My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

loved it hehehhehe loved the bus stop part more

continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angelaraf

love this ff

please cont soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry guys for this late update but was stuck in something...will try to update frequently...hope you have not forgotten the story... Thanks for liking and commenting as it always motiveates me
Chapter #8
Geet was thinking of some plan while Maan was driving ..her eyes fell to the vendor who was selling Golgappa..She shouted"Maan Stop the car"...Maan applied brake on hearing her shouting
Maan asked with concern"Geet what happened..?"
Geet sweetly replied"Maan I will eat golgappas"
Maan was hell angry on her"Are you mad I was afraid that what happen and you had to eat golgappas that two from road side..dont you know how much unhygienic these things are
Geet replied"No I just know the yummy mouth watering chatpata gloguppa"
Maan "Geet you can eat in somer good hotel...I promise I will take you to the one"
Geet"Maan you are joking you are comparing it with a hotel one chi...kahan ye(raising her hand towards sky) aur kahan wo(placing her hand downside)..Please Maan chalo na"
Maan "never"
Geet"Whatever..then I take your leave boss as my duty hours are over and I am mistress of my own will"...
She got out and kicked on the tier resulting in hurting herself making Maan smile…for a moment he was lost in taking sips of her innocence from her beautiful face..she was pure without any mixture of this two faced world ...She turned to look at Maan and his expressions ..Their eyes met..and something strucked in their heart the beauty of a feeling but just for a second as Maan cursed himself for feeling something for her anything more a moment..Though a moment but it was wrong..He broke the eyelock and came out of the car
Maan "Chalo nautanki"
Geet "No let it be if you don't want"
Maan smirked"Okay then lets go home"
Geet "no maan if you are insisting then how can I refuse"
Maan replied"No I am not insisting I just said "
Geet "see you are insisting"
Maan"No ,I am not"
Geet"You are Maan"
Maan"No I am not"
Couple who had witnessed their drama on bus stop were passing by and paused on seeing the two fighting again"
The lady came"Beta why are you fighting again that too on rod"
Geet"No aunty we were just discussing Maan wants to eat mithi puri and Ii wanted to eat chatpata teekha golguppa"
Lady"Beta whats the need of forcing one choice on other ..either you eat both the things or just what you want"
Maan"thank you aunty we will do that ..Have a good day"
Lady"You both look so good together just made for each other...God bless you..Chaliye ji"
Man"Chalo Bhagyawaan"
Maan's hand was resting on his waist...Geet slipped her arms in his and said"chaliye ji"
Maan smiled"Chalo chalti firti accident ki dukan"
Geet "What do you mean I am prone to accidents" ..
she left his hand and was about to turn but stepped on a stone and stumbled but Maan grabbed her hand on time and pulled ...Her body slammed against his..her hands were on his shoulder and they looked in each others eyes while an irritated person who was passing said"Saare laila majnu issi sehar me jama hue hai..har jagah chumma chati karte milte hain..(All the laila majnu are gathered in this city only..everywhere they do their kissing session)...There is no privacy word in their vocab
Geet moved away"maan let it be I will eat golguppa later"
Maan"why are you hearing to such rustics..just leave ..lets go"
They went to the vendor..he was talking on phone"Are hamri jalebi ,hamri Rasgulla naeaz kahe hoti ho.."maan whispered "Your spicy vendor loves sweet"
Vendor continued"Arey hamri rabri I laave uu..abhi ek mitthy de dau uu ka hai na lagat hai customer aaye hain rakhat hain..aigo mitthy ..chalo rakhte hai"
Maan whispered "Geet what is mitthy"
Geet smiled"Um nothing lets eat "
Later when they reached KM..
Chahak who was waiting or Maan turned her face away when he arrived
Maan"Kya hua my lilttle princess ko"
Chahak pouted "Chahak kisi se baat nahi karegi ...Chahak is angry ..You had promised me that you will come early and will spend time with me"
Maan "Now this is a serious problem what should we do?...See Chahak Papa is holding his ears"
Chahak gave a glance to him then made face and looked away saying"Nine hundred ninety nineth time you are trying this but this time Chachak wont show any mercy..I will not talk to you"
Maan sat beside her"hmm ok then Papa will alone go for dinner outside then a chocolate ice-cream yum...then for a drive and will chat to himself in Angel's world(a tree house Maan had gifted Chahak where they were going together once in a month)
