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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Hi Sur

Nice one shot dear..👏👏

Raj is really broken afetr all the trauma of his past and he is very much hurt that the person who betrayed him was the one whom he trusted the most..He has shared his life with him..

Naina understands his condition and she was quite philosophical about it..

Raj was amazed to see the difference in his cadet..

Naina and Raj both ahve some unfinished business between them..

I hope they r able to resolve it on their dinner date😃😃😃

Pls continue soon

Bye

Hey Suhana Di

thanks a lot for the comment. I had always wanted to see on LRL how naina wud handle an upset Raj..

Im not sure if I would be continuing this.. will let u know

bye tc

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Hi Sur

Great One shot...Superb

Naina is overwhelmed with emotions on having her Rajveer Sir back. She feels excited when she comes to see him.

Raj on the other hand is trying his best to maintain his composure even though he has broken down both emotionally and physically.

He is hurt that Lalaji had betrayed him so badly when he had trusted him the most. He was like a father to him.

Naina understands his condition and tries to restore his faith in himself. She wants him to regain his strength confidence once again.

You have narrated both of their feelings beautifully.

Nisha

hello

thanks a lot for the comment. this was a part i wanted to see on LRL badly but as we all know we never got around that.

thanks for the compliments :)

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noaccount

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hi sur!!!

thank you so much 4 this one shot!!!!...i loved it!!!❤️

i love ur writing skills!!!👏👏👏

it would be my favorite scene😍😍😍... if it was actually played by priyanka n rajeev in lrl!! welll nooowww its added in my favorite RN one short list!!!😳😳😳

poor raj...he is really sad that HISso called father 😡 lalagehlot cheated to every one infact with his own son too!!!😡😡😡

he was really upset n broken when naina come to see him!!!😳

she was quiet surprise after seeing him in this position!!!! BUT she made it ALL ok!!!!

awww raj invite her fordinner or should i say DATE!!!!☺️...well its actually a dinner date mujhe itna bhi khush hone ke zaroorat nahi hai!!!😆😆😆

i really hope that u continue!!!😃😃😃... bcz i am in love with this short shot too!!!!

love u

esha!!!!

Edited by nainaahsingh - 14 years ago

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akanksha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

aaahhh this is wat we call an intricate piece of writing ...very thoughtful n emotional

I wonder why I dint read it the first time ...I saw it

Well better late than never

Very nice sweetie ... do continue n please pm me

I thouroughly loved it n will be looking forward to it

Love u

Akki

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh
hi sur!!!

thank you so much 4 this one shot!!!!...i loved it!!!❤️

i love ur writing skills!!!👏👏👏

it would be my favorite scene😍😍😍... if it was actually played by priyanka n rajeev in lrl!! welll nooowww its added in my favorite RN one short list!!!😳😳😳

poor raj...he is really sad that HISso called father 😡 lalagehlot cheated to every one infact with his own son too!!!😡😡😡

he was really upset n broken when naina come to see him!!!😳

she was quiet surprise after seeing him in this position!!!! BUT she made it ALL ok!!!!

awww raj invite her fordinner or should i say DATE!!!!☺️...well its actually a dinner date mujhe itna bhi khush hone ke zaroorat nahi hai!!!😆😆😆

i really hope that u continue!!!😃😃😃... bcz i am in love with this short shot too!!!!

love u

esha!!!!

hey Esha

it would have been great if LRL had atleast followed a logical track. It left a lot of us disappointed.

Thankyou very much for the appreciation. I am glad that you liked it.

Lets see if I can come up with something good to continue this.

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: akkiii
aaahhh this is wat we call an intricate piece of writing ...very thoughtful n emotional
I wonder why I dint read it the first time ...I saw it

Well better late than never

Very nice sweetie ... do continue n please pm me

I thouroughly loved it n will be looking forward to it

Love u

Akki

Hey Akki

Thank you very much for reading and appreciating it. I am glad you liked it.

Lets see if I can come up with something good to continue this.

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noaccount

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ivre

hey Esha

it would have been great if LRL had atleast followed a logical track. It left a lot of us disappointed.

Thankyou very much for the appreciation. I am glad that you liked it.

Lets see if I can come up with something good to continue this.

:)

yeah i hope so too...that u cont wid this!!!👍🏼!

n plz hum sab ko bhi ussi arha dissappoint na karna by not updating your fiction i hate u 4 loving me😆😆😆...i know i shoudn't post my comment here about i hate u 4 loving me but u were not updatting n i was wondering that r u going to update after 8 months again😆😆😆

Edited by nainaahsingh - 14 years ago

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hello people!

I am back in a nice mood this time. So heres some funny(I hope so) stuff that clicked randomly.

And all the Captain fans, dont kill me after this. I am a HUGE fan too. ;)

No offense intended. Comments and criticisms are most welcome. :)

Top twenty ways to get killed by Captain Rajveer

1. Hide his gun. Especially when he thinks Naina is in danger. You will end up dead.

2. Try to make fun of his exercise routine. Call it basic and useless. And then watch him hand it over to you.

3. Replace his nice leather furniture with wired chairs before he comes back to his cabin all tired and worked up.

4. Try to get him to share his room with Huda.

5. Tell Naina that she should marry someone of her own age and batch in front of him.

6. Send him red and pink valentine cards daily when he is teaching.

7. Ask him Major Bhargava's phone number.

8. Tell him that Ritu said Navin was a better fianc.

9. Ask him about his relationship status. Gasp at his answer and reply, "Even B.C. has a love life."

10. Tell him that most of the guys in the show are taller than him.

11. Invite him to play a team game with his juniors and don't make him the Captain.

12. Explain to him that people who talk to the dead are considered either mentally unstable or psychic. Offer to set up an appointment with Dr. Ritu to help him decide which category he belongs to.

13. Tell him to stop taking counseling sessions and get over with his syllabus of Strategies and Communication.

14. Present him with a detailed analysis of why IT engineers make better husbands than Army Captains.

15. Try gate crashing his next date with Naina. Give the author a detailed write up of events if you manage to escape alive (which you probably will as he is depressed and you have already stolen his gun.)

16. Steal everything black from his wardrobe. You can even try auctioning the stuff. ;)

17. Tell him that even 18 year olds know not to sign anything without reading. Wonder loudly if he bribed his way up to this post.

18. Explain hazards of romantic candle light dinner (can catch fire, flames contribute to global warming etc.) and how a sunlight lunch is a better and eco friendly option.

19. Play a prank on him when he is watching the end of his favorite cricket match.

20. Tell him that his job is NOT to teach the cadets how to befool B.C. and Major Nair.

Edited by ivre - 14 years ago