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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome well start Nadiya love it thanks a lot for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome well start Nadiya love it thanks a lot for pm

thx for support just want to try once again .. hope this time succeed.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congratzzz on new ff...
nice intro...
plz do cont soon...
tanx 4r pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wohooo i likes it :D

keep it going baby :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cut starting!!! Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Introducing buaji as Shyam mother .



Nani: i will not give up i will go to her home once and talk to her parents , she is so perfect that Arnav will not say no. she reached home and called the principal & took Khushi address.



At Khushi home

Payal :her elder sis

Payal: khushi how was the function?

Khushi: acha

Payal: cup her face Khushi abhi bhi time ha you say no.

Khushi placed her head in payal lap di for the first time in life you have asked me a favor how can i say no.

Payal: started crying it was my mistake i still have regret why i let you go in front of Shyam mother.

Khushi: roti kyun ha, he is was written in my fate .

Payal: no , i asked you as i want to study more.

Khushi :seated & cup her face.. wipe the tears "didi you know i hate to study , it was a nice proposal maa & baba was happy how can i snatch their happiness.

Payal: khushi there is some thing bothering me ?

Khushi: aab kya

Payal: i asked Maa to call him at home but she said he will come on wedding day.

Khushi: smiled

Payal: why are you smiling?

Khushi: dekhe kar kya karna ha

Payal: i wanted to talk to him tell him that he should take care of my sis .

Khushi: oh

Payal: what?

Khushi: i thought after seeing him you will say that you want to marry... buaji handsome prince... she ran

Payal: just shouted & throw a cushion at her..."pagal ha mera leya she is doing all this, so that i can complete my studies... "

Khushi: ran to roof & look at the sky: "didi i am doing this for y family you don't know for your studies baba too loan & now , she paused... as he heard someone coming up stairs ..

Maa: what are you doing here?

Khushi: to her self enjoying the last sun set of my freedom ..."kuch nahi"

Maa: go in girls are coming to apply you haldi & mehndi.

Khushi: is it must ?

Maa: ha beta , you have asked you want a simple wedding your baba & accepted it ,but now

Khushi: thek ha do what you like, she walk down stairs

There were few girls from her neighbor sitting in her room.

a girl : khushi di aagai

Khushi: smiled

girl #2 :di beto na i will apply mehndi

Khushi: seated

Payal & other girls started singing...


nani: driver stop car.

Driver: madam how you will walk in such narrow road.

nani: beta once i also use to live at such place...

Driver: sorry

nani: walked to Khushi home.. " yahan per tou shadi horahi ha " she heard dholki voice...

Khushi maa: "jee may i help you"

nani: kya yeh khushi ka ghar ha?

Khushi maa: looked at her in surprise "yes "

nani: may i come in?

Khushi maa: "sure , i am glad she called her teacher " she her self assume

nani: lagta ha kaise kai shadi ha

Khushi maa :looked at her in surprise " khushi ki

nani who was about to sit stop..."kya ?

Maa: Jee , are you her teacher , please have a seat...

nani : no i better leave ... she saw Khushi from the door she was sitting , girls were singing around her but she was lost ... she just walk out ... without looking her again.



at Arnav place at dinning table

Arnav: nani why you are not eating?

nani: dil nahi charah..

Arnav: are you annoyed from me ?

nani : nahi

Arnav: jhoot , you are because of my morning talk.

nani: iss baat ka ab koi faida nahi , i went to her home she is getting married tomorrow ...

Arnav: smiled & thanked in heart ... he looked at nani sad face , to tease her " you are so sad i am feeling i should ask her to run with me "

nani: eyes glitter "kya aisa ho sakta ha ?"

Arnav :regret why he had played such a foolish joke..."nani"

nani: idea bura nai she started eating i will think & make a plan how you can .. she paused..

Arnav: nani you would like to have a girl as my wife who had run with a stranger...

nani: i would like her to be my bahu at any cost ...

Arnav: i think you watch alot of movies now days .

nani: sochna do... chup raho.

Arnav: looked at her in shocked... " i was just kidding "

nani: but i am serious ... she was so sad today i can feel she is not happy..

Arnav: wanted to bang his head... "kya ha woh, aik larki bus , there are 1000 of girls you find some other" he left the table

nani: no she will be my princess only she...


to be cont if you guys like it add me if you want pm

my blog link http://naddiya26.blogspot.com/2011/07/short-story-yesterday-gone-part-1.html


Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part...glad that nani is hell bent on making khushi her bahu even after knowing that she is getting married...we want ArHi to be together
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great part...glad that nani is hell bent on making khushi her bahu even after knowing that she is getting married...we want ArHi to be together

i am glad that you liked it , writing at new place is bit confusing ... lets see will he be able to save her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Naddiya!!!
Thanks for the PM hun...🤗
Loved the update...I'm really looking forward to whats going to happen next!!! Nani's planning something big I'm sure. I wonder how she's going to get Khushi out of this wedding!!!
Great work dear...update soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!!! i am loving this conniving nani!!!😉😆

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