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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part... but i m tensed wht will maan do when dadi say to him abt his so called wedding wd sameera...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hima love the update.👏👏👏👏👏👏 Me like geet's nickname chinky, sorry I was a bit slow the first time😊. Geet got scared the minute she heard rano's voice and she is nervous. Lool love how maan is teasing geet and even rano notices that geet is not paying attention.

Loool me love maan being naughty by tickling geet. She is having trouble controlling herself with maan beside her and she does not want to say anything that will make rano suspect anything. 😆

Loool I love how maan is taking advantage of having control over geet's talkative nature. Geet is going to get maan once she finishes the call. 😆😆😆😆

Loool I love how maan echo's geet when rano told geet to come back to. loool even rano heard maan's voice. Geet pinching maan to be quiet is funny. 😍😍😆😉

Maan is distracting geet so much that she is not being able to listen to what her mum is saying. Geet describing maan as dusht danav to her mum was funny. Love their nok jhok, it always brings a smile to my face.😍😍😍😍😍😍

I can imagine maaneet's shock at rano coming there. Lool geet is trying to think of reasons for rano not to come. The way geet said teek hai was like she had no choice.😆😆😆😆

I understand geet's worry, she wants rano to love maan and is worried about how strict rano and whether she will like maan or not. I am sure rano will love maan after all he is perfect.😊

Hate sameera for sending her parents to maan's house, she is so evil. Sameera thinks that her parents will put pressure on maan to marry her. 😡😡😡😡

Aww I love how maaneet are worried about how they will meet if rano comes there. I like maan's confidence that rano will accept him. so sweet when geet calls maan my dusht danav and maan as her sherni.😍😍😍😍😍

I loved it when geet said that no one can change her decision about maan and how she wants maan as his life partner.👏👏👏. Their love will convince anyone who tries to come in their way. 👏👏👏 Geet hugging a shirtless maan is dreamy. Aww geet accepted that she was seduced by maan. Me like the naughty thoughts maan is having.😍😍😍😉

Lool he makes the shirt button off so geet can sew it and he can be close to her. So romantic that she made him wear the shirt. I so would love to see maan pout, geet will not be able to resist him. ❤️❤️😍😍😍😍

His plan worked as geet notices the button. Loool maan pretending to be innocent is funny.😆😆😆😆😆 I love how maan is seduced by geet's closeness that he says ouch while she is sewing his shirt button.Lagta hai choot straight dil per lagi. ❤️❤️😆😆 Lool geet knew the effect she was having on maan and lool she purposely pricks maan's skin. 😍😍😍😍😍😆😉

Love the way she teases him by asking if it hurt. 😆😆😆😆Me love this scene where geet kisses his bare chest, hugs him and at the same is apologising to maan. 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️

Love how maan moves away as he is about to loose his control near geet. aww geet thinks that he moved away because she hurt him. 😆😉 love maan's honesty that he told her that he moved because her touch was making him crazy. Maan just accepted that he too is seduced by geet. 😍❤️❤️❤️

Thank you me wanted to see geet makes maan wear the shirt and sew his button. 😍😍😍😍👏👏👏

Hai me loved it when maan said that bahut kuch hota hai and called her geet his dhak dhak and meeshti. 😍😍😍😍❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks 4 showering all ur wonderful comments ...loved reading them &thnks 4 liking the update ...

sorry dearies 4 not updating ...will def giveu all an update very soon ... I was really busy with work...

thnks 4 waiting ...shall try 2 update ASAP ...

love U all...thnks 4 ur patience ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
eagerly waiting 4 next part
please update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi

eagerly waiting 4 next part
please update soon dear

i am extremely sorry 2 keep u all waiting shall try 2 give u all an update very soon ... the prob is i am not having time 2 write any tihng ... i shall def def write the update hopefully by sunday ... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry for the delay … Will be updating shortly … in 2 mins …

Sorry for the delay in updating friends … thanks for ur patience…. I hope U all are still reading DKK …. & have not lost interest in the FF …. sorry once again for the delay … hoping that I shall not delay updating this FF in future …

Loved reading all your comments …. Please continue to shower your precious comments on my FF DKK … thanks for commenting … love u all…..

