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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

wow congrats for the new ff

amazing start

perfectly mumbaikars experience captured through writing

could relate to it completely

thanks for the pm

continue soon 😊

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

beautiful dear...

i liked it...normal routine and same auto hmmm...

cont soon...
loved ur banner...

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

welcome back payal n congrats fr new ff😊

awesome starting of dis ff n mayur morning..

luking forward

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@Sanugr8fan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

another mayur FF..!!

that was just what i neede!!

thnnxx payall...:)

ur FF's rockk!!!

n this one is alsoo FAB..:D

dooo updatee sooonest!!!!

Luved the way u desribed both gazing n observnbg each other.. :))

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Alright, I really couldn't follow your last story. But Iam all in for this one.

Trains, shared rickshaws, it all seems so real. Interesting and very nicely put forth.

Add me to the PM list please and continue soon. I'm looking forward to this one, eagerly. (:

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Congrates on New Ff dear

Super great start

So unique

I like It

cont soon

thanks for pm

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

welcome back pallluuu!! .. 🤗

Beautiful start and i LOVE ur writing style .. so sober and so well knitted .. *sigh* .. keep it up palluuu!! .. continue soon .. 🤗

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

omg... u really startd a new MN ff... yay!🥳
wow.. such an beautiful start... reminds me of my livin in mumbai.. train ke dakke, share auto...its soo adventurous... is mein hi zindagi ka mazza hai!😳
after dis unusual meet of MN.. i cant wait 4 d next part!
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

congrats for your new ff
nice start..cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

GREAT BEGINING OF UR NEW FF "IT SO HAPPENED"👍🏼

Loved d way u described nupur's train ride...rush in d local trains in mumbai during peak hours d busy people of mumbai n deir enthusiasm s unmatchable.👏

Loved d way u have written Mayank n Nupur's first interaction😊...liked d way nupur observed very single detail abt mayank...also liked d way mayank ultimately agreed to nupur's demand.

continue soon...

thanx for d pm.😉