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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#661

very niceupdate

continue soon

thanks ofr thepm.

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#662

Loved it..Specially this part...

He looked Nupur in the eye, while he still looked as if all his concentration was on the phone conversation, but he smudged the tiny tear at the corner of Nupur's eyes and side hugging her, he held her close to him.Nupur was shocked for one and strangely happy for another.

A smiled appeared automatically on my face reading this...beautiful thought and even more beautifully written...
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vinan2050

@vinan2050

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Posted: 13 years ago

#663

awsm update yarr very nice

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#664

Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin
Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin

Meethi Lagi, Chakh Ke Dekhi Abhi
Mishri Ki Dali, Zindagi Ho Chali
Jahan Hain Teri Baahein Mera Sahil Wahin
Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin

Mann Ki Gali Tu Phuharoon Si Aa
Bheeg Jaye Mere Khwabon Ka Kafila
Jise Tu Gungunaye Meri Dhun Hai Wahin
Tu Bin

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written

@written

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Posted: 13 years ago

#665

I just love this FF, please do continue soon

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avani sharma

@avani_sharma02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#666

😃gud work...👏

the way u describe the happenings in the life of mayank and nupur is amazing...its just the way things happen in a arranged marriage...i can feel love seeping in between both of them...it would be goou of both take things slowly and steady and try to understand each other's unspoken words...all in all it was a wonderful update...do continue soon. plz pm me and add me to ur buddy list...at last i wish u a very HAPPY HOLI!!!!!!!!!!😊

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#667

I didn't know I could love
anyone as much as I love you
for the sound of your voice,
makes all my dreams come true.

You walk into a room, and
I know you have arrived;
my heart skips a beat when
you walk up to my side.

I hope this kind of magic stays
forever between us two,
and the whole wide world will
know that God sent me you