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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Scene was well written Shona...

But I think without the pics the meanings would have been conveyed even more strongly...

The scene was not a disappointment but I found the pics a bit distracting...

Mein meri shona hone ke hak se tumse yeh kah rahi hun...

Bura lage tho humein laath maar dhena😳

Woh aa hi gaya...

Ab kya hoga mere bhagwaan

Loved the update twinnoo🤗

Espe the pallu dropping scene

Edited by Eowyn - 13 years ago

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sur001

@sur001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Scene was well written Shona...
But I think without the pics the meanings would have been conveyed even more strongly...

The scene was not a disappointment but I found the pics a bit distracting...

Mein meri shona hone ke hak se tumse yeh kah rahi hun...

Bura lage tho humein laath maar dhena😳

Woh aa hi gaya...

Ab kya hoga mere bhagwaan

Loved the update twinnoo🤗

Espe the pallu dropping scene

Nidh i hate you ...why?...because yaar you can say anything to me as I know it will be for my benefit...I know the success of a writer is that time when he/she makes the person reading feel the words but this scene was from KKHH a movie really closed to my heart and this scene yaar ye toh mere dil me bahut kuch karta hai...I am sorry for distracting you shona but dont worry this was the last scene and now I guess no one here will feel its like KKHH because wahan toh iske baad story end ho gaye thi but meri toh ab jaake shuru hui hai...Marungi to jaroor agar kabhi tumhe meri writing me kuch odd laga aur tumne mujhe nahi batya

Love to have you Shona to point out my weakness as it never hurts me but gives me scope to improve...love ya lotzz🤗

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GurruKiDeewani-

@GurruKiDeewani-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

OMG KKHH instrumental haye rabba dreamyyy

loved the update

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: sur001

Nidh i hate you ...why?...because yaar you can say anything to me as I know it will be for my benefit...I know the success of a writer is that time when he/she makes the person reading feel the words but this scene was from KKHH a movie really closed to my heart and this scene yaar ye toh mere dil me bahut kuch karta hai...I am sorry for distracting you shona but dont worry this was the last scene and now I guess no one here will feel its like KKHH because wahan toh iske baad story end ho gaye thi but meri toh ab jaake shuru hui hai...Marungi to jaroor agar kabhi tumhe meri writing me kuch odd laga aur tumne mujhe nahi batya

Love to have you Shona to point out my weakness as it never hurts me but gives me scope to improve...love ya lotzz🤗

Arrey meri shona🤗

Thu mere liye yaha sab se zyaada important hain...

Kyunki tum meri sabse pehli aur sabse achi dosth hain...

Jisse mera soch ithna miltha hain ki lagtha hain hum ek dhoosre ko in and out jaanthe hain...

Aur tum bhi math bhoolna ki tumhara poora haq bantha hain mujhpar...

Dhandho, maaro ya phir kuch bhi karon lekin humein chodna math...

Chothi chothi galthiyan tho humesha maaf hain...jaise ki tum kabhi kabhi words mein galthiyan karthi hon...lekin yeh mujhe kabhi important nahin lagaan...kyunki tumhari story ki flow kabhi nahin toothi issein...

Aur iss baar tho yeh galthi bhi nahin thi...bass meri problem hain ki mein distract ho gayi...

Tujhe patah hain ki mein dil se chahthi hi ki tujhe ek baar sirf ek baar hi sahi dekhne ko milein...to hug you

Kya tum FB mein hon?

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sur001

@sur001

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Arrey meri shona🤗

Thu mere liye yaha sab se zyaada important hain...

Kyunki tum meri sabse pehli aur sabse achi dosth hain...

Jisse mera soch ithna miltha hain ki lagtha hain hum ek dhoosre ko in and out jaanthe hain...

Aur tum bhi math bhoolna ki tumhara poora haq bantha hain mujhpar...

Dhandho, maaro ya phir kuch bhi karon lekin humein chodna math...

Chothi chothi galthiyan tho humesha maaf hain...jaise ki tum kabhi kabhi words mein galthiyan karthi hon...lekin yeh mujhe kabhi important nahin lagaan...kyunki tumhari story ki flow kabhi nahin toothi issein...

Aur iss baar tho yeh galthi bhi nahin thi...bass meri problem hain ki mein distract ho gayi...

Tujhe patah hain ki mein dil se chahthi hi ki tujhe ek baar sirf ek baar hi sahi dekhne ko milein...to hug you

Kya tum FB mein hon?

Kabhi Kabhi Nidh...please haan words ke saath mai jo blunders karti hoon wo toh mujhe update karne ke dusre din pata chalta hai...raat ko sote sote update karti hoon check karna bhool jati hoon aur subah jab padhti hoon tab lagta hai waah kya writing hai KG ka baccha bhi mujhe padha de😆...and most important thing mujhe lagta hai yaar mere friends kitne sareef hain...itne mistake ke baad bhi kabhi kuch nahi bola...Sur's record in word blunders"WINDS OF DESIRE"...mera pehla FF...gosh...Jahan bhi lage path stray ho raha hai...ek danda hath me rakhna aur dena ghuma ke akal thikane aa jayegi😆...

Mai bhi milna chahti hoon tumse...atleast for once...you know bina dekhe bhi lagta hai I know you very well...Kash wo din jald aaye😍

Mai FB pe hoon ...

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renjini263

@renjini263

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Awesome update...dbt wry balehi KKHH k scenes ho par i lykd it thanx 4 d pm

plz continueee ssooonnn😊

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sur001

@sur001

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Maaneet4everXxX
Yay!!!!! I'm first again!!!!! 😆😆😆

Super update!!!! Loved it sooo much

Loved Chahak's plan!!!

Can't wait for more...

Saba xxx

Thanks Sabz...

Chahak is the sweetest cupid of Maneet's life in this FF

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sur001

@sur001

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: Bloomysunday
That was a great update u made the emotions blurt out ...looks like its somewhere like kkhh...thanx for adding the poem i m glad u liked it...continue soon tc...😊

Thanks dear...yeah somewhere or some scenes...as I cannot bopy everything here Sam is alive and negative so its the last part where it gives resemblance to KKHH...

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sur001

@sur001

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: Trisha4evr
Omg...its beautiful...wow...m just speechles...m gng 2 watch dis rain scene again n imgine maaneet..thnks 4 d superb update

Thanks ...Same here I cannot resist myself from watching that rain sequence for innumerous time

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

...😊

4 pm me dear..😃

...👍🏼 4

ur those

updates...👏👏.. this updates really... me ... ⭐️⭐️ lots of ...🤗 lov,❤️ Tama P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕me also want encougement & appreciation dears... Note: guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕 me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update... but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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