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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part - 8

The scene starts with Raj and Naina coming in the garden...They saw that everyone is present there and were waiting for them only.

Sanjana: - "Bhaiya Bhabhi, itni der kyun laga di aapne?"

Raj: - "Sorry Guys, wo thodha late ho gaye."

Sanjana: - "Wo Humhe pata hai bhaiya, par aap late kaise ho gaye? bhabhi ke saath romance kar rahe the kya?" She said winking at Neev.

Neev: - "Haan bhai, ab in dono ko romance se fursat mile to hi to hamara dhyaan aaye na..ufff." He said making a puppy face.

Naina: - "Guys, aisi koi baat nahin hai; Veer bhool gaye the ki unhe ready bhi hona tha."

All the gang started laughing at this.

Raj: - "Agar mujh par has chuke ho to chale kya?"

Neev: - "ji Bhaiya, jaldi chaliye...vaise bhi 7 yahiin par baj gaye hain."

All of them settled around like this that Raj and Naina are left alone. They all left the place and after them, Raj also left the academy after signing some papers at the gate.

On their way, Raj noticed that Naina is looking very disturbed and is looking outside the window. So, he decided to talk with her.

Raj: - "Kya hua Nia?"

Naina: - "Nothing Veer, bas thodhi thakavat hai."

Raj: - "tumhari tabiyat to theek hai na?"

Naina: - "Ya!!! I am abs fine." She said this to Raj and then, in her mind: - "Mein job hi kar rahi hoon wo theek hai ya nahin, me nahin janti; par yeh sab kar to bhaiya ke liye hi rahi hoon na, isliye iska anjaam jo marjhi ho, mein zaroor karungi."

Raj in his mind: - "Mein janta hoon Nia, tum soch rahi ho ki mein aaj ka din bhool gaya; par aisa to ho hi nahin sakta na; Tum bas apne Surprise ka wait karo" and he smiles.

Naina who was looking out, told Raj to stop the car.

Raj: - "Kya hua Nia, hum late ho jayenge."

Naina: - "Kuch nahin hota Veer, mujhe wahan jana hai." She said pointing to a mandir.

Raj: - "Par Nia.."

Naina: - "Please Veer, mujhe jane do na.."

Raj ne naina ki aankhon me ek bechaini dekhi aur issi liye usne haan me sar hila diya.

Raj: - "Theek hai tum andar chalo, me car park kar ke aata hoon."

Naina nodded and stepped out of the car. Raj parked the car and followed her inside. He entered and saw naina standing in front of Krishan Ji.

Naina: - "Bhagwan, Me jo bhi kar rahi hoon sirf apne Bhaiya ke liye kar rahi hoon...phir mujhe itni bechaini kyun ho rahi hai, please meri madad ki jiye, mujhe bas apne bhaiya ki help karni hai."

She opened her eyes and found raj standing with her. His eyes were closed but his face showed a feeling of satisfaction; which is because of her only...Naina feel a pain in her heart but she ignored it.

Naina in her mind: - "Mein janti hoon Raj, jis din tumhe pata chalega ki me yeh sab kyun kar rahi hoon, tum toot jaoge; par yeh sirf me bhaiya ke liye kar rahi hoon, Mujhe maaf kar dena."

Naina ki aankhon se ansso beh rahe the par usne unhe rok liya, kyunki wo janti hai ki agar raj uski aankhon me ansoo dekhega to wo samajh jayega ki kuch gadbad hai, isliye usne apni aankhon se aanson ko hata diya aur mandir ke bahar aa gayi. Kuch der baad Raj bhi bahar aa gaya.

Raj: - "Nia, ab chalein kya? Sab log wait kar rahe honge."

Naina: - "Haan chalo."

Rest of the journey passed in silence, where Naina was thinking about what to do ahead and Raj thinking nothing but Naina's happiness. After around 25 minutes, Raj stopped the car, Naina who was lost in her thoughts came out of them.

Naina: - "Veer, tumne car kyun rok di?"

Raj: - "Rokne ka matlab, Nia party yahiin par hain..."

Naina: - "Ok..." She said stepping out of car.

Raj: - "Kya hua Nia, pareshaan ho kya?"

Naina: - "Nahin to veer...tumhe aisa kyun laga?"

Raj: - "kuch nahin bas aaj tum bahut chup chup ho na isliye."

Naina: - "Nahin aisa kuch nahin hai. Ab chalo andar chalte hai varna sab log pagal ho jayenge."

Raj: - "Haan, theek hai chalo."

Raj and Naina came inside the restaurant but Naina was shocked to find nothing and the place was too dark here.

