Mayur FF - It so happened...Part 36 Page143

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

and i am actually missing the moment i spend reading this part...

superb dear..its beautiful... the way i was smiling all the way in this update... it ended leaving so much inside u..

amzing ...i wish i can read more..
pls try n update soon...

the way u write emotions is so amzing...

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#652

amazing, beatiful. plz continue soon

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Aysha Saxena

@aysha_mayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#653

Palzzz lovely Part 🤗

The shirt scene was just soo cute...You know I m just imagining when their romance will take a flight..toh kaise scenes honge...and you know how my imagination is😈🤣

"Itwasn't fair on her senses that he was standing there with just a towel draped around him and the way water dripped from his face had lined it all along."---Omggg...This is soo damn hot!!🤪

and the Bauji-Mayank scene convo was also lovely...I loved the way Mayank gained mroe respect in her eyes through this😳

and their convo when Nupur pressed his hand was soo cue..."Tum toh apne liye bhi dangerous ho".🤣..Mayank was really trying to be naughty and playful with her...😆

Update soon Palzzz😳

Edited by aysha_mayur - 13 years ago

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mayur247

@mayur247

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Amazing part once again! Loved their new bonding! 😊

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#655

awesome updt payal
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#656

That was an incredibly wonderful update... You have written it so nicely that I could feel each of the emotions they are going through...
Beautiful 😊

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#657

wow!!!dis update f urs is like a pleasant surprise for me...a lovely update!! loved every part f dis update

but liked 4 things very much in dis update...👍🏼

1:nupur trying to be a superwomen n trying to do all the tasks in d morning in 1 go!!👏

2:mayank looking at d white spoilt shirt n thinking he may now get anything and everything of her choice for him, now that she was his wife. How would it matter if she had spoilt her own gift? She was his gift!😍

3:mayank talking to nupur's dad as well as simultaneously trying to normalize nupur's emotional turmoil abt missing her dad by hugging her❤️...

4:nupur understanding n feeling mayank's importance in her life😉...

thanx fr d pm!!!

continue soon!!