My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: renjini263

Awesome...precap sounds lil dangerous...plz continue soon,thanx 4 d pm...

Thanks dear...Dont worry real danger is someone else who is coming😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pri01

Hey jaanu superb update like it

scary precap😲 but am hoping for the best
plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm love ya🤗

Hey priyu ...thanx yaar...dont worrry all is well
love ya🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angelaraf

awesome part

worried about the precap!😕

Thanks dear...
Dont be all is well😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhi_s

nice part.

want some romantic scenes between maaneet without any hesitation
update soon

Thanks dear...
thoda intezaar actually there is no realisation still so there will be little hesitation for a while as Sid's case is still on
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Dadi tho bilkul nahin badlegi😆

Yash se baath kar rahi thi na woh...
Aur agle update mein unki nayi drama shuru ho jayegi...😆
Daadhi u r simply the best...🤗
Hayye subah subah ithne pyaar se uthaye tho dhin hi acha hoga na
Superb jaana...🤗

Aap se hum kiya chupaye
Jab aap hume iss kadar pehchante hai
Bilkul sahi shona...Daadima ko bura banaungi toh saas bahu types ho jayega abnd I run away from saas bahu saga😆
Wo aa raha hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

bringing tea for her was really sweet

Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for liking and commenting guys...🤗...it always encourages me...so claps 👏👏for you all for jhelofying me😆..shh I will stop my bakbak now

