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hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1251

ok ok , now I am waiting for eternal return and Momento Mori

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Lily201

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1252

Its been a journey fraught with twists and turns -so Geet was the master holding all the strings of her puppets -even the artist was a pawn in her game,yet the time came where puppet jumped out to play check-mate with her and just as she'd acknowledged that Mal was the lead actress though she the "game designer" - she too collected her bearings of final break-down of the psyche of artist.

And sure enough just as she'd neared the truth of complex chart of changing patterns called destiny -destiny decided otherwise & ironically the one with prowess to put two and two together where others' fates were concerned couldn't control the reigns the time when it was her chance...

Leaving her deeds as a challenge to her one adversary who sneak-peeked her dark side but didn't take the bait...

But the part that stood out in her chronicles was the way she described how the monster entered the soul to corrode all humanity, it was one thing she gleaned so correctly...

Humph the end was truly chilling but in some ways so very amusingly comic -but in a way she seems like a means of fate itself to test true character of all who come across her...

And maybe the one part of her that pitied the artist( & Mal's dead stalker) actually showed that its truly a difficult situation to grapple with when you're so different that there's no way out except alienating others ,so I realise why there was no tinge of shame of being caught red handed when Maan knew

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Cathy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1253

Hi sookie, thank you so much for completing this ff and giving it a closure. Well, not a closure per say, but still... Its totally commend worthy that you took the time and effort to research and bring out geet's psyche to us readers. It was quite disturbing to read, so can only imagine how difficult it might have been for you to write from geet's point of view.
Anyway, i made sure to go back n read the first three pages of geet's diary to read the remaining in some sorta continuity and your earlier updates once again gave me the heebie jeebies, even though i knew what was in store for me. You perfectly brought out geet's calculating, manipulative and disturbing personality.
Nice touch wherein you ended it on a note saying that maan would be back to counter her again, however she would continue to have the upper hand, coz he doesn't have the evidence necessary to prosecute her.
Okay, so this was my first read on such a genre and i loved it immensely. All credit to you. Thanks again.

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Sookie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1254

Originally posted by: mars007
😍Gentle Reminder again... 😍

After all the reminders, not even a single comment for the last two updates?!!

Edited by -Sookie- - 13 years ago

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1255

loved the way u wrote it...

her thinking...the complexity of her mind...it was..👏

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Sur_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1256

Sublime IV
Yo Sooks
Sorry for been terribly late...
When I read your description of Geet, it strikes me as so... impossible, yet convincing. Hats off to your research. :)
I really did feel bad that the stalker gave in... Somehow, I wanted him to fight her, to play the minds games. What amazes me is his choice of obsession. Knowing that Geet was somebody who really understood his true self, he was still after Mal? Perhaps it is her very "humane" nature which attracts him.
Geet is truly a nightmare. Even the possibililty of having somebody like her around me sends chills down my spine. Her reaction to the photograph is written amazingly well. I could almost see the creatures in her head wail as they took in the slip, though momentary.
Some people merely write stories. Geet simply goes a step ahead and executes them :)

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Mansi Roy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1257

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

After all the reminders, not even a single comment for the last two updates?!!

First ... ☺️Awww you quoted me ☺️

then ...

Sooo sorry Sookie, I was out for India trip, so was not able to comment on the last updates, ok coming to the updates - Tooo good to be true, Awesome , amazing , perfect end to a mind blowing story, I like this end to the T, I had several things going on the mind, like maan catching her,geet dying, some one else in the game where Geet is thier human sample ( yaa wierd I know 😛) etc etc, but this PERFECT, cliffhanger , yet mystery solved, sooo complex yet conviincing.. I could go ON and ON... you are an awesome writer Sooks, specially in this genre...see you in the other fics...