will this night ends? (OS) part 11 pg 66 uptd...

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Deva

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Posted: 14 years ago

i love u maan..i love u ...i love u...

those words echoed in geet's room...tears were flowing continuously from her eyes...she sat in the corner of the room saying "i love u maan..i love u..." almost continuously...her hair was in total mess...her eyes were swollen and red...she was weak...and vulnerable...

she isolated herself from other family memebers...its been alraeady a week that incident happened..but still she is in the shock..not able to get out from that pain and hurt...all her family members could only say to be strong..but the pain...the sorrow which she is bearing..no one can understand...she was left all alone to bear the sorrow...

she wants to die..but her life is not hers anymore...it became his...she has no right on her life to end it..but the sorow and pain is not allowing her to live..she is dying each and every moment...everytime when she saw maan with anitha...

never in her life she thought that maan would forget her...but destiny had other plans...after an accident maan forgot her..all her memories got erased from his brain...now she was just a stranger to him...just a stranger...

when she heard the news that he forgot her...she was heart broken...but later she strengthen herself saying that one/other day maan will remeber everything...and she kept trying to remind him about her and their love...

Love hurts...geet almost forgot this fact in maan's love...but the fact came true when maan got irritated when she tried to be around him...he hated her presence..her smile..her looks...he simple pushed her away and warned her not to come before him...her heart shattered...but still she didn't gave up...until one day when maan brought anita to the khurana mansion saying that she is her fiance...

geet felt as if the she was falling into bottom less pit...her vision became hazy...due to tears...she looked at daadi helplessly...but what she can do...when maan takes any decision no one is able to change that...daadi's attempts were invain...

geet stood speechless not knwoing how to react...the scene of maan hugging anita ripped her heart into pieces...without saying a word she went to her room...when she decided to tell maan about the truth doctor's words echoed in her mind..."agar aap unhe zabardasthi kuch bhi yaad dilana chahthey hey..then sab kuch complicate hojayega"...she took her step back in fear...

she went to washroom ...sat under the shower..crying...crying..and crying...

to be continued...

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Edited by jwalamukhi - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome continue soon the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago

waiting for the next part:) this one was nice:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

that was awesome...please update soon n pm wen u do

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ok i loved it...I want maan 2 remember everything just before the marriage...when Geet thinks & goes away thinking she wont b able 2 bare seeing maan marrying another girl...I want him 2 find her...just a thought...😳😳😳😳..i felt i shud give...By d way plz continue ...nice one...😳😳😳

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Deva

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 2

after spending 4 long hours under shower crying..she came out and sat on the floor...closing her eyes..recalling every moment with maan...again gut wrenching sorrow came upon her...she let her tears to flow until she slept...

anita brought happiness in maan's life...her childish acts, her innocence made maan to think about her ..her smile...maan liked everything about her...he used to spend most of his time with her...but whenever anita tries to touch maan...his body reacted in an unusual way repulsing her touch...although anita used to feel very happy that maan is liking her..but this aspect of him worried her...even maan doesnot know why his body is rejecting anita...

when daadi figured out that maan is happy with anita...she finally took one decision...with heavy heart she came to geet's room...geet stood near window lost in her own thoughts...daadi came near her and patted her shoulders...geet turned back and smiled weakly...her heart went out for geet when she saw her condition...

"beta..yeh kya haal banakar rakha hey aapne"

geet looked away from daadi...trying hard to control her tears...daadi made geet to sit on the bed

"beta...jo mein keh reha hu..aap thoda shanthi se sunlijiye"

geet looked at daadi in confusion...

"beta hum aapka dard ko samaj sakthe hey...lekin ab humare haath mein kuch nahi hey..."

geet was still giving confused looks to daadi...

"bahuth dino ke baad maan kush hey...uske horto pe hasi aaya hey...aur hum unhe har samay khush dekhna chahthey hey"

tears rolled down geet's eyes...she now understood what daadi is going to say...

"beta bhura math maniye...mujhe nahi lagraha hey ki maan ki yaadash wapas aayega...woh aapko bhul chuka hey...isliye...aap bhi unhe bhul jaayiye...aur maan-anitha ko ek hine dijiye...woh dodno khush hey...ek doosre ke saath..."

geet sat silent lowering her head...daadi sat beside her caressing her head...

"beta..hum mazboor hey ...mein maan ko khush dekhna chahtha hu...aur aap ko bhi..mein aapko aise maan keliye tadaphe hue nahi dekh saktha...aap bhi apna manzil doond lijiye beta...

geet remained silent...

"beta soch lijiye...aur samajdari se achcha decision lijiye"

having said these words daadi patted her shoulders and left the room...

to be continued...

part 3 on page 3

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago

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