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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update ...

cntnue soon..eagrly wtng

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Posted: 14 years ago
cant wait for nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update boss ji
i knw i m late to comment but u knw the problem na

this is a very good fiction yaar
i loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Laughing my heart out
boot orientation hahahahah
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update dear...it was awesome continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏awesome update👏
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey all here is the next update
i had thought od updating daily but the response i m getting now is not that motivating seriously out of 230 pm i get only 69 likes and even less replys so i wont be updating daily now.

Part 4:

Maan spent a sleepless night in his room and got himself discharged in the morning

In the car dev was driving while Maan sat next to him

As soon as the car left the hospital he exhaled.

Phewww

Dev gave him a curious look. What happened bro

Nahi kuch nhi nahi.

Dev just shooked his head

Yes use nahi pata chala mere jane ka. Lagta hai kal apni orientation me ziada hi busy ho gai ye bhi acha hai he said the last part loud

Kia acha hai?

Acha ha wo road ha road acha hai.. ha me road ki baat ker raha tha.

Road.. he smirked bro waise wo larki kon thi? Aapk sath waha accident me

Konsi larki me kisi larki ko nahi janta mere sath koi nahi tha

Kuch to gar bar hai yaha pata to me laga k hi raho ga.. he thought

He closed his eyes and leaned back on the seat

But just then he heard loud music.

Akela mujhe chor k chala hai kaha

Me peche peche aao gi tu jae ga jaha

Tu jae ga jaha mujhe pae ga waha

Sun zara sun zara to chala hai kaha

Maan instantly remembered Geet.

Dev gane band karo tumhai pata hai mujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai

Konsa gana bro me ne kuch nahi lagaya

But then he heard the unmistakable sound of horns and the music grew even louder

Ufuu dev to is gari se to dor niklo itna loud music lagaya wa hai is pagal ne itni suba subah or ye itna shor q hai iski gari ka

Dev checked the road there was no other vehicle on the road.

Bro yaha hamare ilawa koi nahi and besides subah 7 baje I don't think koi aye wo bhi Sunday ko

Maan atonce opened his eyes and sat up

He looked to his right there she was sitting on the side cart attached to the motorcycle

The vehicle was decorated with balloons and ribbons and the ghost whose ear fell was driving it he wawed at him

Arey maan window niche karo.

Geet maan was almost stuck to the window. Dev was looking at him

Bro aapne kia kaha? Kia dekh re hai waha?Geet ko hai

Nai kuch bhi to nahi tum gari tez chalao actually nahi gari rook I wanna drive

Nahi bro aap abhi hospital se aye hai

Mene kaha na jab me kaho gari rk daina

As soon as he saw geet's motorcycle was left behind he asked dev to stop

Dev came out to sit on passenger seat while maan just jumped onto the driver seat

Pakki garbar hai kuch yaha bro or aise uchal kod….

Maan was adjusting the mirror when he saw geet's bike approaching

Oh shit fasten your seat belt

Ji?

He drove like a maniac

Per bro ghar ka rasta dosri taraf hai

Hmm

Wo I want to do morning walk

Ohkay…

He drove up to the huge bunglow entered it and then exited through the back enterence the bunglow was abandan so no body saw what he did

What was that bro

Shortcut

Oh..

he checked she was not coming behind…

He reached his home..

As he got out of the car

Bro what happened to your morning walk

Oh ha ye morning hai or ye me walk ker raha ho tum bhi karo its good for health

As he started walking inside

But as soon as he stepped inside tum?

Kitne question pochte ho. Mujhe to laga aapko dair lage ge ane me? Koi kaam tha shaid apko to me sedha ghar hi agai

How did you know k me kaha rhta ho

Well I have got some powers you know

As in?

Just kidding used gps wo sunder ki bike pe laga wa tha

Sunder kon?

Wohi jo mere sath tha bike pe. Bechara pata hai pchle 100 salo se yahi hai aaj tak yad nahi aya k use kia kaam tha..

Pata hai per ahi bohat acha

Sundry se payar karta hai. Sundry bhi per wo shakuntala se darti hai. Agar shakuntala ne peter ko bat diya to.

Maan could no longer control it that was the earless gho… but he could no longer finish the sentence as he fainted. Dev came in time to hold him.

He took him to his room .

PRECAP:
tum yaha mere bathroom me kia ker rahi ho?
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow me first to comment
after a long time again i m the first to comment on ur ffs
so i m very happy
lovely update boss ji
Edited by ana56 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome update!!!
Maan bechara...Geet naye kiya hasr kar diya hai
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Keep rocking
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
Me second!😆 Awesome update! Maan made a shortcut through a abndoned bunglow to escape the bhoot 🤣
Akhir koi to hai jo MAan ko dara sakta hai!

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