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Posted: 13 years ago
part 6
ROFL...
the explanation she gave for her weight was funny...
Geet is gonna accompany Maan to the office...
wahan kya tamasha khada karegi pata nahi...
am loving this...
cont soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
can u open a thread to list all ur ffs and add in ur signature?
that will be more easy...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

can u open a thread to list all ur ffs and add in ur signature?
that will be more easy...

thankyou so much yes i have a thread or that
i will add that in my signature
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Posted: 13 years ago
boss im relly eager to read the next part also ...😃
the precaps making me more curious...😃
wonderful job boss...😃
we love u r work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will be updating soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update soon samra
wating ... wating ... wating...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arushi_05

plz update soon samra

wating ... wating ... wating...

yar likh li hai update pics dhond ri ho sath post krne k liye
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi all
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Part 7:

She sat on his table and started putting stuff from her bag onto the tables precisely on his blue print..

Geet kia ker ri ho ye imp paper hai.

Arey gir bhi gya to konsa aapke ilawa kisi aur ko nazar ayga. Aik to darte bohat ho aap

Maan rolled his eyes. He was actually curious to see what she was gonna eat..

He bent forward to get a closer look but dev barged in at the moment.

What exactly are you doing bro as maan was almost leaning on the table.

Umm kuch nahi why are u in my cabin

Bro meeting k liye dair horaha hai me aapko bolne aya tha k me is meeting me nahi ja sakta as I have to go do some imp work

Hmm

bro aaj to aapke problem ka solution nikal k hi raho ga
And he left for the meeting

She took out her khana a silvery white fiber like things came out of the box

She ripped open the box to see if there was anything else in there

Nooo ye kaisa khanaa hai wo chameli to kh ri thi sab se acha khana yahi hai.

She was cursing chameli like anything..

Ab me kia khao'.

Mera bhi damgh kharab ho gya hai me apni meeting ki tayari krne ki bajae bhooto ka khana daikh rat ha

Geet pagal hai or aik din ye larki mujhe pagal ker de gi

Ku ku ku me us waqt waha se guzar raha tha jo is pagal se takar ho gai. Maan singh khurrana ka mazaq bana k rakh diya hai.he was not at all concentrating on the meeting something very new to him.

Geet barged in the conference hall crying loudly maan looked at her

Agai phir se.

She came straight towards him and sat on his lap

Maan controlled himself from saying anything cuz if he says ppl wd think he is crazy.

The client asked him a question but he could not hear him cuz of the loud wailing sound she was making

Atlast he put his hand on his mouth and whispered geet plz I m in a meeting or kuch nahi to atleast shor kerna to band karo I cant hear them cuz of your wailing.

She silenced immediately and hugged him tighter.

He managed the situation but he could not stop himself from thinking about her. She was no longer making any noise just sitting on his lap hugging him . he could still hear her occasional sob and her soft breaths near his neck were making it difficult for him

Gentlemen I think the blue print is insufficient how about we meet again tomorrow and finalize the deal.

Per mr khurrana we find them adequate

Nahi umm wo you don't about the minor details or me apne kaam me koi problem nahi chahta so plz

Jaisa aap kahe mr khurraana aapka yahi professional attitude to hame aap k pass le ker aya hai

Aadi came to his side.

Sir per prints to pure hai

Aadi clients ko bahir tak chor k ao. As they are our guests so make sure in k stay or dosri needs achi tarah se puri ho . fix an appointment for tomorrow. I need to work on these prints.

Ji sir.

The clients got up and waited for maan to get up but he did not .

Wo mujhe abhi yahi per kaam krna hai I don't want to be distaracted.

The clients left and so did the staff.

Geet he called her softly.

She was still sobbing and hugging

Wo chale gae sab

Ab bolo kia hua why were u crying

I m sorry mere wajah se aap ko itna tension mil raha hai. Mujhe yaha nahi ana chahiye tha. I should accept that I m not alive any more. And she started crying again

Shshhh geet aisa nahi khte you are alive . very much alive .

No I m not . me baqi logo ki tarah mar q nahi gai why do I have to stick to this world and see myself dying every day. I m ruining your life too.

You are not ruining my life ohkay just tell me kia hua.

She narrated the incidence of earlier today when she did not like the khana she left for hospital to check how well she was doing. But the doc's convo left her speechless.

I don't know why mr khurrana is larki ko bachana chahte hai she has got no life left in her.kitni bar batao unko k there is no hope but her bar he say she will wake up one day.just do your work.

Just then dev came in .are mr dev khurrana aap yaha.

Is she the girl jo bro k sath accident me thi?

Ji.

She is geet right? How is she now?

In a coma no hopes for her per mr khurrana is persistant he is breaking the rules of hospital but what can we say he is the trustee. We are not allowed to let any such pt stay in hospital for more than a day and she s been here for 2 wks now. She is just occupying the bed

Zuban sambhal k doctor the girl you are talking about is very special. Arrange for 2 day and night nurses and 2 daily visits of doctors and all the things she will need. I m gonna take her home. Now hurry up and i need best medical facilities for her and no body should know about her other than me and bro mind it or u can start looking for some othe job

Ji mr khurrana.

I am sorry bhabhi you have to come to your house like this but I cant see these doc insulting you like this. And he took her to the out house.

I am now even burdening your family. They think I m your wife or girlfriend.

Well dev did the right thing . I myself was thinking of doing it and you are not a burden on me . but this crying wailing geet is a buden I like my sharaarti nat khut geet. Can you bring her back

She nodded no

Why

Cuz I cant eat and I m so hungry

But you had your food

Yeah try eating that mujhe spicy chaske wal khana chahiye daise style

He took his phone ordered nakul to make such khaana at home asap

Lo khush khana ban gya no you can eat

But how will I eat your khana

Oh mene to socha hi nahi

unless She smirked evily

What are you thinking

You will find out soon plzzz ghar chalo abhi

He smiled ok.

PRECAP:

#1 Geet having dinner oops😳 maan havng dinner oops😳 both having it but how..😉😉😉😉

#2 bechara maan aik taraf geet dosri taraf dev dono ki aik hi manzil teasing and irritating maan😆😆😆😆
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Edited by ssch - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love it...maan taking care of geet...i mean asking the doctors to treat her in the best possible way...

n then the precap...i guess the real teasing sessions will now start...

continue soon n thnxxx

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