Chahak"But that's my possession and no one can enter their without my permission"
Maan"Then what Will I do?"
Chahak"I will allow you if you will take me and Geet aunty with you...Geet aunty you will come na"
Geet"But "
Chahak"Come na"
Geet"OK"
All the while Geet noticed her old maan was back with Chahak...
Geet to herself
Whats making him so restless...I feel there is something ..some kind of burden that he has enclosed to himself..For everyone Sam's death changed Maan but then why there is no pictures of sam in the whole mansion
Maan"So how's angel"
Geet"Sorry"
Maan"I am talking about this tree house"
Geet "great"
Maan "you look troubled..everything is fine"
Geet nodded...Chahak made them play truth and dare..
Maan's turn to ask question,he asked to Chahak"Angel why your teacher called me today to see her tomorrow"
Chahak"I did not write anything in the test "
Maan"Why whats the matter ..I am providing you everything the best then where was the problem?"
Chahak started sobbing"The topic was mother and I don't know anything"
Geet embraced her..Maan was lost in deep thought but Geet did not witnessed sorrow but pain as any wound of his has been teased..She tried to change the topic
Geet"Who will see Charlie chaplin with me"
Chahak"me"
Maan brought a false smile"Me too but first chahak will give the best performance in next test"
Geet "Kya Maan bacchi kop pareshaan karte ho..she will ..."
Chahak"haan..haan"
They watched one movie after the other..Chahak slept in Geet's lap and geet also adter sometime dozed off on Maan's shoulder..Maan gave a loving glance to both of them..He tried to shift her head to the cushion but she comfortably adjusted her head on his shouder holding his arm..he placed the cushion on his back and slept
In morning Daadi and Nakul came
Nakul"Daadima ye toh.."
Daadi"Shh...Dont they look like a happy family..bring the camera"
Nakul"Jji...ji"
Daadi"Jitna kaha basa utna kariye"
Daadi took a snap of them..Daadi self-thought
God is this a sign that Maan and Chahak can be happy with Geet only..She is the person who can make this family a family in true sense..but Geet is engaged to Sid though I cannot see that happiness in Geet's eyes with Sid that I saw with Maan..Is Geetnot happy with her relation...For my family I cannot ignore Geet's happiness but what if Geet's happiness is with my Maan
Daadi"wake up its 10"
Maan woke up and smiled then realized Geet 's head which was on his shoulder was now on his chest and her one hand holding Chahak from other side..He sprung up in embarrassment jerking her head down on bed
Geet"Ouch.."..She got up massaging her head ..
Daadi smiled"Geet beta ..go get fresh Nakul will bring tea for you and now you can make Chahak sleep on bed" Geet saw Chahak was still sleeping in her lap..she place her on bed and kissed her forehead
Maan"I should also get ready..its too late"
When Maan left..Geet"daadi how Sam died?"
Daadi"In a car accident as Maan told"
Geet"I didn't get you"
Daadi"Maan and Sam had to leave for US ..soon after their marriage ..and when Sam was six months pregnant she came back to India and soon after Chahak's birth she left for US for some important work but that day(Daadi sat on bed)..Maan called and informed sam left him when I asked what he is saying he said that she died in a car accident "
Geet consoled Daadi..Daadi left...Geet to herself"Now I am sure there is something fishy ...I remember Maan you had told once we should not tease any old wound but I guess its necessary to tease the old wound when it comes to life otherwise it can make the whole life miserable and suffering why not to remove it and get freedom from it by suffering all the pains at once rather than suffering for whole life
Precap-Maan revealing the reason behind not even a single picturev of Sam in the whole mansion
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome awesome update!!!!!!!
Loved it loads!!!!! Waiting to see what happens next...
Saba xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing 👏
Edited by NaGeSwArI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear
want to know the maan past
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome n thnks 4 pm.plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

'm waiting eagerly to know about maan n sam 's past ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sur meri jaan it's awesome 👏👏❤️❤️ sorry for coming late yaar
Love the whole golpapas scene so cute
Precap is interesting want to more about Maan past thx u for the pm love ya 🤗🤗

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