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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Hi Sur, Nidhi and friends thx u this group FF it rocks i love it🤗🤗. Gals u r all gifted writers hats off to u ⭐️⭐️⭐️. Actually i read chapters 1 to 10 at one go and enjoy it well i don't hv words to describe the Khuranas men but the Khuranas bahus r very strong n determined n hope they will soon put their respective hubbies on the right track. Dadi rocks too.
Update soon waiting eagerly
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just read all the chapters. Great story and getting more and more interesting. Update Soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update👏 thanks for pm.hope khurana came on track.loving the badi dadi.do cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Chapter 8
It was half past 10, all the daughter in laws were engrossed in cleaning the place.

Nidha- "Gosh.. these people have made a mess.."

Sur- "Choti, aise hi hoti hai inki badi badi parties"

Fiza & Ramona who were in badi daadi's room also joined them.

Fiza- "Bhabhi, aap Maan Bhai ke paas jayiye, Hum sab kar denge."

Sur- "No.. We'll do it together"

Nidha- "Bhabhi, Di is right. We'll do it. You should rest."

Ramona-" Bhabhi, They all have an important Meeting tomorw. Krishna & Maan bhai were discussing about it." After a lot of persuasion, Sur agreed. Jeh called out to Nidha.

Nidha- "Bhabhi, I'll be right back."

After a while, Sid stumbled in through the door. He was drunk.

Ramona gasped- "Sid Bhai"
Fiza rushed to his side. She placed her hands on his shoulder, but Sid shoved them off- "I dont need Your help"

Ramona- "Bhai, Aap..."

Sid cut her off- "Go to ur room. Baba will be waiting for U..Go "
Ramona didnt want to leave but Fiza asked her to go.

Ramona left & Fiza turned to Sid- "Sid, Lets go upstairs"

Sid- "Nope.. Im not going anywhere with you. Tumhe jaana hai toh jao."

Fiza- "Dekho Sid.."

Sid- "Tum Dekho.. Look I can walk. I dnt need ur support." He somehow managed to walk towards his room. Fiza just followed him quietly. On entering inside, He pulled Fiza & fastened the door.

Sid growled- "What was all that?"

Fiza was confused- "What?"

Sid frowned- "You very well knw what I meant."

Fiza- "Sid, Kya keh rahe ho tum?"

Sid marched towards Fiza- "Oh.. My innocent wife doesnt know what Im talking abt."

Fiza kept moving behind until she hit the wall- "Get to the point"

Sid slammed his fist against the wall- "You & Arnav"

Fiza- "Arnav.. Come on Sid, He's my best friend." Fiza who was watching Sid's reaction carefully knew that the arrow had struck in place. Her husband was at bursting point. She decided to speak about Arnav in an overjoyed manner.

She grabbed Sid's hand & made him sit down- "We were tagged as the hottest couple in college."
Sid started losing his temper. Hearing another guy's name from his wife's mouth made him mad. Fiza hid a smirk.

She continued, "Arnav used to always make fun of me coz I wasnt good at sports. I still remember the cycle race when I lost my balance & fell straight on him"

Sid- "He touched you?! He touched what belonged to me. I wont spare him."

Fiza(narrowing her eyes)- "What are you going to do?"

Sid- "Thats none of your business"

Fiza was worried- "Dont you dare hurt him."

Seeing Fiza getting so protective, Sid grew wild- "Or else.."
Fiza- "Or.. " before she could complete Sid pulled her into a tight embrace and locked his lips forcefully onto hers.
"thanks for the Anniversary Gift darling" he said pulling back and smirking at a shaken teary eyed Fiza.


Edited by RDKFF - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My sweet Deverani Ramona Darling i loved it rocking update👏👏👏👏👏loved it to bits these khurana men i tell you god ek tho ghar pe drunk aate aur uski upar biwi ko help nahin chaiye who bhi jab koi samane hai tho zara sa acha behave kar na ... and the room scene wow loved❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ so not even asecond where in the room and he express how Jelouse he is nice and loved the hottest couple and bike story it got him fuming but my poor hubby so drunk he doesnt relize when he said "he touched you He touched what belong to me" well hubby dear i was not your at the time and i fell it wasnt on purpose so chill and dont u dare hurt arnav i swear you didnt let me finish well if u do na dadi aap ka class liygi understood and the end scene wowww😳i was so 😳😳😳☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ when reading it and thenwhen i can to my sense iwas 😲😲😲😲😲😡😡😡😡😡😡 how could he kiss me i mean it just a kiss but if he could do that then who knows what else he will do next god help me ovee all awesome just fab luv ❤️ ya dear

Edited by lalmirch28 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
nice chapter😳👏⭐️
keep it up 👏
thanx for the pm 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwesum prt
faaab ...amamzing
sid is getting jealous ...gr888
updt sooon plezzz
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
It was great Ramona... Damn Sid kissed her😛 Was he fighting or was looking for a chance to get his gift sid you are a jerk aur suru me kaise attitude dikha raha tha... Gr88 one👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

***Ch 9: TASTE OF YOUR KNOWN MEDINCE

In SurMaan room****

Sur came out of the bathroom

She saw maan on his lap top working on some project

Maan you haven't changed yet your night suite is on the bed its late lets go to sleep says sur

No im not tired you go to bed I have work mein change kar ka atta says maan

Sur went o her cupboard and got out her scrapbook and started looking at it she was smiling

