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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part
Geet was hallucinating about Maan.
He was her only hope to live.
Loved the way Adi and Pinky came to Geet's rescue.
Maan is very much connected to Geet but still in confusion
Cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
So beautifully written again... Thank You:)
Love their soul connection... Please do update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I liked it... awesome... thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome part

love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭😭
Ek toh Geet ki yeh halat aur ab toh Maan bhi ro raha hai😭 uff!!! yeh uljanai kab clear honge...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nce and plz pm me wen update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 6

As the distance was increasing between maan and geet...geet condition further deteriorated...her face became pale...her body stopped responding...her whole body became relaxed...pinky got scared...

"adi sir...geet...." she cried looking at adi...she kept rubbing geet's hands...in fear...she patted her cheeks waking her up ...but geet condition was going down with each passing second...

adi trembled in fear...he quickly reached ambulance..but there was some problem with ambulance and it didn't start...

adi and pinky looked at each other in confusion not knowing what to do...

"sir se help maangthe hey" said adi looking at pinky...

pinky although hated this idea after hearing maan's words...she agreed looking at geet's condition...

adi ran into khurana mansion to ask help from maan...

maan couldnot sit calmly...his heart was protesting..his eyes were flooded with tears..he felt terrible ...

"yeh kya ho raha hey mujhe...kyu ro raha hu mein..." screamed maan...in pain...

Just then adi came running to him and knelt before him...with tears in eyes...

"sir plz...hamare madath kijiye...geet ka condition bahuth critical hey...usko hospital leke jaana hey...plz sir...bas yeh help kijiye...plz..."adi requested with tears in eyes...maan looked at him with a blank expression...

Just then anita came from her room...she gave a disgusting look to adi...saying...

"adi...kya hey yeh...ek normal employee keliye tum ithna ro kyu rahe ho...waise bhi uss geet ka tumhara kya relation hey...tum uskeliye ithna pareshan ho rahe ho...lagtha hey..bahuth khaas hey tumhare liye...waise bhi bahar jao taxi mein leke jaao unhe...maan ko ab bahuth zaroori kaam hey..."

adi clenched his fist in anger...he wanted to kill anita for speaking such words about geet..but he controlled his anger...and looked at maan pleadingly...maan was lost in his own sorrow and he didn't responded...

adi got shocked at maan's rersponse..."shayad pinky sahi thi..iss ghar mein ab geet ko chahne wale koi nahi hey..." adi thought and moved towards main door with heavy heart...

anitha smiled and sighed in relief when adi left...and looked at maan who had tears in his eyes...she came running to maan asking...

"maan..kya hua..aap ro kyu rahe hey...bathayiye na..."

maan didn't respond...anita kept her hand on maan's cheek...asking.."kya hua?"

maan closed his eyes...

It was that moment her image flashed in his mind...the image of her which he loved the most in his life...the image of the person who had .the most beautiful face he had ever seen in his life...he remembered the same person cupping his face and kissing his forehead...a smile came on his face...and an unique peace in his heart looking at her face...

anita looked at maan in confusion..when he was smiling closing his eyes and tried to move closer...asking.."maan kya hua?"

maan opened his eyes...and looked at anita...

his eyes widened in shock...again same pain and sorrow filled his heart..it was not her...he pushed away anita in disgust...he looked around to get a glimpse of her...but his attempts were invain...he walked madly around the main hall seraching for her..he held his head in confusion...when she was not seen maan fell on his knees crying...not knowing for what and for whom...then slowly...flashes of geet's image came in his mind...her smile...her eyes...her chilidishness...her innocence...her sweet words...everything flashed in his mind..."maan...maan..." her sweet voice echoed in his ears...his head ached...it started spinning...he closed his eyesdue to pain...then he heard someone calling his name..."maan"...he slowly opened his eyes...there she was dressed in white with open hair looking at him lovingly with a smiling face...maan's heart skipped a beat...his face glowed in happiness...he stretched his hand to touch her...but then...she disappeared leaving darkness around him...

to be continued...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awsum...beautiful...juz wow...plzzz update soon...wil b waitin eagerly...
thx 4 d pm... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
So sad to see Geet's condition sinking...n Maan not responding to her situation...poor Adi n Pinky... but good o see that at last Maan is remembering Geet n her love...glad to see him not reacting to that Anita at all...she is so disgusting...hope Maan will soon remember everything about Geet n reach her in her hour of need...she needs him now to survive...

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