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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing FF.
Please add me to the PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
greattt goinggg. waiting for the nxt one
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Posted: 14 years ago
Must. Read. Again. Ah, this is craziness. Geet has an older sister? OMG! This is getting creepier by the update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sookie - That was a big lurch you gave me with the possibility of Geet being delusional with an imaginary stalker 😲
Yes - now I understand Mr & Mrs Handa's predicament and the reason they distanced themselves in those crucial college days in Geet's life.
I really love how you cover the case from various angles shedding light on all sorts of probabilities⭐️
So from the present evidence Geet was shadowed & trailed ever since her school days- I wonder if it was the stalker who might've killed the puppy and she was too small to express the truth to her parents
It was throat parchingly scary when the last victim gave the statement that pointed to Geet's stalker..
edit-- I know your FF is a hardcore thriller which in present scenario can't turn to a love story b/w Maan 'n' Geet(atleast till case wraps off & Geet is rid of her inhibitions) & I actually I like your fic as it is coz your reasoning for development in story is quite sound !!👍🏼
Edited by Lily201 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
So now we have Geet's story corroborated by the inspector from her hometown.

There is cursory mention of Dev, which I'm still not sure, how seriously we are supposed to consider.

Today's update made me rethink about Interlude II and this is where the story board changes a bit. This person has not been part of Geet's childhood. And neither does this person seem to have been taken under Geet's parents' wings. There was nothing hinted at from the meeting. Surely you are moving away from here to Geet's college, so I don't expect any more returning back to Geet's hometown.

Another info that is to noted is that the first time the stalker made an appearance was when Geet was 16 and this ended in a case of identification. We know the stalker is aggressive right then, from the assault report of the look-alike girl.
And then he doesn't make an appearance until she is Third year of college...Hmmm! Man this guy is real twisted in his fantasies of her to take a step into reality.

Real food for the mind, is what your this piece of fiction is...And now I'm overstuffed with information after over thinking this...I think.
So awaiting the next update eagerly. I sign off here Sooks.

Hasini
Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
You know that I love you right? 😆 Thanks for noticing couple of things... I remember mentioning it to you (or was it night?) last evening that this chapter was very carefully written and I proof read it almost four times to ensure that there was nothing out of place...

Soo... 👏 As usual answering only what I want to 😆


Originally posted by: 6thElement

So now we have Geet's story corroborated by the inspector from her hometown.

There is cursory mention of Dev, which I'm still not sure, how seriously we are supposed to consider.

Today's update made me rethink about Interlude II and this is where the story board changes a bit. This person has not been part of Geet's childhood. And neither does this person seem to have been taken under Geet's parents' wings. There was nothing hinted at from the meeting. Surely you are moving away from here to Geet's college, so I don't expect any more returning back to Geet's hometown.

Another info that is to noted is that the first time the stalker made an appearance was when Geet was 16 and this ended in a case of identification. We know the stalker is aggressive right then, from the assault report of the look-alike girl.
And then he doesn't make an appearance until she is Third year of college...Hmmm! Man this guy is real twisted in his fantasies of her to take a step into reality.

Aggressive? He left the girl alone when he realized that it wasn't Geet. He could have simply killed her under the carpet of eliminating potential witness but he didn't. Why? And trust me I wrote it specifically like this because it gives in a peek into the mind of the killer; his behavioral evidence that Maan and Emily dissect in coming updates.

Real food for the mind, is what your this piece of fiction is...And now I'm overstuffed with information after over thinking this...I think.
So awaiting the next update eagerly. I sign off here Sooks.

Hasini

Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily201


So from the present evidence Geet was shadowed & trailed ever since her school days- I wonder if it was the stalker who might've killed the puppy and she was too small to express the truth to her parents

No.
edit-- I know your FF is a hardcore thriller which in present scenario can't turn to a love story b/w Maan 'n' Geet(atleast till case wraps off & Geet is rid of her inhibitions) & I actually I like your fic as it is coz your reasoning for development in story is quite sound !!👍🏼

Geet can be the killer too. 😆
Thanks a lot lily for this :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime


Sooks...how many times you have tried to make us understand the profession of Mr ACP...but what to do...dil hai ke manta hi nahi...LOL.



I can't help but reiterate professionalism of ACP...but what to do... Mann hai ki manta hi nahin...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 11
my god u really gave me such a surprising shock dear...
so Geet was treated for being delusional par looking at the evidences she was not...
she was actually right in telling about the stalker...
but the last line about she could have been 'Geet's elder sister' had me confused...
and what did 'you are not her' mean?
cont ASAP...
me dying of curiosity...

forgot to mention this...
Geet was interested in painting and her parents encouraged her too...
now u r making me to think Geet could be the killer but at the same time she couldnt have killed her friends and faked about the stalker...
kya yaar itna confusions and still not even a faintest idea who the killer could be...
great going...

PS - from ur reply, the rapist left that girl when he realized she is not the girl he wanted, that is, Geet...so that ' you are not her' is actually GEET hes talking about and that girl who he caught is some random girl who looked like Geet?
Edited by spvd - 14 years ago

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