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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Awesome, I read the whole story today, simply wow, congrats for the new thread, and plz pm me when you update3


😊 Lovely 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
CONGRATS on the new thread...🥳

geet now knows everything...

waiting to c what she will do...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Thank U all for congratulating me for new thread .. and liking the last Part... and u also like this part also...


Part-40

In Juneja's House''

Heer: pata nahi kya hua hain chutki ko pheley tho aisa khabi nahi hua..

Hey bhagwaan sab theek ho..

Prem: U don't worry she'll be fine'

Hum kal subah he chalenge'

Mrs. Juneja: beta u don't worry sab theek hoga

Prem Phone rings

Perm: hello Maa'.chuti kaisi hain'.

Heer: Maa kaa phone hain''.

Heer: mujhe maa sey baat karni hain'

Prem: Maa lo Heer sey baat karo'..

Heer: hello Maa how is she now'.

Mrs. Malhotra: not yet awake but Doctor said it is due to exhaustion'

Heer: Par Maa'..

Mrs. Malhotra: Ab tu chinta matkar tu jakar aaram kar nahi tho tere bhi tabiyat kharab ho jayigi chal main rakhti hun'.

Heer: Maa'. Phone cuts'.

Prem: ab pata chal gaya naa ki vo theek hain chalo ab kuch kha lo..

Heer: nahi mujhe bhook nahi hain'.

Mrs. Junja: beta agar tum kuch nahi khaaogi' tho hum bhi nahi khaaingey..

Heer: Mom mujhe nahi khana'..

Mr. Juneja: Aaj lagta hain main bhooka hii rahunga'

Mrs.Juneja: Kyun'

Mr.Juneja: Kyunki haamri beti aagar kuch nahi kaayigi tho hum kaise khaainge'

Heer: ok main khaungi''

Prem: thank God meney tho samjha kii aaj bhooka hii rehna padega'..

Heer: haan ab chalo mujhe bhaut bhook lag rahi thi.

Everybody went to the dining table for having their dinner

IN Malhotra's House'..

Maan is back with the medicens'.

Mr.Malhotra: beta tum aa gaye '

Maan: haan uncle did she get awake'.

Mr. Malhotra: Not yet beta

Maan: where is aunty'

Mr. Malhotra: with Geet'..

Maan: ok uncle''

Maan is going towards Geet's room

Ramukaka comes to him''.

Ramukaka: Maan'.

Maan: Ji Kaka'..

Kaka: did to said something to her'..

Maan: No Kaka'..

Kaka: no'.. dint u tried to tell truth to her

Maan: Yes but I din't tell her any thing'..

Kaka: So what happened her'

Maan: kaka u don't worry she'll be fine

Kaka: I know but u has to promise me that u will not tell her anything about ur real identy''

Maan: but kaka.. for how many days we can hide this truth one day the truth will be out and then''.

Kaka: yes u are right but not now she is not well and she can't stand to it'

Maan: ok but as she recoved I'll tell her everything'.

Kaka: ok'.

Maan: ok kaka I have to go to see her'.

Kaka: ok..

Then suddenly Mrs. Malhotra comes out of Geet's room in excitement

Suniye chutki koo hoosh aa gaya hain'

Kaka: beta u go I'll with a glass of juice doctor said to give her the Juice as she awake'.

Maan: ok ''..

All of them ran towards the Geet's room'.

Geet in her room'..

Saw everybody except Maan'' Maan has not yet come'.

Mr. Malhotra: chutki how are u now'

Geet: I'am fine Paa'

Geet to Mrs. Malhotra: Maa stop crying I'am ok look'.

Mr. khurana: tumko pata hain tumney hum sab ko dara diya tha'.

Mrs. Malhotra: beta tumko kya hua tha achanak yea chakkar'.

Geet: nothing Maa vo mainey din main kana nahi kaya tha naa aur upper sey di key gift kii tension shaayad isiliye' she smiles

Maan enters''

After noticing Maan her smile faded off'.

Maan: is haapy to saw Geet fine''

Geet: she is getting all the flashes when she heard the truth'. She ignores Maan''.

Geet: Maa mujhe neend aa rahi hain'..