Naina: - "Veer, yeh sab kya hai? Yahan itna andhera kyun hai?"

She turned to look at him but was shocked to find no one with her... She was about to leave the place when she heard ----

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR NAINA...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU

Naina turned to see the lights on and everyone there and wishing her happy birthday. Raj was also there but she was more shocked to see their parents there. All were happy. A smile came on her lips too. And she ran to her mom and dad.

Neeraj (Naina's Dad): - Kaisi ho Naina? Khush to ho na?

Naina: - "Me theek hoon papa, par aap kaise ho? Aur mein sach me bahut khush hoon aap sab ko yahan dekh kar."

Neeraj: - "Mein bhi acha hoon, aur tumhe aise khush dekh kar to aur bhi theek hoon."

Naina: - "Par, aap log yahan kaise?"

Veena (Naina's Mom): - Humhe raj ne bulaya hai.

Naina: - "Veer ne?" She said looking towards raj who smiled at her.

Veena: - "Haan tumhare Veer ne, uska phone aaya tha last week aur usne humhe sab kuch samjha diya tha; isliye hum aaj shaam ko hi yahan aa gaye the..."

Prerna and ANurag coming towards them: - "Are ab tum apne mom dad se milogi yan humse bhi.."

Naina move towards them and she touched their feet.

Prerna hugging her: - "A Very Happy Birthday Beta...I just hope ki tumhara yeh saal tumhare liye bahut sari khushiyaan laye..."

Naina: - "Thank u so much Maa..."

Anurag: - "Aur haan, in kushiyon me apne Veer ko shamil karna mat bholna, kyunki uski sab khushiyaan tumhare saath judi hui hain, aur ab bari tumhari hai, jaise raj ne apni har khushi ko tumhare saath jodha hai na vaise hi tum apni khushiyon ko raj ke saath jodh lo; dekhna aisa karne se tumhari zindagi ke har pal me khushiyaan hi khushiyaan hongi.."

Naina: - "Ji Papa, mein poori koshish karungi." She said with a smile.

Sanjana coming there: - "Are, aap log kya yeh family discussions le kar bhethe gaye ho, aaj babhi ka birthday hai na, to let us enjoy..."

Prerna : - "Humne aap logon ko kab roka?"

Neev: - "Are roka to nahin, par star of the day to yahi hai na..." He said pointing towards Naina

Anurag: - "Theek hai, to le jaiye aap apne star ko, hum yahi bheth jate hain."

Neev and Sanjana took Naina to a place where everyone has gathered (I mean the KMA Gang).

All cheered together: - "Happy Birthday Mam."

Naina: - "Thank u sos much Cadets, to kya aap log bhi is plan me shamil the?"

Yudi: - "Nahin Mam, not exactly."

Pooja: - "Humne to is party ka signal aaj shaam ko hi catch kiya tha, jab rajveer sir hamare hostel me aaye the."

Naina: - "Veer, tumhare hostel me aaye the?"

Pooja: - "Ji Mam, wo sir aaye the, humhe sab samjhane ke liye, tanki hum aapke yahan aane se pehle sab preparations check kar le..."

Neev: - "Ji, aur aaapke param poojniye Mom Dad ko lane ki responsibility meri thi..."

Naina: - "Tum log kuch zyada hi trained nahin ho gaye ho?"

Huda: - "Kaise na ho, hamare sir ji humhe sikhate hain..."

Aalekh: - "Aaj yeh jatt sir ki tareef kar raha hai?"

Huda: - "Jo marjhi ho, sir hai to ek true soldier na, to aisa ho kaise na..."

Raj coming from behind: - "Are aaj bhi tum sab meri baatein kar rahe ho..."

Pooja: - "Kaise na ho Sir, Hum sab ke handseta me aapka wallpaper jo laga hua hai.."

Raj: - "Pooja, aap kabhi nahin badlengi..."

Aalekh: - "Sahi cheez ko badalna todhi na padhta hai sir..."

Shalini: - "Sahi to keh rahe hain yeh Raj..."

Raj: - "Shalini, tum to aise mat bolo..."

Shalini: - "Me galat ka saath to nahin de rahi na Raj, Tumhari professional life ko jitney ache se mein janti hoon na, utni ache se koi aur nahin jante, aur yeh bhi ek sach hai ki tumhari zindagi me chahe jo kuch bhi ho raha ho, uska effect tumhare kaam par kabhi nahin hota...U r always at ur best..."

Yudi: - "Are yeh kya mam, aaj itni khushi ka din hai aur aap aise emotional baatein kar rahe ho... Please mam, aaj to hum sab ko enjoy karna chahiye na..."

