OS--Living in Forfeiture..

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

amazing!!!!!! loved it to bits!!!!!!!!

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

awesome ... superb ,...

perfect ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

awesome...

thnx for such a wonderful end...n not separating them...

loved their back story...the way they expressed their love...the way he kissed her when she turned 18...maan talking to his grandma abt her...loved all of it...

good that nandu heard them..otherwise pata nahi kya hota..

thnx for giving a happy end...

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Lovely Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

this was awesome...i really loved it...

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

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Shikha...this hug is not for the story...

Bu for the truthful words you said at the end...

Love is beautiful, love is essential...

But not only one kind...all kinds of love are essential...

And leaving behind and hurting your parents, who gave you life, who brought you up and who love you like your life for someone who in most cases must have come into our lives only a few years back (in this case it is different) is unacceptable...

If your love is meant to be then it will be no matter what...

If God has written his/her name in our fate then he/she will be ours...

Coming to the story

I have told you tons of time and I am telling you again you are one fabulous story teller...

The way you moved the scene through years...

Explaining everything from Maan's perspective...

Fabulous...

Thank you for this one😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Shiku dear jaanu i love u...
part 2
awesome part dear...
so very touching...
the pain, love, commitment and everything was so beautifully described...
excellent OS dear...
can i hope for an epilogue of their SR?
plz plz pretty plz...