan-geet kya hua shona baat kya hai tum pareshan ho………………………aur rahi baat tumhe janne ki samaghne ki tumhe apnane ki to uske liye to poori umar pari hai tumhe mughse jo baat kahni hai use saaf saaf bina koi bhi man me sankoch rakhe kah do

Geet held maas hand and pulled him inside the cottage as maan seated himself on the cot she sat on his lap side ways and placed her hesd on his chest while maan combed her tresses with his long finger gently patting her back

Geet- maan aap yeh shaadi kyun karna chahte hai ???

Maan-geet yeh kaisa sawal hai

Get looked up at him with her innocent face

Maan understood that she was in some deep dilema

Maan-geet……………..maine mere zindagi me paise to bahut dekhe hai magar un paison aur unse judi hui zimmedariyon ko samhalte hue mughe khushi,rishton in sab baaton ki kadar karne ka waqt hi nahi

Chaha hai bahut apne parivar ke saath waqt bitaun chaha haii…………

Anvesha aisi to miss padhaku hai,dil ki achi hai magar wo gucci ki bag ya veromoda ka dress milne pe uske chehre par jo muskaan khilta hai wohi muskaan mughe uske prati mere zimmedariyon ka ehsaas dilvata hai kahne ko to hum bhai behen me pyaar hai magar maine hamesha zimmedari puri karne ki sochi to ab kyun na jane yun lagta hai ki pyar bhi kahi koi zimmedari hai

Dadi hamesha ek maa ki tarah hai mere liye, haan mughe unka saath chahie aaj mai jo hun unki parvarish ke liye hun……………….magar unki mere se expectation hai jo mughe meri zimmedari ka yaad dilati hai………tab mughe pyar bhi mere zimmedari ek hissa lagta hai

Dad ko jab heart attack aya tha tab unki yeh halat nahi thi ki vo kaam ka pressure sambhal paye aur phir us din se unki health hamesha down hi rahta hai…………………mai dad ke itna close nahi ho paya kyun ki mere birth ke baad ke initial years me dad was always busy with khurana constructions ,dad ko tabhi empire khada karna tha hamari har chahat poori karni thi……………………….dad ko dekha hai maine adhoora mahsoos karte hue mom ke bina,tab chota tha to samaghta nahi tha magar aaj janta hun samajhta hun unki soonapan

Dev was always and will always be selfsufficient sahi mayine me agar kisine mera saath diya hai hamesha mujhpar vishvaas kiya hai to vo dev hi hai aur shayad tumne notice bhi kiya hoga ki isliye hum dono ki understanding level match kart hai

I was born to be an industrialist ……………..muche bachpan se pata tha ki KC mughe sambhalni hai

Business management ka second year tha jab dad ke heart attack ke baad maine KC ki gaddi aur saari zimmedari apne sar leli at the age of 21

Mere saare class mate jab class bunk karte tab mai baithke padhai karta kyun ki mughe zimmedari uthani thi

Jab wo log girlfreind leke ghumte to mughe mere ghar ki riti rivaaz bandhi rakhti mere sanskaar mughe rokte

Dosti isliye mughse door hi rahti

Geet,yoon to zindagi haseen hai magar mai use chah ke bhi apna nahi pata

Kisi par chah ke bhi bharosa nahi kar pata

Haan meri jaisi zindegi shayad bahut log chahte honge magar use chahna aur use jeena do alag baat hai

maan slowly kissed her fore head and leaned bak on the bed rest and geet made herself comfortable on him by streching on his length,she looked up at him and looked deep into his eyes and blinked

maan encircled his hands around her waist and pulled her up so that she could noe be at the same level as him ansd slowly pecked her on the lips

she smiled happily and laid back on his chest

maan-geet society expects me to marry…………………dad n dadi ko bahu aur dev,anni ko bhabhi chahie

khurana parivaar ko uski maan maryada aur shobha ko age badhane ke liye ek bahu chahie

geet………………..sheela,meela,geela,cheela……………………umm nahi no not geela ……………hehe…………….

In me se koi bhi mrs. khurana ho sakti thi koi bhi in zimmedariyon ko nibha sakti thi

Magar geet mai intezaar to apni mishti ki kar raha tha jo sabse pahle meri patni hoaur phir kisi aur ki bahu

Geet tumhaari zimmedari bhi meri hai magar mughe aise kisi ki intezaar thi jo mughe apna maane,mughse pyaar kare,jise dekhte hi muskaan jhalke ,jo maasoonm ho magar uski understanding aisi ho jo mughse match kare

Geet mughe koi aisi chahie thi jiski zimmedari meri hon aur meri uski ,jo jab mai toot jau to mughe samhale

Geet-maan aap mughe dhoond rahe the ya koi anmol ratna …………………….maan mai apke baat se sahmat hun mai bhi apke liye yahi apne sache dil se banna chahti hun………………………..nahi sambhali jaati hai ab khud ko chahti hun ki zindagi ki is safar me koi mere har kadam me saath ho……………………jab apko dekha to apnapan mehsoos kiya lekin jab apko jaana to yeh mahsoos hua ki mai agar kabhi khud ko luta sakti hoon to wo sirf aap honge

Maan-geet hame mile hue adha mahina hi hua hai……………………ab isme pyaar hona is not realistic par maine yeh zaroor samjha hai ki wo tum hi ho

Geet-ji maan yeh to sach hai ki pyaar ka definition mai bhi nahi de sakti magar use kabhi jaan pavoongi to sirf apse

Maan-To ab mere mishti ke man me koi sawaal hai ab aisi koi baat hai jo meri mishti ko…………………….

Geet-haan maan hai ab bhi kuch apka mere baare me janna zaroori hai……………..

Maan-hmmm bolo mera bacha

Geet smiled and looked at his eyes

Geet –decide maan ki mai apko maan bulau ya papa

Maan-I think maan hi better rahega

Geet- maan wo

Then maan roled over to place geet on top of him and silenced her by a kiss

Maan- geet I love loving you it's a new feeling we both cherish ………………duniyaan ki itni serious matter ko sambhalte hue jab achanak se tumhara khyal ata hai to chehre me ek muskaan cha jaati hai………………I know you want to talk more but I also realise that you are stressed so just relax on me now and go to sleep we will talk tommorow morning

Precap-next prt geet confrontation

cmmnts de do mere jaan...is bichari bachi pr cmmnts deke rahm karo n yaa actually iv dis habit of writing extraa shudh hindi so if u wnt ill lessen hindi n update more on eng

oh lovely updates. i was so missing ur updates na.
hope geet ells eveyhing abt her to maan n maan understand's her

awesome ... loved part 20 n 21 ...