FF. MAD ABOUT YOU' part 2 on pg 11. plz comment:) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz update soon dear
interesting start
waiting for the 1st part

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi
nice cs again .
it is good to know that geet is dr . in this ff .
loved it plz continue soon .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome character sketch...cn wait for the update...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Interesting...!
Cant wait for the 1st part!
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice CS
loved it
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hey aslam mariam,
buddy hope you doing well
nice cs
w8ing for the part 1
jazakallah for the pm
continuee on wednesday ha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayyy me firstt😆
OMGG OMG
haila itna aacha likhti hai tu
You better continue this FF
Amazing prologue and CS
Ahh I can't wait to read this jaanii
OMG please part 1 dede jaldiii

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interesting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice mariyam

do count n pm me plz

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1

Servant : Sir your call.

Maan : I am busy right now, put it on hold.

Servant : sir can't take the risk its dadima.

Maan : ok give it to me, and leave

************

Dadi: hi handsome

Maan: dadi how are you? How is your health? Are you taking your medicines and'.

Dadi: ENOUGH. 5 minutes back you didn't want to talk to me and now u are going on and on..

Maan: dadi you know that's not true.

Dadi: Maan why don't you come back beta?

Maan: not again dadi please.

Dadi: maan please its been 6 years, I have been asking you to come back. Fine u don't wanna come then don't..here im missing u and there u don't even care for me and'

Maan: fine dadi ; I am " COMING".

( DADI couldn't speak since she was in shock; Maan smiled ( hayeee 😳😳) and disconnect the call.)

******************

After a month Maan came back and he was about to enter the Mansion.

Dadi: stop right there Maan.

Maan: dadi please I said na I am sorry and..

Dadi: yeah, yeah, yeah not that baby sign this contract then enter.

Maan : contract???? ( take the contract and read it) . maan was totally in shock.

Dadi just smiled looking at maan.

Maan : seriously Dadi??? You want me to sign a contract that I will stay in India until I get married. Are u kidding me? If I don't sign this contract then I am not allow to enter the mansion and u will not talk to me.

Dadi: ofcourse yes.

Maan: come on dadi be serious

Dadi : do u think im kidding.???

Maan: ughhh fine.

Maan knew that his dadi was as stubborn as he is so no point in fighting; he loves his dadi a lot and will do everything for her. He signs the contract.

Maan's POV: dadi you are the only person in front of whom MAAN SINGH KHURANA is soft and not being his real self.

Is it??? Did MAAN SINGH KHURANA know that there is another person?

Precap: '' first meeting or should I say first fight .

Maan: you are HOT.

Geet : what the''.!!!!!!!!!

plzzz do comment😛

Edited by iampretty - 14 years ago

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