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Posted: 13 years ago

😳as its been ages that I updated … a quick recap of the story …

Recap:-

Maan & geet were romancing after their secret wedding… in the mean while sameera tries to poison geet's mother's mind about maan& geet relationship … rano worried about her daughter's life calls geet& informs her that she will be coming to delhi to stay with her …. Geet& Maan were wondering as to how they both will meet each other if geet's mother will be living with geet as of now their meeting place after work is geet's home …. At the same time In khuranaMansion dadima was trying to reach maan but could not reach him as maan forgot his cell in his car …

maaneet were romancing while geet was stitching the button what maan took off from his new shirt … while romancing maan gives geet a new name DD(Dhak Dhak )& after that geet hugs maan ….

Now ….

Part 24 :-

Geet hugs him again… maan pulls her face close to his face … geet is looking into his eyes … he is closing in the space between their faces … tilts his face a bit … kisses first on her left cheek … then on her nose …. Then on her right cheek … while maan & geet were eye lock was session was on … maan comes close to her right ear … geet thought maan would kiss her ear & imagining what he could do & how romantic he could get … her heart beats started rising … maan could hear her heart beats & at the same time … even she could hear her heart say dhak dhak dhak dhak … geet closed her eyes … only to reaslise that ... maan did something which was not at all expected by geet …

Maan – will you resume stitching or not ….

Geet laughes nervously – oh yeah … I forgot …

Maan – hmmm … you forgot …

Geet – haan …

Maan – Maan Singh Khurana ka jaadu hi kuch aisa hain …koi isse bach nahin paayega ….

Geet pouting – haan … bada aaye jaadugar ….

Maan placing his hands on his hips – oh … really …

Geet – haan …. Koi jaadu waadu garr nahin hain aap …

Maan - lagtha hain … maan singh khurana abhi … tumhe apni jadugari dikhani padegi …

Geet was standing in front of him looking up at the ceiling in a I don't care attitude … thinking that you can do what ever you want to do … but nothing can affect me … maan also looks up to check out who is there on the ceiling that his DD was looking at & finds no one there … & Coming to maan he was no less … we all know that …

Maan – let's see …

He started unbuttoning the buttons slowly … what geet buttoned before she started stitching … he was opening the buttons leaisurely … 1st button gets opened "pop" … geet saw what maan was upto & now she started walking backwards with the needle still in her hand … maan was moving forward geet backwards … while unbuttoning his shirt …. Conversation continues ….

Geet – ma … ma … an ... what aa .. r u doing …

Maan in his sensous voice – whatever I was supposed to do ….

Geet to herself – hey babaji ……. What is he saying …

Geet - wh … at are you talking ….. ma … an … wh … shou ….ld you do.

Maan still in his sensous voice – what ever the situation demands…

Geet – what is the situation …

Maan sensous voice continues – what ever is happening right in front of you …

Geet – ma … an …plz …

Geet while walking backwards goes & hits the wall … maan pins her to the wall …

Maan coming close to her ear … – what happened … DD … got scared … of my magic …

Geet was nodding her head in a no … maan started blowing air near her ear … geet could sense the hotness … she was looking at him with her hand placed in between them which was holding the needle … Maan was closing in the space between them & places his hand on her waist … geet closes her eyes as soon as she felt his touch … he was closing in the space between their lips & was coming close to her while caressing her bare waist … there was only few millimeters space in between their lips & the distance between them was reducing … maan was about to kiss her but something pricks him hard on his chest …

maan – ouch …

geet opens her eyes …

geet – what happened …

geet realises that unknowingly she had pricked him hard with the needle that she was holding in her hand … Maan checking on the place where he got hurt … geet realises that she had the needle in her hand …

geet –I am sorry maan …

Maan – its ok geet… it was my fault as I pressed myself too hard onto you …

Geet blushes & keeps her head down ….

Maan continues - without even realising that you were holding the needle ….

Maan holding her chin with his right hand & lifting her head up & coming close to her ear ….

Maan – will you now atleast resume your stitching …. Or … you are doing all this so that I can stay with you tonight ….

