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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Part - 3

so Maan is in coma and Geet is taking full advantage of him

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Part - 4

After that he all hers - hmmm

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

PART - 5

nice part, revealing geet's misery and how he got the job as NURSE

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: sldeeps
Part -1

hey u...u got Geet married when she is just 7 yrs old😡

anyways the story is intriguing...will comment after reading next parts

Not me Yar Her Parents .. 😕 But i send her maasi.. to save her .right👏

Originally posted by: sldeeps
Part -2

i am too young to comment on this

Ya ya ..baby cute ...hi hi thats why ur Geet always push Maan before he can *shh* ahem ahem uff Maan ko kithna thadpaathee hi thum ..see ..i am very nice ..gave maan what he wants 😉

Originally posted by: sldeeps
Part - 3

so Maan is in coma and Geet is taking full advantage of him

Yup that what she believes😭 , she not yet realized Maan's involvement in it😳

Originally posted by: sldeeps
Part - 4

After that he all hers - hmmm

Yes .. he is only hers

Originally posted by: sldeeps
PART - 5

nice part, revealing geet's misery and how he got the job as NURSE

a doc always will be a poor nurse lol thats why they need nurses ,,

Edited by magicia - 14 years ago

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Dilsay
where r you Sweety.????.😆
Me waiting for the update...😍

Me will update after Dusk Indian time may be after 11 only i can type Holy Ramadan ... Me in Pious Mode Now LOL

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: sukklover

i just

...😊

4 u dear...🤗🤗🤗

lov,❤️

Tama

Thank You Tama

Originally posted by: alamuabi

poor geet fighting herself inside..4 what happened...dont worry ..afterall its MSK he will get back u ...as she is his love 2day...just waiting 4 him 2 recover 4m coma...👏👏👏

Wicked Me Dont want him to come out of Coma Now ..😳.u can take it as teaser ..LOL

Originally posted by: -dia-
Congrats on new FF🥳

Interesting & different one ...loved it!!

So Maan is in Coma,but he can feel it ...whether they have fallen in love???

Ps: Sorry for very late comments & thnx for PM.

Happy That You Liked It

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Tanu

@ytanuja

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Awesome story, cant wait for more.

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abina03

@abina03

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

congrats for new FF

I read all five part

beautiful story line

loved it

hope you update soon

thanks for pm

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

finally complete all parts
all r awesome , brilliant
loved them
geet married in 7yrs but saved
maan is in coma stage but feel from in side what is happening
after the incident geet is feeling sad but maan want it and it's both of their wish fulfilled but geet doesn't know
continue soon

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
finally complete all parts
all r awesome , brilliant
loved them
geet married in 7yrs but saved
maan is in coma stage but feel from in side what is happening
after the incident geet is feeling sad but maan want it and it's both of their wish fulfilled but geet doesn't know
continue soon

bingo ..exactly ...thanks for commenting