Maaneet.. Just like Heaven UPDATING - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
waitin for an update 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey lv i m going 2 bed its abt to 2:30 am got to go...will read ur update later...but do update...
lv u...
chao
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Posted: 14 years ago
here is the update
thankyou all for your support
guys plz comment and like as it motivates me
last whole wk i did not want to update as i know not many ppl are interested.
but here i m back again with an update but with no expectations..😭😭

Part 5:

Maan slowly opened his eyes .looked at the ceiling.he blinked and a smile crept on his face

I was dreaming..phew but what a weired dream per job hi ho acha hua ankh khul gai me to aram se apne kamre me so raha ho.. ouch mere back me dard ho raha hai thori dair or do jata ho aik din office time pe nahi jao ga to kia ho jae ga akhir.

He closed his eyes and turned to his side. He felt a slight breeze at his side. He opened his eyes

Ahhh he sat up straight.there she was lying comfortably on his bed sleeping on his arm.

Kia hua bro dev came running. He was sleeping on the couch..

Ha? Maan looked at him bewildered. And then at geet who was by now getting up. Lazily.

Kia maan kitna chilate ho aap.?

Bro kuch bolo na kia hua?

Ha ha bolo kia hua sari neend ka maza kharab ker diya

He gulped kuch nahi

Dev nodded his suspicion was getting strong

Jhoot jhoot jhoot sach bolo chekhe q

Maan ignored her

Jhoot bole kawa kate… geet started singing

Tum chup raho he said to geet

Me kab bola bro.

Ha bolna bhi mat. Tum mere kamre me kia ker re ho.

Paglo ki tarah act karo ge to bechara aap pe nazar to rakhe ga

Geeettt he shouted

Kia? Dev asked

Kia ?

Aap ne abhi geet kaha?

Nahi nahi mene kab kaha me ne kaha meat ha meat mujhe meat khana hai nashte me.

Meat… breakfast me… to itna chilla k q kh re hai

Wo wo umm mujhe bohat zor ki bhook lagi hai isliye… tum khare q ho ja k dadima ko bolo k wo banwa de.

Ji bro he left.

Tum yaha mere bed pe kia ker rahi thi

So rahi thi nazar nahi ata kia?

God ye larki mujhe pagal ker de gi.. so phir yaha me hi chala jata ho.

He went into the bathroom.took a shower and was now drying his hairs when he saw her in the mirror.

What the h*** tum yaha mere bathroom me kia ker rahi ho.

Bahir bore ho ri thi..

Mene bathroom lock kiya tha.

To?

She said casually

That means keep yourself outside.

Oh well I did not know I just used the wall that is easy to use.

Maan just rolled his eyes.

You have some nice body. maan immediately looked down he was wearing towel only

Ahhh

Phir checkh

Whats up with you jab daikho cheekh marte rhte ho..

He hurriedly wore his shirt and ran down to the dinningroom.

Dev and dadima looked at him bewildered running madly closing his button.

Baite aaj aap thk hai

Ha dadi ma wo bohat bhook lagi hai to isliye

Hmm me serve karti ho aaapko

She put some food in his plate.

Wow itna sara khana akele akele khao ge maan

Maan smacked his head.

Me kaha bhaito? She asked innocently.

Mere sir per. He said sarcastically

Aap k sir pe kia dadi and dev asked him

Okay

Nothing he smiled goofily

She climbed up and sat on his shoulders.

Aaoooch what is this.

Khudi to kaha sir pe bhaito..

Maan almost cried out loud. You are not exactly that light or feathery.

So what ab to me yahi bahito gi.

Baite aap ki tabiat to thk hai..

Ji dadima.

He started eating khana and geet started doing her time pass.

You know what maan your hairs are like forest.itne thick

Ye baal hame de de thakur…

Maan chocked on his water.

Kia hua bro

kuch nahi . I m done

But baite aap ko to bohat bhook lagi thi.

Ur gai.

He was about to get up when he realized geet was still on him and he cdnot move

Ab utho mujhe uthna hai

Bro mere uthne ka aap k uthne se kia taluq hai?

PRECAP:
office😆😆😆😆😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
me first
ossum dear
i m just lughing so much
i cant take it anymore
omg !!!!!!!!!
u are hilarious dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
but only one can we get onemore pls
i want more of this
omg ! pls dear
dont mind ha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aha poor Geet keeps torturing Maan!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

but only one can we get onemore pls

i want more of this
omg ! pls dear
dont mind ha

thankyou so much
i wd love to give double updates but everytime i update almost 250 pm and hardly 40 or 50 cmments
aise me dil nahi chahta or mhnat karne ko
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan
love this part
geet angel se devil ban gai he
update sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!!!!
Bechare ko bikul pagal kar dey gi!!!
one more plzzz
Thanks for pm
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
BY THE WAY TUMNE MUJE ISKE PEHLE WALE UPDATE MEIN PM KYUN NAHI KIYA???
ab mujhe kya sapna aayega k tumne update diya hai u know what i had to read both parts today
well the update was awesome
bechara maan ... geet se meat...transition achha tha
but next time if u don't pm me then i will not talk to u
love-Piya

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