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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Res...

I should stop reserving and start editing... 😆

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wow congrats another ff... 🤗& Its awesome.. totally MayUrish but with tint of mystery... The first chapter is amazing, and very well written...
And I learned something new... Sharing a rikshaw? seriously that happens? The fact of the day... 😊 It probably happens in pakistan also, I've just haven't been there for yearss... but its a unique concept for me... :)

Anyways a very nice start do continue soon... 😳

-Laiba

-Ps. I'm extremly sorry for such late comment..

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

welcome back payel...i missed ur writing too much yaar...thnx to start a new one...b/w it was an amazing start...waiting for next part

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Amazing update payal

Another mayur ff

Loved it

Cont soon

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

wow wht a start for mayur...sharing auto rickshaw is soo cool...i hope dey both work in da same office

cont soon

totally loved da update

loads of love

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

the starting is superb... loved it sooo much dear...

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

beautiful start payal. so realistic. payal thank you for this ff. u r a fab writer

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rashmi

@rashmilovesArTi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

hey pallu. Congrats for ur new ff. Refreshing story. Good story:-)

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

mayanks mom works in that office?
anyway i'm glad you started another ff and thanks for thpm.

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Wow Pallu another FF...🤗
So Glad u Started a new one ...😃
the tiltle n Banner Siggy is Extremely Beautiful 😳 😍
n wot a luvly Start...😳😃
do continue Soon...Waiting...😳😃
Annu😃