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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

pyar pyar pyar...insan ko himmat dete hai sare duniya se ladne k liye...uske against jaane k liye...


awesome update...


loved it...


thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...


thnk u 4 d lovly coment.. i m glad u lykd it..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

GEET WAS AWESOME

SHE TOLD THE WHOLE WORLD THAT MAAN WAS WITH HER THAT NIGHT AND LEFT HERSELF OPEN TO THE RIDICULE OF PETTY MINDED PEOPLE
THIS IS CALLED TRUE LOVE



thnk u Punam... thnks 4 d lovly cmnt...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta



beautiful update
loved GEET here.
she is soo strong n fearless
n loved MAANEET scene
n thanks for giving me special credit
but wud have been happier
if I cud make u write a longer update
next time defo do it😉




thanks di for the lovly cmnt di.. luv ya...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



BEAUTIFUL...

Geet gave her statement in court and proved him innocent...

they are so much in love...

waiting for next update...

Hey Mimi galtiyan to sudharne ke liye hi hoti hain...jab tumhein pata hai that this is ur 10 th update in 9 months ... now please don't repeat it...try to give quick update...


thnk u kiran di.. galtiyan sudharne ki try kar rahi hoon..

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Posted: 13 years ago


aur 1hour w8 krlo bas post kar rahi hoon..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

Romantic ❤️


Nice 👍🏼

The caption chosen wisely and its perfect 👏

I'll not say "SWEET"(As You don't like the word) 😔- Though the Maaneet part is very sweet 😊


My Maaneet FF:-
Love Birds In The Air (Just Click) 😊


thnk u payel di.. luv ya kp reading

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Finally mimi jaldi kar
tomorrow abdi wait karte habe


r ektu.. r 40 mints mto w8 karo.. aj D3 ta dekhe ese updt di6i..

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys finally part 11 is here.. it's net a big part but a important 1. so read it carefully.

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Jannat Part 11

There were 7-8 people were sitting in a house. All were in fun mood. The house was located a few mile far than locality.

"apne suna na court mei kya hua?" A man stated opening a bottle of alcohol.

"hmm." The leading figure sighed. "maine to soch hi liya tha sab kuch khatam. Ab to.. uff.. the girl is really brave."

"kyu nahi hogi? She is girl of my neighborhood." Another man spoke.

"kal se pata hai na tumhe kya karna hai?" the leading man spoke again.

"hmm. I have to deliver news of every second of the girl and the major." Other man replied.

Then all again started to do fun as if a battle won soldiers.

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An officer addressed a local girl as his fianc. A news like this can't be hidden. It was matter of a day and the news was all over the colony. It could have been a spicy gossip for the people who is living in fear every time but the announcement of engagement made them a little confused. Some said, "Major said it only to save himself. Take my word he wont marry Jannat," some said, "look at her audacity, she said it openly.. shameless," some said, "she is a brave girl" some said "what a love story' allah unpe meherban rahe."

They were sitting on their meeting spot. Both were silent.

"ap to sab kuch jante the na pahelese."

"Hmm. Isiliye to sabke samne sach kahe diya."

"sach? Kaisa sach?"

"Geet." He cupped her face. "I want to marry you as early as possible."

"Maan, ap jante hai ap kya kahe rahe hai? Ap hosh me to hai na?"

" hosh me tum the jab gaye the court mai witness banne ke liye?"

"wo baat alag hai Maan. Uss waqt apko meri zaroorat thi."

"aur iss waqt bhi hai, Geet." Maan stopped to take a breath . "now I need you more."

Geet was totally lost in his words. Suddenly she felt his breaths on her face. He was too close to her. Within a heartbeat she felt a soft kiss placed on her forehead.

"Geet. Mujhe bas yeh hi kahena tha.. age tumhari marzi." Every word Maan said were from the core of his heart. Geet had lost words to reply. He stood up and helped Geet to stand up. "chalo tumhe ghar chod deti hoon." Maan said clearing his troats.

