Hum Saath Saath Hain: 'Prem & Preeti' FF - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Hey .. really enjoyed reading this chapter
maybe you could give the story a happy ending where they finally do have a child together.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANKS LOVED IT PLZ KEEP WRITING!!!:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Mahvish i love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part
Can u plzzz add more romantic scenes of preity & prem
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you sooo much guys.. 😛 It REALLY means a lot to me.. Just keep reading and I will try to add some more Prem and Preeti scenes.. 🤗 I'll post the next part today or tomorrow.. Keep checking out.. 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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After many hours of thinking, the only solution she could think of was convincing Prem to merry again. She couldn't do this toward her family who loved her and gave her everything she wanted the most. Prem. He was after all the one person, who didn't express his feelings toward anyone. He always thought about others before him. The clock turned 11 and she sat on the bed while Prem was busy with getting ready for the office. She looked at him, and couldn't make herself do it. She couldn't let go of her love who she had loved at the age where she didn't even know the real meaning of love. But she had to do it. It was for the best. She began the conversation by telling him that how good it would be if a new person came into their life. Especially how good it would be for him. He didn't get what she talked about, so he turned his head and asked her what she meant. She controlled her sadness and continued: "Mera matlab hai, Prem.. Tum.. Tum dusri shaadi kar lo.. Pooja eik achi ladki hai, our is… is family ke liye achi rehegi..". Prem stopped in his track and stood shocked before her. "Yeh kya kehrahi hoon?"

"Sahi kehrahi hoon, Prem"

"Yeh tumne sooch bhi kaise liya, Preeti?".

"Soch kar kehrahi hoon, tabhi toh".

"Yeh nahi hosakta".

"Par prem, mein.."

"Nahi, preeti. Mein jaanta hoon, ke tum kya sochrahi hoon, our yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta".

Preeti just stood there, helpless: "Par socho, Prem.. Agar wo tumhari zindagi mein aagayi, toh khushiyan hi khushiya hogi". She gave a sad smile and continued: "Unhe who pyar miljayega, jise unka barsoon ka intazaar hai".

Meanwhile Ram Kishan and Mamta came and stood in front of their door. They looked at each other and gave a helpless look. They stood outside and wanted desperately to help their children solve their problem. In the very same moment the other family members could sense that something was wrong. They stood in the living room and waited patiently.

After a long discussion between Prem and Preeti, they could hear him saying: "Our agar tumhari yahi zid hai ke, koi our tumhari jagaa le, toh yeh kabhi nahi hoga". He walks over the table to get his coat and a map and turned around and walked toward her and put his hand on her head and said: "Tumhari kasam, Preeti!". She stood shocked and was unable to form a sentence. Prem stormed out and everyone understood what all this was about. They came to her room, where she stood all alone. Mamta and Ram Kishan came inside, and gave her a hug and tried to console her: "Beta, yeh sahi haal nahi hai".

Sadhna came and stood beside her: "Uncle jee, sahi kehrahe preeti. Yeh sahi haal nahi hai. Hum sabh achi tarha se jaante hai ke, tum dono eik dusre ke liye bane hoon. Tum hi batao, kya yeh sach nahi hai?".

Preeti answered with her usually soften voice: "Bachban se legar aaj tak, prem ko hi chaha hai Bhabhi.. Prem ka naam sunte hue, toh sharm aajati thi.. ..Mein samajh sakti hoon aap sabh bereshaan horahe hai. Bar mein bojj nahi bana chahti, Maa".

She turned her head half way through as she looked over her shoulder and said: "Nahi aap pe, nahi prem par.. Our waise bhi, har dil mein eik khuwaish hoti hai, Prem mein bhi hai.. Meine aapni ankhoon se dekhan hai. Isiliye yeh fasla kiya tha, Maa.. Our aap hi bataye. Kya hum woh khuwaish, woh haq cheen sakte hai?". As she had said those words, she looked down on the ground, and felt sad.

Ram Kishan and Mamta were both speechless. They couldn't believe that they got a daughter in law like her in their family. She was willing to suppress her own feelings, and sacrifice her own childhood love for this family. For Prem. They came to her and put a hand over a head, as they blessed her, and said: "Wah.. kya baat hai. Mamta, hum kitne khush naseeb hai ke humein Preeti jaisi bahu mili hai. Bar mein vaada karta hoon, beta, ke tum dono ka khuwaab bura hoga eik din". And then he walked out from there, as he couldn't take it anymore.

