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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

It was HOT...Dangerously Hot...Loved it to the core..So Beautifully written...Do write more...Thanks for the PM...take care

Lots of Love
GEET

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amaniM

@amaniM

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

O My God! what was that? do you have any idea what you just did? i'm having hot flushes! isn't it hot enough that you neeed to rais ethe temperature.

Serious note your writing has gone up a notch, the expressions you used, the feel terrific.

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divan_arshi

@divan_arshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

rida sweethearttt!!

that was incredible..that was HOT... loved it.😳

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Priyanka

@..KaJenDelena..

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

RES! Will comment in few days. Hope you dont mind ;)

EDITED!

Heyaaa Rida ;).

Okay, firstyly I am sooo shocked that I havent come across your work at all! I have been missing out on alot. Seriously the way you generate words into sentences is fascinating!

The OS was absolaute perfection. The name even better, it captures your attention instantly. I loved it completely and utterly! The whole background story and the emotions that were surfaced between the two was mindblowing.

The intensity between the two was electric, ahh have I told your words are amazing!? Seriously everything is detailed with percise um ... PERFECTION. Seriously. It was just amazing, the feelings and both their thoughts were represented beautifully.

Armaan and Ridhimma's inner battles and their intimate scenes were written really, like really well... I wonder why? hehe ;) I loved everything about it! You write like insane, one of the best pieces of writing I have seen in IF. One minor hiccup though, please dont use exclamination marks reguarly in writing, it doesn't look good. Sorrry Hope you dont mind me saying =)

Until next time, ciaooo <3 Priyanka.

Edited by ..KaJenDelena.. - 14 years ago

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

nice one... :)

bt i m angry wid u.. wen the hell r u gonna upd8 BTLOO??

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Nihson

@Nihson

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Nice part
Plz continue and add me to your pm list😃

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

oh.. my.. my...

it was so so so hot...

no other word to describe it...

cont. with ur os..

loved it

aditi

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

tht was hot...

arsh were really hot...

thnx fr d pm..

love

komal

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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

it was hot
loved it
thanks for the pm

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Very nice and awsm and super hot os buddy.
I cant explain dear that wht a wndrful os this is.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Do write more buddy.
T.c.

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