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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow what a part dear oh now all the matter is out so idhar bhi ag lagi hai udhar bhi ag lagi hai . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Anu the best thing was lab part . . . . . . . Purane din yaad a gaye . . . . . . . . . Hum bhi aise hi karte the we use to finish our practical and then there were two boys in our class one ish and bhavnish . . . . .they also did not do their practical and then say dekh le tu humari behen nahi hai kam kar de haaye kya din the . . . . . . . . . . . . . And u know humari class ke kuch boys ko drawing nahi ati thi toh woh bhi humse draw karvate the and you know mera ek friend tha eshan he used to sit infront of me main jab bhi use name le kar bulati thi toh he never used to listen so i used to poke him with a pencil and he used to jump up from his seat . . . . . . . . . . . . . Aur humari jo girl gang the na we all were singers so in our free periods boys in our group used to say gana sunao . . . . . . . . . . Oho i m going our me track . . . . . . . . . Woh kya hai na purane din yaad a gaye the so coming back to the story sam ki bat sun kar toh mujhe apni 12th yaad a gayi is electro magnetic chapter ne bohot rulaya tha . . . . . Abhi bhi is chapter ka naam sun kar dar lagta hai . . . . . . . ! On the whole the chapter was really nice . . . . Amazing . . . . Awesome . . . . . Superb . . . . . Bindas . . !

BTBD. . . . . . . Track is going really well yeh flat ki kya mystery . . . . . . . Yeh dev na bada galat admi lag raha hai yeh geet ko tum kya karvane wali ho . . . . . . . . . Par all the previous parts were also very well written . . . . . Sorry dono stories ka yahin comment de diya woh tumhe toh pata hai na my net not working and this i m commenting from mobi . . . .
(SORRY No SMILY THIS TIME REPLYING FROM MOBI SO )
Edited by 20tullip2000 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update..
So,that was the reason behind Maan's behaviour..
OMG,Geet in Maan's room..wats gonna happen?????
Thanx for the PM and do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh yaar kehaa la kr phasa diya
ab or kitna wait krna ho ga for next part
please update soon
lovely part oh so past is reveal
loved it how maan deeply in love with geet
realy super part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update... loved it
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
so thats th reason maan is trying to keep himself away from her...
well that was teenage when he felt such change in him but now he has the maturity...
wat does he feel for her now...
he can never see her get hurt in anyway or by anyone...
he feels jealous if anyone else is even closer to his mishty...
will vicky get to know his underlying feeling or not...
oops geet in his room will she get to know how he felt for her...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update as usual...pls do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wow loved it...😊

I do understand Maan's POV, but now since Vicky knows the truth guess he would be bringing maan and geet together 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part... superb update...loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Toh Maan was fyting with his feelings n to control them he went away frm Geet
Vicky is an awesum observer
Love him
Geet actually called musibat on herself by pouring more water on Maan hahahahaha
But their fyt was fab
Was missing this so much
Ooops Maan ang to his room to change n evn Geet there
Are we gonna get sumthg😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
ANU ur update ws fantastic.i fell iN love wid the story.keep it up n plz update sooN.

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