MG FF-Till Death Do US Part Thread 3 - Page 44

Honestly, i know its just a story but still, i expected Maan to have more confidence on himself - initial days post the event might have been a shock - but he is a doctor and he knows the effect of alcohol and he would be very much aware of the effect of drinks on him - so his getting totally lost in guilt seems a bit too unusual to me. I hoped his family members would also try talking to him given everybody has so much faith on him and he is a matured established doctor - not a kid. all his other behavior patterns like not coming home, avoiding Geet and family members, depression - are normal. But I would say when a person sleeps with somebody there are certain effects on him (not only her)... and he would get to understand if the event has happened for real. I am amazed that it never occurred to them that he hates NT so much and even in his subconscious state it would have showed. I understand the POV you want to show, but the path to that is a bit removed from realism.

As for your story, i love your plots and most of them seem realistic to me - but your updates are quite short. I dont mean the number of words/length by "short" - its just that your story moves very slowly within an update - sometimes you finish with just a conversation and sometimes its just the story of half a day. Its not dragging - just that I as a reader expect more from you - somehow i have a feeling of incomplete satisfaction after reading your update and would like to demand some more😃I would appreciate having more content in the update than the length...just to mention - today's update was much more to my liking since the content was solid

Just my thoughts bcoz you asked...pls dont take it personally😊