Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed

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sunshine33

@sunshine33

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Well worth the wait...

Oh give us some more details on the hotel happenings with our sweet jalebi girl and the demon :)

Hope your next chapter is soon.

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

hey jeezy

if i can say a line about this update , it goes likethis

" a beautiful dream ends on a night mare !@$#@

arghhh

well what a start :D

i so love it adn going out of town is so needed fopr them

love their car journey , it was awesome :D

and they way khsuhi asks him question ,

it was awesome

i so love and enjoyed it

cant wait for the presentation

and what tha shayam and bua ji

grrr hate them so want to slaughter them

though love the update

way to go !

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

its awesomeee <3

waitin for more arhi

and 'Eat!' was realllyyy cute

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Let Me Read The Whole SS First =) 😳

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

EAT! that was funny 😆

And whats wrong wit buaji? Khushi and shyam? * gulps *

Anyways lovely chapter. Continue soon 🤗

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26javey

@26javey

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

That was amazing. Arnav is so sweet. I wanna know her past too and Shaym should die. Thanks for the pm and continue soon.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

EAT!! part was hilarious

shyam and khushi...i am scared...what is buaji doing

great update

please continue and update soon

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Hey,it was a lovely update.loved their convo in the car and also the caring arnav.

keep going👍🏼

raunika

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Fab part Zee :D Adored it! Favourite part was definitely the conversation between Arnav and his heart! Adored it! <33

I wanted to laugh at La the Blah! BooHOO! LOL! :P I love Arnav for telling her to not call him ASR! And then he indirectly told her that Khushi is better than her! Ahaha! In your face! :P Loved loved loved Khushi's determination to continue her work despite La the Blah's efforts to ruin her presentation!

Rude Mean Obnoxious self-conceited Jerk!

🤣 That managed to very well crack me up! LOL! :P

'that's the point Miss Gupta, I dont feel, I think' Arnav pointed.

That line made me want to cry for Arnav! I could feel Arnav's pain! I feel so bad for him! :( Poor him.

She turned to Arnav and chuckled nervously which died then and there, she could swear she saw Arnav smile! and he was still smiling just a little more subtle one, looking quite amused as he stepped towards her.

I could picturise this WHOLE scene! Zee, this was a m a z i n g! :D Like, LOVED it :D

That whole time Arnav was in his room, in the balcony, wishing he was like the others! I tell you Zee, this was superb! :) Loved it :) You are amazing :D

'Eat!'

🤣 ASR's style of caring and being nice! Bechari Khushi! LLOL :P

SHYAM 😡 No, I just don't like him 😆 Just a question, is he Anjali's husband in your FF too? :)

All in all, one fabulous update! You truly are amazing Zee! :) I am officially your fan :D

Update soon please? :P I missed your FF.. like, a lot! :D

Lots of Love

Jyotika

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