My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 62

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@sur001: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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waiting 4 next part dear..
pm me when u update...
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@sur001: Nyc story!!!!😊
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Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Surro *rubbing my eyes*


hehe...yep shona😉😛
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First of all a big sorry for being so lazy in updating the story but was unable due to some reasons...so I am going to end the story...Thanks for your likes and comments and special thanks to them who waited so long.

link to last part
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1737824&TPN=112

Chapter-27

Everything was decorated so tastefully ,party had just started but there was no sign of Maan anywhere,Geet who was waiting for him got restless as it 20th time when she was trying her number and it came waiting.


Geet (to herself)"Aye lo ,again waiting...Where is he??"

Finally Maan called back

Maan in a normal tone started"Hey jaan"

Geet who was already irritated retorted back"Jaan ,for whom you get time after half an hour,you dont even care for me,Guests are arriving and you are nowhere"

Maan bit his lip measuring the intensity of her mood"Sorry mishti but this was important ,come on te terrace and if you will not you will be sorry for this"

Before Geet could say anything he cut the call and she moved towards the terrace but before she could procced towards the centre someone pulled her in his arms,realising its Maan she tried to shout at him in fake anger but she was unable to as he gagged his mouth by his hand and cam cloeser to her ear

Maan whispered"I am going to move my hands away but dont shout, just look what I am going to show you"

Geet's eyes followed the direction of Maan's hand and the scene left a smile on her face...Sid was knelt down on his feet and had offered a ring to Riddhima who was looking at him mesmerised as if this was the moment for which she had waited so long...She smiled and stretched her hand, he gently slipped the finger in her hand and gave a loving peck on her hand.Geet turned and look into Maan's eyes who was smiling as well.He kissed her forehead and they went away to attend the guests who were waiting for them.After sometime Sid and Riddhima also joined them.Everything went well and after the guests left Daadi called Maan and Geet .

Daadi smiled and said"I have planned something for you and I am sure you will love it so pack your bags you are going out for a week"

Maan who had some work in office did not supported the idea at the very first instance he objected"No,I have lots of work in the office"

Daadi gave a stern look to him and said"You are just married ,go spend time with your wife and work can be done after a week even.I have already talked to Aadi "

Maan just nodded on seeing both the ladies didnot entertain his idea of work.In morning they were ready.as they reached the hall ,Daai smiled and indicated something to Riddhima and Sid who were waiting to follow the order.

Maan asked"What is this?"

Daadi ignored his query and said to geet"Beta,i hope you will like the place and I want both of you to enjoy without thinking about anyone",sheturned towards Maan"And you Maan,you better not remove this cloth before reaching the place"

Riddhima And Sid helped them in heading towards car and after few hours they reached somewhere.Driver stopped the car and helped them getting out of the car.Maan and Geet removed the eye cover and the scene infront of them left them mesmerised.driver left the place and now they were alone in the love mansion ,the very love mansion where they had realised their feeling.as they entered they felt a change ,the change was their pictures on every corner of the wall there was a letter on the table...it was wriiten by Dadi,she told them everything about her plan and lastly mentioning this was a gift from her side to them on their wedding.Geet was really delighted by the gift.

Geet held Maan's hand and said"now this is our love mansion"

Maan held her hand and said teasingly "then we should make love na to give meaning to the name"

Geet shied and moved away,Maan held her hand and pulled her towards him,She ducked her face in his chest abd he gently took her in his arms and moved towards the room which was already decorated with flowers and scented candles.He placed her on bed ,Geet closed her eyes in anticipation,maan saw a basket full of flower petals he took one petal and gently but seductively moved it on the bare body part left by Geet's saree,it left a tingling feeling in her body ,Maan smiled and followed by wet kisses slowly taking her under him.He kissed her and she reciprocated back,the soft kiss turned into a passionate one where both of them wanted more.Geet had no idea when she unbuttoned his shirt but only that she went into the magic of his warm breath,passionate kisses and lovely pleadings of his touch.They were lost in each other unaware from the whole world in their own love mansion.

Hope you guys liked it...




Edited by sur001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update dear... :) loved it veryy much... bt u ending dis storyy😭😭..
I like dis story veryy much..
It ws a nyc update.. so Sid offered a ring to Ridz nd she accepted it wow...
nd Dadi gifted d love mansion.. wow...
Loved it veryy much...😊 gr8 workkk
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow love mansion...kya naam hai...aur maan ne woh nam ka izzat rakhega...puri tareeke se...😉 😆 😳

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update dear love mansion awesome love it
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Posted: 12 years ago



very beautiful update...

Sid proposed Riddhima...

Daadi gifted Mansion to Maaneet and Geet keep name LOVE MANSION...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
plz epilogue to banta hai

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