Wow, you are writing a murder mystery.
SORRY for the late comment. I was too busy in something really important. BUT THAT DOESNT MEAN YOU CAN GIVE UP ON SENDING ME PMs. You updated five parts and I received a PM only once.
Coming back to the FF,
PART I, i was confused for a short while when i started reading. I thought in the beggining it was Geet specially with the girl chatting and gossiping about Rahul Gandhi. Never could have I imagined at that point that I would be reading a murder mystery. you got me totally hooked wit that line.
She screamed at the sight of Anjali's bloody upper body and screamed continually for next four minutes.
I realised this was gonna be verryyy interesting.
Part 2 & 3, must have been so traaumatic for Geet to realise the only other person in the whole house was stabbed, brutally murdered and covered in blood. When they were discussing how she dint even put up a fight, it was scary to realise how a dose of a drug can make you so helpless that no matter how fit you are, you cannot protect yourself and the other peron can do anything to you, with you...
And please, I need an autopsy report before 10 tomorrow morning." "Maan…I don't know if that's possible. I have still have backlogs left…"
"I want that report before I interview Geet. Make it possible Doc", Maan left the room having said that.
"He does know that he isn't my boss right? Right?" Vic asked Satya giving him a helpless look. Satya only grinned and clapped on Vic's shoulder
This had me totally grinning. I was like, oh Its Maan Singh Khurana after all, whether a businessman or an ACP, the attitude remains.
"Anjali made a status update on Facebook saying 'Till human voices wake us, and we drown' at 1:20 AM from her computer?"
When I realised what that meant, I was shocked. The murderer was sick enough to update the FB account after murdering her.
Part 4, It was clever of him to play out the whole scene himself. I was so sure he would find something. Maybe he did find something the importance of which would be revealed later on.
And then enetered Mal. I dont like her, dont know why but I have a few suspicions about her. and the way Geet was narrating everything she did that day, as if she was in a trance.
"What about hot chocolate? How does it taste?"
"Hot chocolate isn't hot anymore but only warm. Warm enough not drink in one big gulp though. I think Anjali kept it in my room few minutes before I came to my room. I feel very happy and satiated after I finish drinking."
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