Maan came out and saw her

Why are you smiling kya hua kya dehke re ho asks maan

Come sit here ill show you its my scrapbook of me and armaan and sonam his sister

In the book there a picture of sur in armaans arms and he is in only a towel

What hell is this why is he only in a towel ands why are you in his arms says maan

She notices maan getting green Sur looks at the pic and starts laughing yeh omg I remember this maan this is such a funny story I ll tell you

*Flash back*

Sur going upstairs in to sonams room

(sur opens the door goes in hears the shower on )

Sonam yaar hurry up says sur

Facing the bathroom door suddenly the door opens and Armaan walks out in a towel (just like ranbir kapoor in sawariya)

They both are shocked looking at each other

Sur tum yahaan kyun aye says armaan

Sur (turning around covering her eyes ): I should be the one asking you that Q's, what are u doing in Sonams 's room, I came to see what was taking her so long

The AC isn't working in this room so I let Sonam sleep in my room says sur

Sur is next to the bed about leave when she see's a

Sur Yelling at the top of her lungs: chipkali(jumping on the bed)

Oye sur calm down plz calm down says Armaan

Sur foot slips she falls into Armaans arms

Armaan almost loses his balance but his hand hit the radio song starts playing.

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanamPyaar hota hai deewana sanamTujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam (Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanamPyaar hota hai deewana sanam) - 2Ab yahan se kahan jaaye humTeri baahon mein mar jaaye hum

Sur 's eye's are close but Armaan is stairing at her beautiful face and smiling( Moving bharti's hair from her face behind her ear )

Daanish sonam run ito the room after hearing the scream

dude Armaan why is my sister in your arms and on top of all that why are u only in a towel? Asks Daanish

sur opening hers eyes after hearing Daanish voice

bro mein sonam ko milne aye phir armaan towel then chipkali phir mein armaan ki ba '. bahoon mein gi'. giri blushing looking the other way.

Armaan slowly puts sur down

Sorry and Thank u Armaan says sur

It's alright Senorita, Bade Bade Deshon Mein, Aisi Choti Choti Baatein Hoti Rahti Hain."(smiling)

Says Armaan

*flash back ends *

Maan is turning red with anger after listening to the story

Isnt that so funny god sab log khete the ki mein aur armaan wrer just like SRK and Kajol and do you know n maan ki bach pan mein na jab hum ghar ghar khel the the na armaan humaisha mere patni bantha tha good bachpan those were the days says sur

Maan is so irrated after hearing the story he thinks to himself what the hell just looking at these pictures she is so happy how can she be happy looking at another guy other then me im her husband no

Maan grabs the scrapbook from her hand and throws it on the floor turns sur towards him he squeezes her arm

Maan your hurting me let go leave me says sur

Oh really I don't care after what you've done you deserve it says maan

What have I done tum itne upset kyun hai says sur

Maan slaps her this is because

aaj party mein uski saath both hassre thi na aur tum usko hug kare how dare you touch another man how dare you now don't give that teary eyed innocent face and

Don't act innocent infront of me it wont work with me ' and What do you mean those were the days huh tum khush the tumhare armaan ke saath huh after seeing him tonight your old feeling for him have ignited again well let me tell you this if he is your armaan then I am your Haqeeqat got it and don't you ever show be this book again got it says maan

Kyun jelouse hai you know the thing isn'tseeing with another guy its seeing with some how cares and respects me it hurts your so called male ego. That how can my wife be happy and laughing with him and not me well the thing that upsets you the most is how he is doingwhat your soposed to do you're my husband you're the one that took the vows to be with in the difficult times , to keep me happy to respect me to care for me but you see me getting all that from my childhood friend armaan an dyou cant bare it ' when we got married I understood the vows and I kept my promises but for you im only a sevrvant to do your things and a pleasure doll to fulfill your manly desires' when we got married I willingly gave my body not my soulor my identiy got it im not some piece of trash for you to throwing whenever you want . your upset that I laugh with armaan he told me a joke just to see me smile and today I asked you for one of the biggest happiness a woman wants after marriage a baby but oyu didn't care about my happiness . in facted you slapped me . until you respect and show me that you careand love me till then there will be no physical relationship between us got it says sur

Maan is about to slap her when she stops him I don't think so my dear hubby she pushes his hand away

He leaves the room

Sur sits down and opens her diary

Tanhayee ke alam mein ek parivaar basaaya maine
Apne mehboob ko usme sajaaya maine
Duniyaa bhar ki khushiyaan simat aayi uss ek kone mein
Jahan khada hoke apne gum bhulaye the kabhi maine
Sabkuch paas tha par jism jaan ke liye ek boojh tha
Khushi ke aangan mein khud ko tanha kiya maine

Edited by RDKFF - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow these Khuranna men are a single piece you know😆
Khud tho apne biwiyon khush nahi rakh sakthe...jab koi aur unhe khush rakhne ki koshis karthe hain tho aise jal utthe hain jaise inhe koi chashni mein paka rahe hon😆
Wonderful Maan Singh Khuranna...you are simply great...😡
Badi bhabhi you should just leave him and go then maybe he will understand your value...
Why the hell does he have to raise his hands always😡
Chaddo yeh tho humein kabhi samajh nahin aane wala...
Bhabhi aapki bachpan tho bahuth superb hain😆
Enjoyed reading it Fiza...
You have done an awesome job jaan😊

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