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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Very nice part.
Maan reached out to Geet
But she was already drifting away.
Loved the way he held on to her and breathed life back.
Now that he knows what she means to him he doesnt even
want to move an inch away from her.
His love will surely revive her back to health
Waiting for the next part.

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@SoIWasSaying

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

just came accross ur os

it was prety emotional an really wow

pm me with future updates

thanks

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libra25

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#263

plz update this soon...
plz continue soon

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libra25

@libra25

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#264

kahan ho yaar..
waiting eagerly for an update..
plz plz plz update soon

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Deva

@jwalamukhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Part 9

Finally doctors gave up and permitted him to stay with geet...maan sat beside her holding her hand tightly and kept looking at her...without even blinking his eye for a second...seconds became minutes...minutes became hours...hours became days...whole one week passed...maan never left geet even for a second in that whole week...neither he slept nor he ate..all he did was staring at geet continuously waiting for her eyes to open...

Day by day geet's condition began to improve..her breathing and heart beat became regular and normal...but her eyes were closed as if someone locked them saving some precious image in them...occasionally there were movements in her body...but consciousness was not fully regained...

Maan's condition became worse...deprivation of sleep and food made him weak...But he didn't gave up...he sat beside geet holding her hand...looking at her...Doctors got worried about maan...they asked adi to convince maan to eat something...adi nodded and came near maan...adi couldnot control his tears after seeing maan's condition...

"sir..." he called..in a low voice...

but maan didn't respond...

adi slowly approached maan...and touched his shoulders...gently...

maan slowly turned his head and looked at adi...his eyes were blood red in colour with dark circles around due to lack of sleep...

adi bent on his knees...and started crying..." sir..yeh kya haal banakar rakha hey aapne...agar aap ko kuch hojatha tho geet ka kya hoga? "

Maan remained silent...

adi wiped his tears...and stood up...he came near maan and tried forcibly to take maan out of the room...In that process...geet's hand slipped away from maan...

That moment...that brief moment when maan left geet's hand...maan felt as if his heart was ripped into pieces...he couldn't bear the pain of separation from her even for a second...he screamed "geet" in fear of losing her...and immediately held her hand tightly...kissing her hand all over...adi couldnot understand what happened before him...he kept looking at maan in shock...

Maan didn't stop kissing geet's hand...he kissed her hand madly...saying...aloud.."i love u geet..i love u geet..."....the silence in ICU was replaced with echoes of " I love u geet " from maan..

The scream of maan ...made all the doctors and hospital staff to run towards ICU...They stood speechless looking at maan who was shouting crazily...kissing geet...

All were busy in looking at maan...But out of them one nurse looked at geet accidentally...her eyes widened in surprise...

to be continued...

Edited by jwalamukhi - 13 years ago

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anky_1205

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

Wow!!! Update soon...I hope she doesn't die. That would be too sad.

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sehrish79

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

I hope she is okay plz usse marna mat plz
Cont soon

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13579C

@13579C

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Hi:)may i know when u will update?I'm really looking forward 4 ur upate:)

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9staroneserials

@9staroneserials

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

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