Chapter-14
Maan and Geet came to the room..
Daadi"Maan,Do I have the right to ask where were you last night ?..Whole night both of you were together and not even informed me you are coming or staying elsewhere"
Maan"What are you saying Daadima you have full right on me..actually we were stuck in a deserted place and there was no signal on mobile..everything is fine daadima relax"
Daadi"Dont give silly excuses...You spent a whole night with a girl and you are telling me that everything is fine and to relax..Hume aapse ye umeed nahi thi aapne hamare viswas ka fayda uthaya hai Geet..I will never forgive both of you "
Maan"Daadima its true we were together but we were stuck it was not in our hand..isme Geet ki kya galti hai? "
Daadi"Galti to hamari hai that I trusted her..She has done charm of her beauty on you that's why you are defending her and arguing with your old Daadi"
Geet "Daadima aisi koi baat"
Daadi snapped "Don't speak between Daadi and pota.."
Geet was unable to control the tears which were making way through her eyes..She ran outside the room..
Maan"Daadi uss bechari ki koi galti nahi thi"
Maan ran outside followed by Daadi..As Geet reached in hall her legs paused and eyes widened in surprise...Chahak and her friends were there carrying a board with one alphabet written in each board..Geet read them together ..smile spread on her face..Maan who had came there till that time understood everything..He also stood there crossing his arms on his chest with a smile then a sound came from back "Happy Birthday Geet"..Geet turned and saw Daadima was standing with a cake and was looking at her with a graceful smile
Maan"Daadima this was your prank"
Daadi"No,It was Chahak's plan..I just made the cake..Sorry Geet beta ,I hurted you with my words"
Geet ran to Daadima and hugged her"Please daadima..you can never hurt me..aap badey ho and from your mouth only blessings looks good not apologizing "
Maan ruffled his hair "Sorry Geet,I forgot your birthday"
Geet with an attitude"Just sorry,you will get punishment,you will grant my one wish"
Maan"And whats that?"
Geet"Whats the hurry?..I will ask soon"
Chahak came and hold her ear"Sorry Aunty..coz of me you cried"
Geet bend down and kissed her"Who said that?..you can never make me cry..my sweet little angel"
Daadi"Ok then lets get ready for party"
A voice came from entrance door"We are ready.."
All eyes shifted that side..Adi and Pinky were there in casuals...Geet smiled on seeing them
Maan"What you both are doing here..Who granted you leave?"
Geet"I had called them and its my wish that they will stay here with us ..and if you will not grant them leave then superboss will do that..hai na daadi"
Daadi nodded and Adi gave his signature laughter
Adi and Pinky together"Happy Birthday Geet"
Daadi"Few hours left..we need to prepare for party"
Geet"daadi only we will be there na..so why not we have a small party in lawn..There will be not to do much ..just some lights and fire...Kids are there ..They will enjoy..Kyoun baccha party"
All kids together"Yes"
All got busy in preparations..Maan was sitting in his room and was thinking about Geet..Daadi came there
Daadi"Dil ki baat ko keh dene me bhalai hai..who knows if you do late you will be late"
Maan"But daadima for that we need to know what our heart wants?"
Daadi"Maan close your eyes and listen to your heartbeats what they say?"
Maan"But what if I mistook in hearing them"
Daadi"You may but your heart wont..just listen up to yourself"
Daadi left..Maan closed his eyes and what he could get what thoughts of Geet.her sweet smile ,her innocence,her beauty..He opened his eyes..and said in a determination"I know what I have to do"
He was coming down while he was passing by Geet's room Geet was there wearing a red sari gifted by Daadima and was pinning the pallu...Maan called out her name..she turned a gust of strong wind came and the pallu of her sari slipped off her shoulder..She tried to catch it and looked at Maan nervously who was gazing at her..Maan was totally embarrassed but he was unable to control himself...he turned his head but again looked at her from sideways...she had placed the pallu and was looking like a bride..hair unleashed..and no jwelleries were there except the earrings..She was looking very beautiful..On seeing her in Maan's mind came these words which he had read few minutes ago
Love...
Sweet sounds from the music of the heart
Composed of flowers and flattery
Played by instruments--each has its own part
Sung with passion and delicacy
Love...
Faded pages with meaning beyond comprehension
Written with strength and fervency
Read by many with constant devotion
Stored on shelves of diversity
Love...
Strokes of vivid colors and happiness
Drawn by the instinct of desire
Painted with tenacious tenderness
Displayed in galleries of grandeur
Yes Maan this is love...you dont come in those categories who shamelessly stares a woman in such condition but when it comes to Geet I feel like watching her 24/7...I find ways to spend time with her...now its time to know does she feels the same for me
Geet hiding her uneasiness"Maan ,I am ready...lets go"
Maan smiled at his thought and said"Geet ..can I say something"
Geet"Yeah sure"
Maan"You look more sexy in sari"
He went saying these words leaving Geet rooted understanding what he meant
He called me sexy or it was me who heard that...
She blushed at his compliment and came down... the lawn was beautifully decorated with candles and light and in the centre on a table a huge cake was kept surrounded by kids...Geet took Daadi's ashirwaad and gave a glance to Maan who was having his eyes glued on her
Daadi teased Maan"Geet hum aapko kajal laga dete hai..kahin kisi ki nazar na lag jaye"
Maan started looking at the kids ...After cake was cut Geet fed it to Daadi then went to Maan he opened his mouth but Geet bend down and fed it To Chahak..She fed everyone except Maan..He got angry and went to a corner fumbling..Geet came there and tried to feed him the cake..Maan moved away
Maan"You got time for me.."
Geet"Arrey baba I was just teasing.."
Maan"I don't like this kind of jokes Geet"
Maan's hand was moving towards the plate but he maintained the eye contact with Geet so that she could not see his hand..and as soon his hand grabbed the cake..the next moment it was on Geet's face..Maan laughed and ran followed by Geet to give him a face massage of cake..all were laughing on seeing geet's face covered in cake...They came other side of the farmhouse little far from the lawn...she sat and started crying and shouting that her leg got hurt..Maan came near her to see if the injury was serious as he sat down and took her leg in his hand Geet applied the cake on his face and massaged his face..She stood and patted her back
Geet"Geet handa se panga lekar bachna mushkil hai looser"
They were about to start a race again.. but it started raining Geet turned towards house to go but felt maan is not coming she turned back and saw Maan was getting wet enjoying the drops..it surprised Geet as it was a rare sight to see MSK enjoying rain..She hold his hand and urged to go back home but Maan holding her hand ran in opposite direction as he felt it was the right time to know whats in Geet's heart..He stopped after reaching the shed which was made in the middle of the artificial lake..
Geet started drying her hairs from her hand..Maan came towards her and bend down asking Geet for a dance making pose..Geet smiled at his cute gesture and indicated there was no music..Maan closed his eyes and did the gesture of playing piano indicating Geet to listen to the music of nature..the sound made by droplets of rain..
Geet felt as if the drops are calling her and Maan's name..She gave her hand in his..He pulled her towards him..she encircled her hand around his neck..
maan pulled her closer holding her waist..
She bend down giving her balance on Maan's hand ..
Maan also bent and started giving wet kisses on her neck ..
they slowly stood..Geet moved away but his hands got clutch of her hand and pulled her making her slam on his chest from back..He slowly sidened her hairs which were resting on her back..and seductively moved his finger from her face to her neck which made Geet feel like butterflies fluttering in her stomach..She closed her eye and her hands automatically moved up in reaction to meet his hands..Maan smiled at her reaction as he could see his effect on her...he opened his finger to meet with hers..their fingers locked with each other ..He could feel her body responding to his touch ..
he again smiled and pulled Geet gently making her twirl and rest her head on his broad chest..her eyes were still close..He raised her face holding her chin..Geet again moved away to go but he hold her pallu ..She turned towards him..he left the pallu and stood there without moving
Geet could feel his eyes..the emotions going in him..His face was saying that he cannot live without her and she is the one who completes him..Geet felt an unsaid attraction in his eyes and she got pulled towards him..She moved her hand from his forehead to lips assuring she belongs to him and her life is meant for him..When her hands were on lips she gave a glance to his face which was enjoying her touch
she smiled but at that instance her eyes fell to the bracelet Sid had given her..His words,his trust made Geet hate herself that she belongs to Sid now and she did a crime..she stepped back Maan opened his eyes in which there was a satisfaction that Geet is his ond only his..Geet started moving back and tears rolled down her check..Maan understood something is wrong before he could ask her voice stroked his ears"No its wrong..I cannot do this"
Before maan could descry anything ..she ran outside breathlessly in rain..She ran with all her strength finally stopping holding a tree to breath..A hand touched her..She in one go said"I love You..I don't know since when but I love You"
She heard a voice saying I Love You too but it was not Maan's voice it was ..she turned her face and saw Sid standing there
Precap-"Geet you love me"..Maan pinned her against the wall
Geet"I dont, Maan"
Maan"Really"
He moved closer and...
P.S-1.The poem is written by Bloomysunday aka Priya ...Thanks for the sweet poem dear...kudos to you👏👏👏...
2.Sorry if disappointed as this scene was from KKHH and I am not that good with words so i dont wanted to spoil such a sweet scene thats why I tried to show by pics their intensity...chao
Have a nice time friends😊
Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay!!!!! I'm first again!!!!! 😆😆😆
Super update!!!! Loved it sooo much
Loved Chahak's plan!!!
Can't wait for more...
Saba xxx
Edited by Maaneet4everXxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part..
Thanks for the pM
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
and thanks for the PM

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