Mamta consoled her and said that she needed to stay strong, and it will take time for them to heal, and everything would be the as it was before. "Sabh kuch thik hojayga. Bas eik Prem ki fikr horahi hai. Use koun samhalega?".

Vivek came a hand on his mother's shoulder and said: "Maa, fikr mat kare, mein hoon na. Main prem ko samjhayonga. Chale vinod?"

"Haan bhaiya, I'm ready". And they walked out of the house and drove to the office, with the hope that everything between them would sort out. For once.

TBC 😊 (Dont worry guys, cute scenes will be up soon. I promise)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanxx for accepting my request :D
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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njoying the story...thanks for writing.. plz continue soon.. waiting 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Meanwhile in the office:

They were busy with different meetings and telephone calls, and at the whole day Vivek had the chance to talk to Prem about his situation. They talked briefly and after that they got back to their work.

Vinod in the other hand, were sitting in his office and got a phone call from his mother, saying that they needed to visit someone when they would came back home as it would be good for Prem and Preeti to have a alone conversation without us being home with them.

After some hours later, Vivod told his brothers that they needed to go somewhere as he received a phone call from their mother. The nodded and got ready to leave, but Prem. He told them that he would come home after some hour, finishing some paperwork, and they should go without him. Vivek and Vinod looked at each other, and agreed to what he said. After that they left the office, leaving Prem sitting in his office with a file on the table.

The two brothers came home, and saw that the other family members were getting ready to go. Preeti came inside Sadhanas room and said: "Mein bhi chalti hoon, bhabhi". But she told her no: "Nahi.. Tum ghar raho.. Prem aata hoga, tum bas uske liye khaana tayar karo, hmm.." Preeti couldnt do anything other than nod. As everyone was ready, they came down the living room. Preeti opened the doors for them as they could go outside to their cars. She just stood there and saw that Mamta placed her hand over her check and smiled at her, as she was giving her "everything-would-be-fine-again" smile. Soon after that they drove away to the place they needed to.

Back to the office, Prem were sitting in his office. He looked up, putting the file he was reading away, and took a deep breath. He needed to clear his head. He needed everything to be normal again. He needed his childhood love. Preeti. He sat there with his hand on his forehead and thinking about his family, his parents, Preeti, Pooja and in the end about himself. What should he do? He did not know the answer of the question. He let his mind drift away to some moments he have had:

" Prem bhaiya, ladki apni dil ki baat ankhoon se kehte thi hai. Our kal se preeti ki ankhoon mein, khushi hi khushi chalak rahi hai."

"Ab aadat daliye, prem bhaiya. Ab lifelong inhe aapko khilana pilaana hai, kyu jee?"

" Prem eik ladki apna sab kuch chorkar aarahi hai, tumhare liye. Jaise tumhe pasand hai, waise rehti hai, waise kehti hai. Badle mein sirf thora pyar hi chahti hai. Mein jaanta hoon tumhare dil mein uske liye bohudt pyar hai, lekin mann mein base pyar ko, izhaar bhi karna parta hai"

" Mein kya kahoon Maa? Jaisa Preeti chahe"

"Haaye, Preeti bhabhi, aapke eik nanna munna, sweet little boy, khush?"

"Hum chaahe bandhan mein bandhe ya na bandhe, jis baat ka rishta, toh dil se hai, haina?"

"Aapni dil ki baat zubaan pe layo,our dekho, Preeti ke chehre par kaisi bahaar aati hai."

Slowly the memories faded away and he opened his eyes, and came back to the reality. He looked down on his watch and saw that it was 8:45 p.m. Maybe he should go home and get some rest, he thought. He took all the files he needed and got out of the office and down to the parking lot where his car stood parked. He started the car and drove to his house.

Meanwhile in the house:

Preeti glanced at the watch in the living room, and waited for Prem to come home. it was never like him, coming home late, but then again, they had been arguing about their life. she shook her head and went to the kitchen to prepare the food for him, as the clock was a lot, and also knowing him well, he would properly be hungry. She began with warming all the food and one by one placing them on the dining table which stood in the middle of the kitchen and living room.

Prem parked the car outside the house, and noticed that all the cars were gone, meaning that the others were not home yet. He came out of the car and got into the house. He turned on the light as he came inside, and removed his jacket and placed some files on the table. He went to the kitchen but to his surprise he saw ...

TBC 😊 (Guess what he sees.. )
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Reserved !! i'll forward this too ma crazy prem preeti fans too :D

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