They walk back to home was wrapped in silence. All were lost in there own thought.

"chalo ghar agaya." Maan was going to leave but Geet stopped her by holding his hand. "ab kya?"

"arre apne sasural se aise jate hai kya? Baharse?" Geet gave a smile full heartedly.

"Geet." Maan's eyes glittered with happiness. "tumhari ammi manegi?"

"ammi se shadi karni hai ya mujhse?" Geet gave a naughty smile.

"mazak acha kar lete ho."

"ammi ko mujhpe chod dijiye." She said confidently.

"Geet, I love you." Maan said engulfing her in an embrace.

"mujhe pata hai." She said hugging her back. "ab chodiye."

"mujhe jo sunna tha suna do chod dunga."

"nahi sunaungi."

"ok. Main vi ziddi hun. Nahi chodungi."

"I love you too. Ab to chodiye." Maan freed her from his hug though both of them wanted to stay in each other's hold forever. Geet placed a kiss on his forehead and left for her home.

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Next Day

New colonel just arrived on the office. Everyone was busy to show him files and works.

Colonel Singh. He was Maan's senior in school. They passed from the same training school. Maan knew him very well. Colonel was 34 years old 5'10 with really handsome physic. More than that he had a very charming personality who can charm over any girl within a few seconds. He was very flirty by nature but above all these he was a very good officer. Who can take and give life for his job even without thinking.

"May I come in Sir?" Maan spoke before entering colonel's cabin.

"yeah please." The colonel replied giving a half smile. "Major Khurana I'm not gonna do any formalities I'm straight to the topic. You know more than me about the people of here. In this small time span I have did a few research."

Maan was listening to him without uttering a single word. "Major Khurana, I know about your fianc and who she is. Her brother.."

"Sir, but no local people believe her brother can do stuffs like that." Maan said in a breath.

"no. not doesn't believe. They half believed." He stopped to drink water. "people are not that stupid. They can make 2 n 2 4. they can't believe it fully cause he was very sweet natured. I have questioned a few people known to him. but I couldn't questioned her family."

"Sir, what should I do?"

"you have the key to solve this case, Major Khurana."

"me?" as Maan looked at him with questioning eyes he nodded positively.

"yes you?"

"how?"

"your fianc. Major." He said circling a paperweight.

"with due respect sir I don't wanna bring her into this. I drew a line between my personal and professional life and want to maintain it." Maan said in a strong voice.

"Army man has no personal life specially when he has a terrorist's sister as her fianc. But what do you think they won't use her against us? We're doing this for her safety, for our safety and safety of thousands of innocent people. Think Major maybe in deepest part of your heart you want to do this too."

Maan couldn't deny his words he was left wordless in front of him.

"you may leave Major." Maan was going to leave but he stopped hearing Colonel's voice. "Major Khurana I know why you wanted to be posted here." Again a silence gulped them. "If you need any kind of help please tell me, I will do everything in my power."

"Thank you sir." Maan said and left the cabin.

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A group of five people were sitting on a deserted house. A small table lamp was giving light but wasn't enough to overcome the darkness of the room. A tension was working all over them.

"ap jab bahar the yeh sab kuch ho gaya Aasim bhai." The youngest one spoke.

"chief sab kuch jante hai?" He asked in a low tone.

"hmm. Sab kuch. Usne bas chup rahe ne ko kaha."

"bas. Ab chief ko kuch bhi batane ko zarorat nahin. Ab mujhe pata hai kya karna hai." He said in determined voice.


guys so how was it? nd wat do u thnk abt d new colonel??? plzzz do comment I m waiting.. n i wud love to see comments more that luv it, awsm update n nice part. thank you.


Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
m not happy yaar...where is the shock ha????? main jo soch rahi hoon wohi to nei???nehi mimi aisa matt hone dena...MAAN ka dill matt todna ok????nehi to mujhe bohot dukh hoga😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
hope maan doesnt do what his head is asking him to do...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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