Hum Saath Saath Hain: 'Prem & Preeti' FF - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyyTHIS IS SOOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!
love prem & preeti
plzzz continue soon
pm me when u update plzz...thanxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: niki4life

heyyyTHIS IS SOOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!

love prem & preeti
plzzz continue soon
pm me when u update plzz...thanxx



Thank you so much for liking it.. It REALLY means a lot to me that you guys love my story..
And dont worry, i will pm you, when I update.. 😊🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The next morning:

It was weekend, so they all had just finished eating breakfast. Prem was getting ready in his room to go out and get some things for himself. He took the car and drove away.

Mamta, Ram Kishan, Wakeel uncle and his wife was sitting in the living room, where Ram Kishan was talking on the phone with Pritam Uncle. They were talking about to meet later in the evening to spend some time together. The others were not at home but out for shopping. However Mrs. Saxena and her daughter were at home.

After some Prem came home and walked toward his room. He placed the things he needed there and was about to walk downstairs but was stopped by Mrs Saxena calling his name: "Prem beta.. Aagye tum?". She smiled at him. He asked her if she wanted something. "Uhm.. Haan.. Tumse kuch baat karna chahti thi". He walked to her room with her and to his surprise saw that she closed the doors after him.

"Behto?". He did what she said and sat down on a chair, where she stood. "Prem main jaanthi hoon ke tum kiss waqt se guzar rahe hoon. Bohudt mushkilon ka samna karahe hoon. Our woh bhi, Preeti ke liye!!". He suddenly looked up.

She continued: "Preeti ki wajah se tum itna kuch sehrahe hoon. Akhir kyu? Bala, tum kyu sazaa saho?. Koi istarha se zindagi jeeta hai, kya? Our woh bhi' Bina ouladt ke?. Prem.. Tum eik ache bete hoon, lekin socho is familiy pe kya beethi hogi? Main toh kehti hoon ke tum dosri shaadi karlo. Tum bohudt khush rahoge. Our woh bhi' Pooja ke saath. Bohudt achi beti hai. Woh tumhe sabh kuch desakti hai Prem, jo' Preeti nahi desaki".

This was enough for him. He couldn't believe that it was second time he was facing this, others trying to "help him" without their own interests. He was feeling used. He did not want to hear more, so he stood up: "Main jao, aunty?". Without giving a chance to replay, he opened the doors and stormed out from there.

He walked to the car and drove away. He needed fresh air. He was angry for sitting and listening to her. He was angry at the woman and her daughter. How could he leave Preeti for that girl? He loved Preeti, and only her. It was not her fault what had happened to her or them for the matter. He lightly shook his head and moved to some other thoughts. He wanted to see Preeti. He made his car turn around and drove toward Pritam uncle's house, where she was staying.

At Pritam uncle's house:

It was late in the evening. He parked the car outside the house and got out. He walked toward the main door and knocked on it. He stood and waited for someone to open it. The doors opened and saw that it was Pritam uncle who greeted him at the door: "Prem beta? Tum..". They both greeted each other and made him come inside. They talked a bit: "Main to tumhare ghar hi aaraha tha, kya hai na, tumhare jo wakeel unvle hai unhe baazi mein harana our'". Prem was not fully listening because his eyes were searching for Preeti throughout the conversation. So he moved his head to the side to look over Pritam uncle's shoulder where he asked: "Preeti?..". He understood and smiled at Prem: "Upar hai, apne kamrein mein. Jao milao". He nodded and took the stairs up to her room.

Meanwhile she was busy with some things in her room. She had her back toward the door and suddenly heard a knocking. Without turning around she spoke: "Aajaye aandar".

Prem heard this so he entered inside where he saw her. He stood there and watched her without saying anything. After some seconds she started to think why there was so silent in the room, so she turned her head around only to see to her surprise that Prem was here, in her room. "Prem? Tum". He gave a sad smile from himself and walked toward her and said: "Socha tumse miloon". He sat down on a chair beside her. Preeti looked around for her sandals and got them on:"Uhm.. Mein tumhare liye kuch laati hoon". She was about to walk but Prem grabbed her hand and she turned around to see him shook his head. He made her come close and pulled her down to him so; she was now sitting on him in his lap. She automatically had one hand on his shoulder to balance her from falling. He did not say anything; he simply buried his face in her neck, as he got her close to himself. This got her worried after him and his sudden action. She placed her hand behind the back of his head and smothered his hair. After some time, she looked down at him and asked: "Kya hua?". "Kuch nahi" a low voice came from him from her nape of her neck. They sat like that for a while, holding each other. His face still buried in her neck.