Geet – what …

Geet felt as though maan caught her … Geet wanted maan to stay with her tonight as she felt that as her mother was coming she may not be able to spend time with maan the same way she is doing now … but she is trying to cover her self …

Geet - I don't have any such intentions ….

Maan – really … but your eyes are speaking something else … DD …

Geet – what are they saying … nothing …

Maan – fine …. then resume your stitching … as I need to leave …

Geet – haan … main… abhi karthi hun …

Maan – haan … jaldi karo …

After geet resumes her stitching … Maan coils his hands around her neck … & is staring at her beautiful &innocent face & was trying to read her mind … he understood that she wanted to spend some time with him … at the sametime geet wants him to go home as it was getting very late …. Geet lifts her head once in a while to have a look at maan & both were relishing the moment they were living in … she was wishing that the day never ends & she can be in his embrace for ever …. In between a few eye locks here & there … Geet finally finishes stitching the button … then buttons up his shirt & is smiling at maan … maan too returns back a sweet smile to his meeshti … geet then coils her hands around his neck ….

Geet – I love you maannuu ….

Maan – I love you too my DD ….

Maancomes closer to geet's lips in order tokiss them ….But geet does not let the kiss happen … she places her finger on his lips …

geet – maan I think you should make a move now …

dissapointed maan – I think I should … but I don't want to leave you tonight … shall we talk for some more time …

geet – but few minutes back you … yourself told me u want to leave … & also what about that kuch kuch hotha hain …

Maan – are you making fun of me … that's why you stopped me from kissing you …

Geet – no … never …I can never do that … & its not like that …

Maan is upset & now turns his back to geet …

Maan – geet my self control is very good … you don't have to be afraid because of me …

geet hugs him from back …

Geet – maan … I know that … I trust you … but I thought that dadima might be waiting for you …

Maan – dadima … yes …she will be … but she knows that some times I would be busy with office work …so she is used to me going home late …

Geet – oh … busy with work … hmmm … I can see that …

Maan still upset – well … in my life … what importance you have for me … I think you know that very well … do I need to explain it to you.

geet – ok …. Ok … I know that & you can stay … but for few minutes only … then you shall leave… teek hain …

maan – are you doing me a favour … if so I shall leave right now …

maan frees himself from geet & starts to leave ….Geet grabs his hand & stops him …. maan was giving a wicked winning smile …. Thinking that his drama worked on geet … geet again hugs him from the back & kisses his shoulder …. Maan acting as though he has not cooled down but at the same time he wasloving every bit of attention he wasgetting from her …. Geet then turns him & makes him face her … she then holds his head & then kisses his forehead first …. next his cheeks ….maan knew what was coming next … she coils her hands around his neck … while he coils his hands around her slender waist …. placing his hands on her waist …. They both tilt their faces … she finally seals his lips with hers …. Both having a passionate kiss … While her fingers were running though his thick dense hair& while he was caressing her soft skin … they both don't want to come out of it … but finally come out of the kiss … geet turning crimson red … geet was blushing to hell … from maan's eyes she was lookingas beautiful as anew bride.

geet – so you are going to stay for few minutes isn't it …

maan – definitely…. Why not … after such a treat …

geet beats him playfully on his chest … Then they both laugh …

as they understood that they both wantedthe same thing i.e. to spend time with each other … but at the same time were trying 2 control them selves & to hide this fact from each other.

Maan & geet both sit on the ground resting their backs to the couch & are talking to each other…

Maan – ok geet tell me if you were not in this field what profession would you have chosen ?

Geet – fashion designing & I would have opened my own boutique …

Maan is Surprised – fashion designing …

Geet – yes … why are you surprised …. For your information I do design my clothes …

Maan – is it …

Geet – yes …

Maan – well … must say … I love your choice … no wonder what ever you wear … it fits perfectly on you & you do look great ….

Geet – thank you …and what about you … what would you do?don't say that you would still be in the same profession as of now …

Maan – well … after listening to my answer … I wonder what your expressions would be …

Geet teasing maan – is it …. What would your dream profession be … a driver of a plane …

Maan – what …

Geet – wohi … pilot…aap ki basha main …

Maan keeping a dissaproving face – NO … what made you think that …

Geet – bas … aiye waiye ….

