My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monika1992

Awesome n i lo0ved kuch kuch hota hai scene as its my fav...

Thanks dear...same here I can see it over and over again...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pri01

Awesome jaanu love it

Precap is interesting
Plzzz update soon thxs for the pm love ya🤗

Hey Priyu...precap is kissing...
love ya🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesome!

finally maan realized his feelings for geet!
poor geet!
continue soon!

Thanks dear...
now its turn to make Geet confess
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

OMG KKHH instrumental haye rabba dreamyyy

loved the update

Thanks dear...
I love that music...it has a great attraction...I feel like het pulled in that music
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: renjini263

Awesome update...dbt wry balehi KKHH k scenes ho par i lykd it thanx 4 d pm

plz continueee ssooonnn😊

Thanks for liking...I just tried to cretae a lil spark as that scene is killing...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

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4 pm me dear..😃
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this updates really...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for liking and commenting guys...It really motivates me...
Chapter-15
Geet was shocked to see Sid there..she just uttered"Sid.."
Sid embraced Geet"I love you ..I was not knowing this one months separation will make you realize that you love me..hey this was for me only na"Geet smiled..he continued"You know Geet I took the first flight and came here as today was your birthday ..see still the night is not over,I missed you a lot Geet"
Geet"Missed you too"
Sid ended the hug and said taking her hand in his"You know how much your birthday is lucky for us..today Pandit ji called me he has finalized next week for our marriage
"What..?"Maan's shocked voice entered Geet's ear..She felt he stoled her words like her heart
Geet was not able to look into his eyes..Sid smiled"We are getting married ..if I am not wrong you are Mr.khurana"
Maan startled "But how could it be ..I mean suddenly you came up from somewhere and will marry her next week"
Sid "suddenly..your friend did not inform you that I am her fianc "
Maan went from there..
Sid "your friend is smart ..gave us some private moments...My friends are really nosy but we need to leave this place I don't want to see my bride wiping her nose on the day of wedding"
They went to farmhouse..Rain had stopped..Sid had soon aquainted himself with kids..Geet's restless eyes were searching for Maan who was absent from there...Daadi herself was in a turmoil to support whom so she had left this decision on them..Geet slowly moved away from that place and reached to the open terrace where maan was doing Tai-chi..His tonned body was shining with the sprinkles of sweat…his fierce look was showing his anger..He stopped when Geet came near him
Geet"Maan I was about to tell you"
Maan"When Geet ,after your marriage"
Geet"Maan you are my best friend"
Maan"but I don't want to live like your best friend...I Lo.."
Geet kept her hand on his mouth"Please Maan it will make me hate myself..I wont forgive myself"
Maan pushed her hand away and said"geet ..I love you and I know you love me too"
Geet"I am getting married to Sid next week"
Maan"Just one question..you love him"
Geet choked her breath and said "Yes"
Maan was able to read the truth in her eyes "Don't lie geet"
He pinned her against wall and said"you love me"
Geet while trying to get free said"I don't maan"
Maan"Really Geet"
He came closer and slammed his lips against her nibbling gently..Geet tried to control her emotions but whose touch was producing sensation in her..his closeness was really impossible for Geet to resist..Maan started licking her lips in between biting it gently..Geet gave in and parted her lips..giving an open invitation to maan..her one hand encircled his neck and by other she made her grip on his hair..She felt like she was melting in his arm..Maan accepted the invitation and soon he was exploring every corner of her mouth...The more the kiss deepened the more Geet's clutch on Maan tightened urging to keep her in his arms forever..They parted their lips gasping for breath..
Maan"Do I need to prove anything else or you kiss anyone whom you find"
Geet was cursing herself for revealing her feelings..she broken down"Maan..I do love you "
Maan cupped her face with his hand"Then why Geet..why are you spoiling three lives"
Geet"Maan,I cannot break Sid's heart..he was with me when I was broken..no one was with me..When I left home no one was with me but only Sid"
Maan"Geet for this you cannot marry him..you love me"
Geet"Maan we don't get what we want always and in my case never...Sid was the person who helped me in healing the wounds of my broken heart..Maan you will learn I had also learnt when I came to know you"
She left her words untold as she realized what she was about to say but Maan understood what she was about to...
Maan"Kab se Geet"
Geet "Jab se tumhe jaana hai..Jab se se pyaar ko samjha hai"
Maan"why you never told me"
Geet"Maan now you love me coz you know the true face of Sam but that time Maan you never saw me like that but Sid always loved me as I was,as I am and will be till I am"
Maan"Geet iski itni badi saza"
Geet"Saza to mujhe bhi mili hai Maan..atleast I was in dream that you are happy with Sam and you do not need me but now I will have a guilt that I have broken your heart.."
Maan"Why don't you understand ..you don't have feelings for him he is your friend..would you be able to forget me and accept him, as your husband "
Geet"Not possible that I can forget you in this life..but I will try aur feelings ka kya hai..he loves me and don't take it as comment but I saw your marriage..Maan someone has said you may not get a good friend in your husband but you will get a good husband in your friend.."
Maan"Geet ..I am happy that I loved you..Go before I change my mind"
Geet"Maan I am going away from you maybe for ever ...just want to get little strength to face a whole life without you"
She embraced Maan tightly ..Her head was resting on her chest...her lips were praying for her death so that she can never go away from him...She looked at moon which was glowing yesterday was looking dull today as if someone snatchd its light...
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Precap-
Daadi"Kya hua Sid beta"
Sid"All halls are booked Daadima"
Daadima"No problem ..Geet is like my daughter..unki doli KM se uthegi"
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it dear
yes i loved it when geet said
he did not love her when she is her
when she changed she loved him
that pains me somewhere
dear
waiting for the next update dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 yaar
thanxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh didnt make it first this time... never mindGreat update Sur!!!!
Really well written
Saba xxx

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