Sometime later they had let go of each other and they both had finished talking about that he was staying over. It was only them in the house at that moment. He did not feel going home as he wanted to stay with her as possible. He walked to the bathroom and washed his face and took his shirt off. When he came out he laid the shirt on a chair and got in bed. He was tired and wanted to have a long peaceful night. With none other than Preeti. He lay on the bed and got the covers on him and closed his eyes. In the very moment she walked in carrying a glass of water in her hand, and placed it on the table beside the bed. She saw that he had already gone to bed. She changed her clothes and took one look at him and smiled and liked the fact that he had come to stay with her. She got under the covers where his head was facing her back. He slowly opened his eyes and sneaked an arm around her stomach and got her close to himself. She got surprised that fact that he was awake, and not sleeping. This got her all shy and placed her hand over his and closed her eyes and drifted to sleep.

TBC 😊 (I hope this this chapter is a bit longer what u guys wanted, do tell me if u want the chap. longer than this)

Edited by mahwash17 - 13 years ago
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The alarm clock rang 10:30 a.m. Preeti opened her eyes where she felt a heavy thing on her body. She looked down to her stomach where she saw that it was his arm which was resting on her. She turned the alarm clock off and carefully tried to remove his arm without waking him up. He was holding tight, as if he never wanted to let go. Finally she removed it and placed it gently on the bed and got the covers off her and stood up where she headed toward the bathroom to get a shower. After that she went to the kitchen and started to make some breakfast for him and her father.

40 minutes later, Prem noticed that the other half of the bed was empty. He looked around and concluded that she must have been up early. He stretched out and got off the bed to take a shower. Sometime later he walked to the kitchen where he saw that she was placing come plates on the dinner table. He stood and watched her every move she did. He couldn't get the conversation he had with Mrs. Saxena out of his head, no matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't. The truth was that he was afraid to loose Preeti, He was too lost in his own thoughts that he did not notice Pritam uncle coming toward him.

"Kya hua Prem?". He came out of his thoughts and did not hear what pritam has said to him. "Arre Mein pochraha hoon ke tum thik to ho?". He just nodded and looked at Preeti as she was about to sit down and eat with them as well.

After they had finished eating, Prem and Preeti were walking toward the garden. They were talking about something. Suddenly preeti wanted to know what had happened to him last night. She looked at him asked: "Kal tumhe kya hua tha? Bareshaan se lagrahe the". He looked at her for a long time and answered her: "Kuch nahi". But she could read him well enough to see that something was wrong. Something must have happened to him last night, because she could see something different in his eyes. Fear, sadness or was it just love perhaps?. Her thoughts got disturbed by him: "Mein aaj ghar jaaraha hoon. Aaj shaam ko". She nodded and he continued: "Tum.. saath aarhi hoon na?", she stopped in her track, but prem continued to walk ahead of her. He saw that she was not with her and turned around: "Uh.. Woh Prem mein..".

He sensed that something was wrong. Why did she not want to come back home with him? Did he do something wrong. Did he upset her? "Kya baat hai, Preeti. Kya tum saath nahi aana chahti?" he asked her with sadness in his voice. She immediately looked up to him and couldn't believe that she was the one making him think like that. "Socha ke tum saath chalti? Tumhare beghair, dil nahi lagta ghar mein..". He looked down at his feet while saying that.
She looked at him and got her hand in his and said: "Chalo phir". They both smiled a bit, and she was now leading him thorough the living room and up to her old bedroom. She packed her stuff and soon enough came downstairs to get it in the car so they could drive home.

They both walked toward the car where Prem took the bag and placed it in the boot of the car. She was standing right next to him and playing with the end of her dupatta. He closed the boot and couldn't take her eyes off her. He had this teasing smile on him and she knew what he was trying to do. She smiled and blushed a little, and made him look the other way by pushing lightly to his face. With that she walked to the front seat and sat in, and Prem did the same as well.

They reached home after some time and got out of the car and came inside the house. They greeted everyone and sat down a bit to chat with them. After they had talked, Prem stood up followed by Preeti and walked to their room to settle her suitcase. On her way upstairs, prem walked ahead of her and opened the bedroom door for her, smiling in a teasing way. Like as if he had something in mind. Meanwhile Pooja and her mother stood beside the stairs in the living room, when they saw Prem and Preeti heading for their room. Preeti looked down and smiled a bit and came inside where Prem held her hand, while their door was closing behind them. This got Pooja and her mother disturbed and did not want to see any more of it.

Okay this was not a long chapter, but I hope u guys enjoyed it..

