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Posted: 13 years ago
hi all i am back with the update.
sorry for the delay actually to be honest i had forgotten about it..ooops soryyy will update regularly now..
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Part 5:

After 30 mints or so geet came out fully ready in white elegant churidar suite. Looking like a princess. Maan could not stop himself from staring at her but he had to control. He can't just loose it like this..

Oh so miss handa is back.. feeling better or you still intend to drop down.

Geet gave him annoying glare as if already she was not miserable that he was addng spice to it.

Where is the dinner

Ohhh someone is hungry

She just rolled her eyes.

Maan pressed the bell button and immediately 4 waiters appeared with variety of dishes.

You had everything planned. She could not resist saying that

Well let say I am a big planner. Don't miss a single detail. He flashed a smile.

She started putting food in her plate.

Wow you are in some hurry here.

Aha she replied even without looking up.

Throughout the dinner maan kept on trying to talk to her but she refused to correspond just concentrated on finishing what little food she had poured in her plate.

As soon as she finished her plate. She got up

I will take your leave now.

Maan stood up too.

Hey listen why are you in so much hurry. I did not offend you again.

She smiled no you did not. It's just that I don't like socializing much with strangers and especially strangers of opposite gender.

Thankyou for all this Mr. Maan singh khurrana it was nice meeting you but I have to go now I have a flight to catch.

And she left the room without giving him a single chance to talk.

After 2 hrs meera barged in his room

What are you doing here

What you did with my frnd?

As much as I wanted to I did not do anything.

You are disgusting.

Mind your language . don't forget you are standing in front of Maan singh khurrana

2 months later:

Hmm did it work

Nopes . I tried. And believe me Maan Singh Khurrana trying and she did not even buzzed and that hot headed frnd of her

Hey

Yeah yeah that so called sweet frnd's of her. Won't tell me about her whereabouts. Or anything related to her. Infact she disappeared too.

Sounds like her.

We gotta separate them

Dude if by any means they get to know who we are and what we are upto we are domed even before our mission starts.

We gotta take the risk. Hang on

Who is this he picked up his phone..

Hmm send him in. .

He is here.

They both just waited for a few mints and aadi entered.

Sir I have found a lead

Good aadi. Sit down where is pari?

Oh I m here sir she entered too

And the meeting continued. After 2 hrs. I think it's not gonna work this way.

I have a plan.

She is not going to open up to me and we will have to go other way .

If you show your face everything will be blown up we have to pretend that you are still out of country . you and aadi will go to chinnai and will follow the lead.

What will I do sir. Pari asked

You will marry me.

What? They all shouted in unison.

He smiled.

I wd love too pari chirped

Don't get so happy it's going to be real messy in shimla.

Pack your bags guys. We are leaving tonight for our journeys.

Best of luck.

And yash meera's last boyfrnd ran off within 2 days. You had nothing to do with it right?

Absolutely. Nothing

And 2 days back meera not being able to reach dev's house leading to dev alone going to europe. Was not your work too.

Nopes.

You stop doing that. or you will blow our cover.

But I cant resist when that

Yeah yeah I know . atleast I don't have to face this problem.

Hehehehhe you go first solve claustrophobia.

Hmm long way..

And the four left for there rooms to get their packing. Each in different thoughts.

Yash Handa was determined. I will get you now you can't run this time

Precap:
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guys plz see charater sketch on page 1 so you can see what these characters are and their relation to maan
thanx

Edited by ssch - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
niceee part
interesting
wonder what the truth is
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazzzing;D
Loved it;D
continue soon;D
thanks for the pm;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
geet left so quickly
uff meera is so angry
wat is maan & yash upto & wat is d truth i wonder
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome updt
geet left so quickly
uff meera is so angry
wat is maan & yash upto & wat is d truth i wonder
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

umm let say you will have to wait for the answers
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous All parts


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Posted: 13 years ago
a plan... very interesting... continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...loved it..cont soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ...

poora confuse kar diya ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ...


poora confuse kar diya ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

i m evil na.
kia karo loved to keep the confusions on😉

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