Maan - aiye waiye….

Geet - haan …

Maan – jao … main nahin boltha ….

Geet - boliye naa….

Maan – NO…

Geet – plz …plz…plz …

Maan – no …means …N … O… NO …

Geet holding her ears (Kaan pakadke)– sorry ….

Geet then olds her ears & says sorry 3 times ….

Maan – tho dill thaamke … suno …. faint math honaa ….

Geet again looking up at the ceiling – hey babaji … what profession did he choose & warning me not to faint ….

Geet thinking what would have been maan's dream profession

geet - Kahin chori …chakkari tho nahin ….

Geet –chi chi geet…what are you thinking … no no maan would not choose that profession …

Geet – boliye maan…

Maan saying cooly –acting …

Geet opens her mouth in shock & surprise – WHAT ….

Geet never thought about this profession … not at least from maan singh khurana …

Geet - Some one pinch me … hard … right now …

Maan actually pinches her hard …

Geet coming back to senses & shouting – what … OMG… MAAN SINGH KHURANA THE GREAT WANTED TO BE AN ACTOR.

Maan closes her mouth with his hand …

Maan – calm down Geet … calm down …

Geet – maan … I don't believe this …you wanted to be an actor ….

Maan – yes meeshti…

Geet – what … I mean why … how …

Maan – it was my passion since I was a kid … but due to circumstances I had to leave my dream& take care of business what dadaji started & dadima & papa looked after …

Geet – hmmm … waise I need to say something … I have realised just now …

Geet was thinking about the way she wooed maan few minutes ago when maan was angry … she undertsood now that maan was actually faking anger …

Maan - What …

Geet – you are a great actor …

Maan – I know … but how can you say …

Geet – saw your skills few minutes ago … how you were faking anger…

Maan proud of himself & his acting …..

Maan – maan singh khurana hun …. Kuch bhi kar sakhtha hun …

Geet – janthi hun….

They both have a hearty laugh & then geet starts narrating him some more stories of her childhood & her college life … maan also was sharing his memories with her about his college life & the various dramatics he participated while he was pursuing his studies … they both were feeling sleepy but were still talking to each other … Without even realising they both doze off to sleep on each others shoulders ….

*************** Next day morning *****************

Maan wakes up … finds geet sleeping peacefully on his shoulders … he checks the time & realises that the whole world has been awake by now … blows air on her face … geet wakes up … finds maan next to her…. Geet with her sleepy & dreamy eyes …. Smiling at maan ….

Geet – gud morning maan …

Even before maan could greet her … Geet comes out of her sleep … is shocked to see maan beside her …

Geet – maan … aap yahan ….

Before maan could answer she remembers that … maan did not leave & they both were chatting till they both fell asleep …

Geet – oh yaad aya… maan I think you should leave now … immediately …

Maan – yes … I am …I was waiting for you to wake up … realised that it was too late … so had to wake you up … I hate to do that … but had to do it …

Geet & Maan get up … Maan bends forward to kiss geet on her forehead ….he then Kisses her …

Maan – see you in the office … don't forget my breakfast …

Geet – sure …

Maan opens the door … maan was happy that geet's neighbours were not yet awake …. Geet comes out to see off maan …. Maan kisses her once again on forehead & then leaves … these two ignorant of what was happening around them … do not notice that some one was actually keeping an eye on them & was waiting for them to open the door so that they can catch them red handed & have proof against them …. The person happy that they got enough proof on maaneet affair …. informs sameera about the proof …

(poor maaneet trapped even if they have not done anything…. Me feeling sad for these two … hope & wish & pray that they over come all the problems they are facing or will be facing in future … & I know that they will definitely over come & will win in the end …. Hogi inki pyar ki jeet … yeh hain meri dill ki tammanna …. & janthi hun yehin hain aapki dill ki tammanna …)

precap:-
geet's mom in geet's home ... talking about some one whom geet's mom & geet both know very well ... new entry ...will b coming in next update ...
Edited by dewdropred - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
maaneet romance was superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...such a sweet update.
Maaneet moments were awesome.
But poor maaneet trapped...ab kya hoga...??
This sameera ki bachchi...i'll kill her.

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