TBC 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey loving ur story .. please continue writing more ... waiting for ur next chapter !
Edited by moneeba - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey loving ur story .. please continue writing more ... waiting for ur next chapter ! thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow
Just loving it
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyyy
Where r u??
Plsss update
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi
Just read all the parts.
Your story is simply wonderful. loved itf.
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG.. So sorry for not updating so soon.. I was so busy with some other stuff.. Once again, thank u so much for liking it. Just keep the reviews coming.. Here is the new chapter:

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Couple of weeks later:

Everyone was starting to notice that Preeti was back as her old self again, which everyone was really glad about. But somewhere Preeti knew that it was just a faade to make them think like that, as she did not want to cause them more pain what she already did. Sure Prem took good care of her, and made her feel "wanted", but Mrs. Saxena always made her feel nothing but: "unwanted".

One day Preeti was sitting in her room, near the window. Thinking about her current situation and what she should do next. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath and let her thoughts wander.

Ni main shagun manaava
Ni main deva duwava...(2)
Aa main kamlee naam dhadava
Par ik koi ratan lagaava

Tu meri jaan hai
Tu mera armaan hai...(2)

She looked around in the room, and wrapped her arms around herself more closely.

Ni main shagun manaava
Ni main deva duwava...(2)

She looked outside the window, where the sun was high in the sky. It was shining so bright, that nothing bad could ever happen… or so what she thought.

She came across several flashbacks of herself. One of Prem receiving the news from the doctor, Mrs. Saxena talking with Mamta, Pooja asking about Prem:

Duniya ko bhool jaaoo main tere pyaar mein(2)
Tu nahi toh aag lage is sansaar mein
Tenu dil da haal sunaava
Aa main kamlee naam dadaava
Par ik koi ratan lagaava

Meanwhile she turned her head to the other side, and came across a family photo standing on the table, and another one of Prem leaning on his arm and reading a book. Smiling.


Tu meri jaan hai
Tu mera armaan hai...(2)

She was lost in her own thoughts and did not notice Prem coming inside the room. When she saw him, she followed him everywhere with her eyes.

Rabba mere pyaar ko nazar lag jaaye na(2)
Mangiya duwava lakha
Dukh ud sataave na

He came and sat beside her and asked with concern what she was thinking, by moving his head a bit up. She just gave a sad smile and shook her head lightly, showing that nothing was wrong.

Tenu dil da haal sunaava
Ni main lakh lakh sukhr manaava
Aa main kamlee naam dhadava
Par ik koi ratan lagaava

She could feel the water filling her eyes, but tried everything in her power not to cry in front of him.. …Again.
He could see that something was wrong, so he leaned in and placed a finger under her chin and made her look up. They eyes met and she couldn't hold her tears back any longer, so she simply leaned into him, and embraced him.

Tu meri jaan hai
Tu mera armaan hai...(2)

She placed her head on his shoulder, and held him to herself. He made sure that he cared, by holding her tight to him. He let go of her for some seconds, and made her look at him. She tried not to look at him, and narrowed her eyes as if she was in shame. He softly brushed her tears away, which now made her look up. He lightly placed a kiss on her forehead and hugged her.

Ni main shagun manaava
Ni main deva duwava...(2)
Aa main kamlee naam dhadava
Par ik koi ratan lagaava

Tu meri jaan hai
Tu mera armaan hai...(2)

They sat like that for some time, as they both did not know how long they had sat like that. Right now the only thing was important for him was making sure that his Preeti was alright.

Days went, and everyone made sure that Prem and Preeti were doing fine. Once they were coming down the stairs and heading out for a walk with the others. Ramkishan, Mamta and Wakeel uncle and his wife were sitting and chatting a bit. When they saw them, Ramkishan called after them: "Prem, idhar aana". They walked toward them, and Mamta gave them something into their hands. They both looked at each other in confusion, and asked what it was. Mamta smiled at them and begin to tell them: "Yeh flight ticket hai tumhare og Preeti ke liye". She looked at Ramkishan and continued: "Humne socha ke tum log thora ghum phir aate, kyu?". Prem smiled at his mother and took her hands in his and gave the flight ticket back to her: "Shukriya maa. Par hum thik hai. Saach mein". He looked at preeti, and they both walked back to the others and went outside.

They all saw them walk out and Mamta couldn't help but say: "Na jaane kya hoga un dono ka?". She hoped for the best that their life would become a lot easier.


TBC 😊
(Okay I know its a very short chapter but I need some ideas what to write further.. I got the basic idea set, but im just not sure if I should write it now or wait a little and have some cute scenes of PP or something else? If u guys got any suggestions or anything do PM and I'll see what I can do😳)

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