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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

why dont you try dong the same with other writers😉

do motivate me also😆



I ALWAYS do 😃
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me waiting for more :D :D
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and how r u? i have been very busy lately.. just came online after like 5 days..
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i am very well. waiting for fire update

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I am loving the flow. I fl sorry for rano and maan. :(
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i think she is doing a great job there. long as she does not rush.
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The Handel slowly twist. Rajji looks at the door instantly. Hiding the papers that was scattered along her bed. She roughly shoves them under her bed. Quickly sitting down.
Maan "happy birthday!" he smiled. And walked in flowed by geet.
Geet "the twins should be here any moment. Party starts at 8! And you can have the day off 2moro!" she smiled coming round and sitting next to rajji
Rajji "its Saturday! I will have a day off anyway." both maan and geet laughed with the tone of get voice.

Maan gave his gift, while geet left the dress on the side for her and then both walks out.

Maan "I have noticed, she have been off lately!"
Geet "I know! Maybe I did not allow her to stay home today!" she looks at maan with a thought full face... "Oh she will be fine!" she consoles him.
Maan "hmm! We have few hours until the party start, I will come from office!"
Geet looks at him for while, thinking. She also have some works to finish... "I will come to!" She adds. And smiles.
Maan "is rajjis birthday! Don't you think she will mind!"
Geet "no no... She will be fine"
Maan "are you sure?"
Geet "ha baba!"
Maan "what about the arrangement of the party?" he looks round. Mostly everything was done. He was surprised in fact. Far as he remembers he have never anything like this for his siblings. He just attended a party and that to when if he have any time. "you care for them allot."
Geet "of course. My world is in one direction and my family is another. I can do anything for them" Maan smiles. Kissing her forehead.
Geet "shall we go?"
Maan "what about rano mom?"
Geet "I think she needs some time to think everything through. You don't worry about her. She will be fine."
Maan "are you sure?"
Geet "uff! Would you like me to come to the office with you or not?"
Maan "no.. I mean yes, I am just making sure!" geet roles her eyes and drags him out with her.

Rajji peaked through her door.

It was oddly weird day. Both maan and geet had there little plan at back of there head. Rajjis birthday party. A big one. She have been off lately so it was there responsibility to make it happening.

Maan quickly attended some of his important meeting while geet rearranging Romeos designee and making sure shila and vicky is there on time for the party.

Maan finished his work early, observing geet from the edge. She was busy, hope she remembers rajjis birthday party. He smiled. She turns round. Smiling at him.
Maan "do you remember the party we have to attends"
Geet "I know! It's just the last touch! Your Romeo seems to love refusing my ideas!" maan smiled. "he is seriously impossible!" maan comes close, hugging her from the back. Kissing her neck.
Maan "let's not ruin our mood because of him!"
Geet "I know, but he, uff! how could people be so impossible! Almost like he hates me to the core! Yet I don't know anything about him!" geet thought for a moment. He does not know her, he have not seen her ever anywhere. She never done anything wrong with him. People sometime need reason to hate someone but he seems to like the idea of hate.
Maan "he is like that!"
Geet "you know him?" she looks at him confusion. Not exactly sure what he meant by he is like that. Which suggest he must.
Maan "yes, we are closely related!"
Geet looks at him in shock! Closely related! What does he mean?
Maan "anyway! Let's go!"
Geet "am I missing something?" maan smiled kissing her forehead, then gently coming down to her lips. Another warm peck.



Maan "nothing serious. You don't worry."
Geet smiled, still bit suspicious about his side of the family, but she dragged it off and went to rajjis heart-beating birthday party.

Maan and geet walks in. Party already have started, they were Tinny bit late.

The room seems to like the dark them. Geet could barely see. Her hand slowly slips with maan. Both smiling together...
Maan "I never knew geet could get this scared!"
Geet "actually I am scared of the kids! You never know how they jump on us!" she smiled, nearly whispering in his ear. Maan smirked... Sliding his hand round her waist. Nearly picking her up, taking her in to there kids disco.

Geet laughed as few kids came and surround them, dancing. Geet looked for rano and rajji, along with the twins. She really wondered where are they. She smiled as maan took her hand and starts to dance amongst the kids...

Geet laughed, Hiding her face on maans shoulder... Then her eyes suddenly feel on mr rayen along with rajji, rano and the twins. There was tears on rajjis eyes... Rano petrified. Her eyes instantly froze, petrified, scared... Confused. She wondered what's going on here. She stopped. Trying to capture her self. Maan observed her eyes, looking at geet. Then flowed her eyes trail. He was equally shocked to see mr rayen in this birthday party! He does not even know this family!
Maan "mr rayen?"
Geet kept quit...
But maans eyes also did not miss Romeo. Now he was sure something was wrong here!

Both stopped. Geet slowly walks towards them flowed by maan... Rajji cried louder and screams "you are not my sister! You liar! You are not my sister!" she screamed louder and ran off. Geet stood there frozen hurt and equally shocked. Her eyes falls on mr rayen... A brutal man. She is absent about the background story. She was so consumed in rajjis word, that she completely missed Romeo!
Maan looked at geet in confusion! Not sister! Then! What?



NEXT- ?
THanks for all the lOvE and Support..
it motivates me allot to update...
herer you go..
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Oh suparb update
I am waiting for the next part
Very worried now
I wonder what will happen to geet now
Her dad is here now
Oh I hope maan helps her out
The last line was shocking
How could rajji say that
She is 11 and have the capability of understaning
Feel so sorry for geet
They are her world and look what they are doing



She must be in so much pain
Ugh
That Romeo I knew he is up to good
Good for nothing

Love te way you expressed everything everyone's emotion
It's not a easy task you
Doing a great job
I want more being greasy
Please do update soon
Edited by Maansexi - 14 years ago

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