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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

This has so many twists and turns and I was banging , scratching my head so much.. and later was like lemme take a break and read as the story goes.. Geez... there is so much going on and I am not able to trust anyone except Maan and Satya for now... !!!

Please continue soon.. this is just lovely!!!!!!!

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komlika

@komlika

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Awesome... Cheese n wine 🤓 ...I'm not saying anything 😉

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

lol so many twists and turns... i love it ⭐️

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

is becoming so complex . great going .

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

hey

this is getting deeper and deeper and here i am... even more..intrigued..than before..

however one question you in one sentence have referred to the killer as she! i am not pointing the exact sentence...but me wonders...u...made a slip there or was it deliberate..or just.what was on your mind??

hmmm!!

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Whats happening man...?? Wow yaar...m liking it...ek k baad ek mystery...n honestly speaking m afraid of reading your ff...it has so much of thrill...sometimes i try to avoid it (sorry) ...but i cant control myself...n ultimately i start imagining these things around me...

Cont soon...

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

I'm glad that I have chilled rose lassi in my hand that also in a tall glass...to keep me cool...this mystery is getting intense line after line. Too many loose links that some how connects to one another. It will all end at Geet some shocking way...I still think..(taking a sip) it's too early to point the finger at one. Wait a mint...I just felt...Maan would pretend to show some interest in Geet...to reveal the killer/cum stalker? What say Krishna? 😉...I think the lassi is getting my brain chill...😆

This is due...So its happen to be Anjali I'm picturing Anjali from DMG..and a real life friend...am I correct sookie?
I want to picture Satya...

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Sonali92

@Sonali92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

you are sooo awesome...really this story is rocking...i love crime storys and this one is just wow...i just started and read it in one go...and i think i won't be able to sleep tonight...it's so intresting...and i am egarly waiting for the next part...pls add me to your pm...again wow

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
hey

this is getting deeper and deeper and here i am... even more..intrigued..than before..

however one question you in one sentence have referred to the killer as she! i am not pointing the exact sentence...but me wonders...u...made a slip there or was it deliberate..or just.what was on your mind??

hmmm!!

Nice catch. But that was a typo. Or maybe not. 😆
The story is just getting started Vrush...and so is the killer. 😆

Initially I thought of a very simple and straight forward case where there is a jealous friend who simply kills a woman in sheer hatred...but that's too cliche...so yesterday I rewrote my whole draft (which has complete storyline) and now sticking to it the new story which is lot more complex with not so nice pasts for the two women: Geet and Anjali.

So its not going to be a 5-7 parts short series anymore. !!

Thanks!
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Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Newdime
I'm glad that I have chilled rose lassi in my hand that also in a tall glass...to keep me cool...this mystery is getting intense line after line. Too many loose links that some how connects to one another. It will all end at Geet some shocking way...I still think..(taking a sip) it's too early to point the finger at one. Wait a mint...I just felt...Maan would pretend to show some interest in Geet...to reveal the killer/cum stalker? What say Krishna? 😉...I think the lassi is getting my brain chill...😆

This is due...So its happen to be Anjali I'm picturing Anjali from DMG..and a real life friend...am I correct sookie?
I want to picture Satya...

Added pictures for Satya and Vic... More pictures later...