My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: renjini263

Fabulous dear...nd luvd geets dress...plz continue soon. nd thanx 4 d pm😊

Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srilu_123

hai


this is awesome and great
maan feels for geet

Thanks dear...soon he will relise his love too...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pri01

Hey sur jaanu awesome update love it

so Maan is falling for Geet
plzzz update asap thx for the pm love ya🤗

Hey Priyu thanx yaar...
maan will soon realize his feelings...
love ya🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhi_s

nice part .

want maan to love geet.
pls update soon.

Thanks dear😊
maan will soon realise his feelings...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

wow a bridal dress,...dance... that too in love house

Thanks dear...
I guess this will spark some love in them
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Prabhkallu

Allah! You're too good! Update soon as u can!

Thaks for your kind words dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey friends thanks alot for your likes and comments...

Chapter-13

The night was at its full charm..The whole atmosphere was silent engulfed in darkness and the moon was the only light..Geet came to the window and gave a glance to the full moon which was looking so beautiful though it was surrounded by darkness but it was giving light to the atmosphere..Geet smiled and thought
Geet kya ho gaya tha tujhe jhalli..but were we about to..ahh..what I am thinking Maan was drunk but I was in my senses..Geet you need to stop yourself Sid waited for you so long you cannot do this to him..
She shrugged her weird thoughts and closed her eyes to relax for a moment but it was useless as she was getting flashbacks of the left kiss..She finally went to bed giving last glance to the moon
"Moon not only soothes eyes but mind too..then why my heart beats are not getting calm on watching the moon why..?..Was that my temptation as I am sure I was in my senses then what was bounding me as if I was bound by any spell...Am I in..no ,not again and it will only break relations..I am an idiot ..I will ask sorry from Geet..she must be feeling bad.."thought Maan
Next morning..
Maan had fell asleep outside on bench..He woke up on hearing the sound of car's engine and saw Yash coming towards him
Yash wished him with his dazzling smile"Good morning Maan"
Maan"Good morning Yash..what was that sound?"
Yash"That sound was of your car..your car is fit and fine..lovely boy just got some infection"
Maan"I guess you love cars too much..um we should leave now"
Yash"But your princess is still in her bedroom taking a good sleep"
Maan"I will wake her up"
Yash"Go with tea..i will make it for you both"
Maan "No ,I will do ..just show me the things"
They went to the kitchen ..Maan prepared tea and breakfast for three of them..
Maan"Lets go in the service of princess"
Yash giving an are you kidding look"Maan..your princess you go otherwise you will say yash Kabab me haddi ban gaya..I will take tea and breakfast and think about my Pari"
Maan"as you wish"
Yash"Maan thanks for the breakfast and all the best"
Yash hugged Maan and went to his room with breakfast..maan was unable to react on this ..He also moved and reached Geet's room..He saw Geet was sleeping peacefully, a lock of her hair was lying on her face..Maan came near her and gently pushed the lock back which was trespassing on her beautiful face..He pulled the curtains to have sunlight..The sharp sunlight felt on Geet's face ..Her sleep was disturbed but she ignored it and pulled the blanket on her face..maan smirked and kept his hand on his hips..
Maan"geet get up..we need to leave"
Geet"maan sone do na"
Maan"Geet what you were doing whole night?"
Geet"subah soye hoon yaar"
Maan pulled her blanket but she was holding it firmly knowing Maan's next step..and then she suddenly pulled the blanket with all her force when Maan loosened his grip a little..making him fall over her..There face was so close that there noses were touching each other..Maan was again lost in drooling her beauty..Geet felt uneasy by his penetrating gaze..
Geet"Maan,I have got up"
Maan"Haan I had brought tea and breakfast for you"
Geet"Thanks but"
Maan still looking at her"but what?"
Geet"get off from me"
Maan realized he was still on her top..he stood and started looking sideways to hide his embarrassement..Geet smiled seeing his face..After sometime they were ready to leave..They thanked Yash for being such a wonderful host and friend..They exchanged their numbers..Maan and Geet left for the farmhouse with sweet memories
On Farmhouse
Daadima"Thanks beta hume aapse yahi umeed thi"
Nakul came there"Daadima Maan sir aur Geet madam aa gaye"
Precap-You spent a whole night with a girl and you are telling me that everything is finr and to relax..Hume aapse ye umeed nahi thi aapne hamare viswas ka fayda uthaya hai Geet..I will never forgive both of you "
Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooo hooo!!!! I'm first!!! For the second time... I think lol 😆
Great update Sur!!!! Loved it loads!!!!!
This FF rocks!!!
Update Soon!!!!
Love you, mwah xxx
Saba xxx
Edited by Maaneet4everXxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update yar...the precap scares me...but i know everythings gonna be fine tc😊

Wat is love??????

Love...
Sweet sounds from the music of the heart
Composed of flowers and flattery
Played by instruments--each has its own part
Sung with passion and delicacy

Love...
Faded pages with meaning beyond comprehension
Written with strength and fervency
Read by many with constant devotion
Stored on shelves of diversity

Love...
Strokes of vivid colors and happiness
Drawn by the instinct of desire
Painted with tenacious tenderness
Displayed in galleries of grandeur


❤️

Priya


Edited by Bloomysunday - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice.
Precap is quite scary

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