Mrs. Malhotra: haan beta tu soo jaa

Ramukaka enters.. haan par phele yea Juice'

Geet mujhe nahi pina in a rude tone'

Everybody shocked to saw Geet so rude to Ramukaka'

But they are just thought that she is not well so she is just irritated'

Mrs. Malhotra: chutki whay are u so rude to Kaka he is just giving u the Juice '.

Geet: Maa I don't like to have it'

Kaka: its ok beta but doctor said to give u a glass of juice'

Mr. Khurana: yea hitler comeon have it' and sleep'

Geet: no Papa'.

Maan: Dad I think she is not well nahito Geet aur khaaney peeney sey mana kare'.

Everybody laugs' but Geet din't react''..

Mr. malhotra: Beta comeon just have it else no body will be going from here'.

Geet: Ok Paa''.

She takes the Glass and gulped it'.

Geet: ok'.. can I sleep now'.

Mr. Khurana: yea beta sure'. We all are going..

Everyone leaves'' except Maan'..

Maan: hey hitler what happened to u'.

Geet: din't answer..

Maan: are u listning'. Iam talking to u'

Geet lay on the bed and cover her face

Maan: ok iam leaving but I'll come tomarrow' u take care'

Maan leaves'

Mr. Khurana & Maan take leave from them and leave

In Geet's room'

Geet got all the flashes how in their childhood Maan insulted her how they spend quality time together, how they fights and when she got to know about the truth'Geet closes her eyes in frustration'

Maan in his room:

What haapend to her. In the evening she was absolutely fine'

I think doctor is right she cares about everyone except herself'

But why she not answering'.me and the way she was talking to Ramukaka' she never hurt him in her dreams so why did she behaved like that'. There is something wrong'.

Geet in her room'.

Crying 'and talking to herself Why Maan why ' I can know why Maan did this what why Raukaka hides all this to me' Why Kaka why'. Why did u hide all this to me' even u are the only one who knows what was haapend with me' Then even u did this'..she cries her heart out' why with me always' she felt asleep while weeping'

In the morning'..

Maan is in the Jogger's park' looking for Geet' He looked in the whole park but he din't found her'.

Where is she did she come today' or not'

Maan: should I call her' but if she is sleeping' let her sleep'

He went back to his home ''

In Malhotra's Menssion'

Mr. Malhotra to Mrs. Malhotra: did chutki awake'.

Mrs.Malhotra: no I just coming from her room she is still sleeping'

Mr.Malhotra: let her sleep'

Mr. Malhotra: Ramukaka pls. give chutki breakfast with a glass of juice when she'll awake'

Ramuka: Yaa I will'..

Heer and Prem also reached for pagphera'

Heer: Paa '

Mr.Malhotra & Mrs. Malhotra turned'

Heer.. u come so early'

Prem: yea tho puri raat hii nahi soyi hain'

Mrs. Malhotra: beta I told u naa that she is fine now' but u as usual..

Heer & Prem comes to them and take their blessings'

Heer: Maa but u know jab tak main usko dekh naho loongi mujhe chain nahi aayigaa'' where is she'

Mrs. Malhotra: she is in her room still sleeping'

Heer: I going to see her'

Mrs. Malhotra: ok go'

Heer went up to the Geet's room'

Geet is sleeping'.

Heer sits besides her' she sweetly passes her hand over her forehead'.

Geet: gets up by her touch she opens her eyes '..

Geet: di aap itni subha subha'

Heer: mujhsey reha nahi gaya isliye jaldi aa gayi..

Geet: Par di main theek hun.

Heer: haan mujhe pata hain' ab tujhe dekliya naa.. now I'am relaxed..

Heer: chal tu freash ho jaa' Main neeche chalti hun..

Main seedey upper hii aagayi '

Maa paa sey bhi milti hun'

Geet: Dii' ok u go I'll come'

Percap: Geet: kaka why did u hide the truth from me..

Kaka: shocked...


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Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Awesome update
Hope geet forgives maan and ramukaka
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Superb part.
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
wowww loved it
feeling very bad that geet is crying
n precap is awesomeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Awesome, can't wait for the next part, hope they patch up soon, lovely ff once again

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
nice update

cant wait for the confrontation

continue soon

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
luved d update
do continue soon
n srry if i forgot to congratulate on d new thread

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