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Posted: 14 years ago

#541

great part! hey i'll bee gone for like 2-3 monthes

keep pming me tho please

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abina03

@abina03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#542

brilliant update

Magicia , you cleverly distracted the main issue👍🏼

good job

but i am still 😲

waiting for the coming up

for the second part

i simply love you

nothing else to say. i am touched

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#543

excellent update... eagerly waiting to read the next part...please continue soon...

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#544

cant wait fkor maan to come and take his geet with him!! i hope he will find her!! xontinue sooon dear!! waiting for more!!

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Seher

@Speechless

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Posted: 14 years ago

#545

you are very much successful in explaining ur view n Geet's tooLoved the Update...i m waiting for MAAN to come and rescue his ... Hope will accept her after all this

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Simran Kaur

@DDbiggestfan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#546

Lovely part dear. U explained it very well.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
Thanks 4 pm.

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#547

Hey magicia, i finally caught up with all the parts. This is an AWESOME story, so different and unique. Oh v gonna have our supermaan back, good. I totally get ur explanation on Geet's remorse and punishment attitude, the psychology behind it, will let her move on. Though it was still sad. As i was reading all in one go, i was like this ff is kabhi khushi kabhi gham. Now that v hav seen khushi, then gham, now again is the time for khushi but no more gham pls. Waiting eagerly for next update. Thanks 4 the pm. Now off to catch up on ur other ff.