MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 33

Originally posted by: shah10

great update

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

Its amazing that a bus stop where people wait for a journey to start is the place where Geet and Maan's started their journey in life, of course unknowingly.

Will this path to their destination be a smooth or rough one, I leave it upto you to tell. I just love the fact that he will be her fellow traveler without her really knowing his true identity, at least for now

Ok, you can ignore the bakwaas I wrote above...I'm sleep deprived 😆

Great Update, loved it 😳

Originally posted by: --Shika--

Stranger you call yourself..
but why don't i fell the same?
Why are you, who knew nothing yet me seem close to my heart?
I never expected people to understand me.. but you did.
Today my dream came true and strangely more than the happiness i experience right now,
I am content with the fact that someone else had faith in my beliefs when i lacked it.
Someone else held trust in me more than i did..
Trust.. the one thing i expected from my family..
..the one thing for which i was craving all the while..
And yet you call yourself a stranger?
Being a stranger you taught me to trust, to believe..
And i owe you this much..
I promise i'll believe in me, as it's your belief.
I'll hold trust in my dreams..

Shikzz!! You wrote that?? Can I use it in the next update?? Its so perfect!! LOL I am already borrowing few lines of Deej. Proves my apparent creativity is running out its limit😆 And don't crib about me ending this, my patience is already running. You know how easily I get bored! And then, if I won't end this how will I start another?

I am still reeling by the effect of these lines you have written. It has given me another dimension to add to what I had already planned.

Originally posted by: Jimzi2716

Jazz...its awesome... All parts r getting better,beautiful & interesting 👏

Originally posted by: Danina

Amazing update:)

no words:)

loved the way u portaryed it:)

awesum:)

keep it up:)

thanks for d pm:)

Originally posted by: sakadafi

You may be a painter but you definately know how to paint with words as well. Just read the story in one go and have to see it was beautiful. Please do add me to your PM list.

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Shikzz!! You wrote that?? Can I use it in the next update?? Its so perfect!! LOL I am already borrowing few lines of Deej. Proves my apparent creativity is running out its limit😆 And don't crib about me ending this, my patience is already running. You know how easily I get bored! And then, if I won't end this how will I start another?

I am still reeling by the effect of these lines you have written. It has given me another dimension to add to what I had already planned.

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great update! Loved it! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the PM, Jazz!

Originally posted by: TomJerryTom

Wow thats nice...curious to know what geet tells to her family 😊