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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#311

i love Geet!😛

but, how can i not love the moron Maan😆

par best toh vicky hai😉

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#312

wowww loved it

oh so maan is guilty n so he tries to stay away from geet

finally vicky had cracked the mystery

vicky why dont u become a detective 😉

n geet checking out her future room

dont worry geet u can still see what maan is doing when u both fight n u go to ur maayka n maan will come from the balcony to manofy u 😆

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#313

Awesome update
So maan is still scared that he will harm her again therefore he is staying away but still he craves for her more
Lol luvd how geet was checking out her bedroom
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Sameenaas
Update was awesome...!!!! 👏 Really loved it..!!!!

Oh..so Maan had started to feel an attraction towards Geet😳 😳 😳this is the reason that he wants to stay away frm her... Lets see hoe long can he stay away frm his mishty!!!!!

Hmm...Vicky acting smart... N trying to find the truth behind Maan's weird behaviour 👍🏼 Hopefully he finds out soon...!!!

Ooops😲 Geet poured the whole jug of water on Maan Maan is not gonna leave her...esp wen he finds her in his room..!!!

Awww...Geet shying like a new bride 😳 😆 😆 I think she is gonna find out something there...in his cupboard 😕 Just a guess!!!!

Loved the flashback... It was described beautifully... NMaans dream was superb!!!

The school scene was also mind blowing!!!! I m loving Sam n Adi... They are so chweeet 😆 😆 Maans reaction towards Sam's actions ware hillarious... So he is loving to c his frnds falling for each other 😃 Tumhari baari bhi aayegi Maan bete... Dont worry!!! Hehee I m sure Geet will make him fall for her...once again!!!!

Thanx for updating such a long part!!!! Take care n cont sooon...

BTW... I m the first one to comment...!!! Yeeyyy 🥳 [:D/]

thanks dear😳

yup maan's attraction is quite strong for geet and that too from a long time😉

akhir vicky is a khurana

well I didn't thought of writing that part but it just clicked in my mind when they sat for dinner😆

yeah, she is already making up her mind for their marraige😆😆

cupboard part hmm...I have thought something special about it😉😳

yeah, sam and adi makes a cute pair...in my ff atleast😆

thanks for the lovely comment😊

love

anupam

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SHAZIA

@shazia24

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#315

i really like ur ff.

can u plz add me to ur buddy list. i tried snding u buddy request but it is showing me some error.

i relly love ur ff from the core of my heart.

plz plz plzzz.😛😊😛

shazia

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: shazia24
i really like ur ff.
can u plz add me to ur buddy list. i tried snding u buddy request but it is showing me some error.

i relly love ur ff from the core of my heart.

plz plz plzzz.😛😊😛

shazia

ok dear

have send u a buddy request...just add it n u'll get the pm😊

n yes thanks for liking it😳

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Tammykhurana
hey Anupam,
tht was awesome...
Maan's condition is well explained...
how can he tell Geet tht he feels sumthing lyk tht wen she doesnt even kno wht is it...
the update was long enuff...
but next tym,plzzz update sum tym early...
i get bored waiting...
n thn i loose interest...
n i dont think u want ur readers to loose interest in such a gr8 story...
so update soon,plzzz...
brgging in front of u...
thnkx a keep writing... 😊

thanks tammy😳

I undrstand what u r saying, but its really difficult for me to updt very often as first of all I have my college which eats up most of my time and then the revision for the things taught and finally I have 3 ffs to updt...so its really really difficult...

hope u undrstnd

moreover this time Iupdt twice within one week😛

Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#318

oh so thatsy maan feels guilty n they stopped taliking... :(((...one on one again...i was missing their fight...n when geet poured the water on maan...i couldnt stop laughig...n geet blushing...lol...continue soon n thnxxx...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#319

part 23
awesome part...
wow Maan as a teenager did control his feelings and till now has had a tight rein over it...
but his control is loosening after Geet has realized her feelings for Maan...
oh now Vicky will try to find out what happened...
wow Geet is in Maan's room...
excellent...
cant wait to read what Maan will do now...
so Geet didnt visit Maan's room after that party night?
interesting...
cont ASAP dear...

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#320

hai rabba anu...
so this is the issue with maan or there is more to come...
maan fighting his adolescence and growing fascination or rather physical attraction for geet...
so before he messes up any more he wanted to put safe distance between him and geet and his rude and pompous behaviour is just a facade to keep geet away and safe from himself...
but what he is going to do now, as geet also feels love for him, and prob he may not b able to mask his feelings and will end up blurting out...
overall loved the update to the core
keep writin
love u and ur ffs
reva