Shalini coming back in her cheerful mood: - "Sure Cadet Yudi, to bataiye Cadtes aap logon ne kya plan kiya hai..."

Pooja: - "Mam, apne headset ko thoda waiting mode pe dhaliye, ek baar cake cut ho jaye, phir hum apna plan aap sab ko SMS kar denge..."

Raj: -"Theek hai Cadet Pooja, hum aapke SMS ka wait karenge..." He said and Prerna came there with cake. Everyone gather there and all were singing the Happy Birthday Song!!! Naina cut the cake and fed everyone from their mom, dad to Sanjana and Neev except Raj; which was noticed by Veena and Prerna too. Everyone was enjoying..Raj didn't pay much attention to this because what he wants is Naina's happiness.

Prerna looked at him but he just nodded his head trying to say that everything is fine.

Now, it was the time for Cadets surprise...So, they all gathered in the centre and started their announcement.

Yudi: - "So everyone, abhi tak aap is party me bore ho rahe the; par ab hum aap logon ko aur bore nahin hone denge."

Pooja: - "Haanji, ab hamara sms aapke pass pohanchane ka time ho chukka hai...to aap logon ko karna yeh hai ki..."

Yudi: - "ki hum logon ne sabke naam in chits me likh diye hain...Blue chits par ladko ke naam hai aur pink chits par ladkiyon ke, Hum sab 2 rounds me khelenge – pehle hum aaj sham ke liye 5 couples choose karenge with the help of these chits and then, baad me batayenge...

So, let's start choosing the partners –"

The chits are opened and the partners were: -

1. 1. Pooja and Huda.

2. 2. Sanjana and Aalekh

3. 3. Neev and Shalini

4. 4. Yudi and Neelu

5. 5. Naina and Raj

Everyone was shocked to listen the partners especially Pooja and Huda...They don't know that what will happen in the games.

So, this time the mike is taken by Ali and Sanjana.

Sanjana: - "Ok, to hamara pehla round yeh hai ki har ladki ko apne partner ki 5 achi baatein batani hai..To Pooja start ho jao..."

Pooja: - "Haye mere rabba!!! Yeh kahan phasa diya mujhe, is ghatiya handset ki 5 ache features kahan se bataun..."

Ali: - "Batane to aapko padenge Pooja..."

Pooja: - "Ooye tu chup kar, pehle is ke saath mera connection kar diya abs ms bheej raha hai..."

Everyone was laughing at Pooja's comments.

Raj: - "Cadet Ghai, jo kaam diya gaya hai wo kijiye...It's an order."

Pooja: - "Yes Sir.." She said amused at Raj and started thinking but still after 5 minutes, she was not able to think one... "I quit Sir...Koi acha feature ho to sms karun na, yeh to sabse ghatiya company ka handset hai..."

Huda: - "Ooye Punjaban, sedha bol na tere pass dimaag nahin hai, sara dimaag to mobilon ki dukaan khol ke bhetha hai..."

Pooja: - "Ooye Jatt, mera dimaag chahe mobilon ki dukaan khol ke bhethe hai, par tu to apni tareef kar sakta hai na; to chal apni 5 ache features ki ringtone baja..."

Huda: - "Haan haan karta hoon na, tu ruk...5 kya 10 batata hoon.."

Isse pehle Pooja kuch bolti Raj came in between them : - "Theek hai Cadet Huda and Cadet Ghai, ab aap dono shaant ho jao aur Cadet Huda, jo aapne bola hai wo kar ke dikho...go and tell us ur 5 good features...I mean..."

Huda: - "Rehne dijiye Sir, aap bhi mobile ki dukaan ka hi saath do..."

Aalekh: - "Ooye Huda, ab chood aur shoro kar na.."

Huda: - "Theek hai to Suniye...

1. Huda jananiyon ka deewana hai...

2. Huda har time jananiyon ki help karne ke liye ready rehta hai...

3. Huda apni bhaiso se badha pyaar karta hai...

4. Huda har shart jeetata hai...

5. Huda yahan par kisi se kum nahin hai...

Ho gayi 5...ab batao..."

He said and looked around to see shocked faces everywhere. No one reacted to his 5 so called qualities, but Raj was the 1st one to come out of shock...

Raj: - "Very well Cadet Huda, par agar yeh aapki qualities hain to I am sure aap me koi burai nahin hai...and now, please continue to the next person..."

Sanjana came in centre and started talking: - "Aalekh doesn't need words to understand a person, He very well know to hide his emotions. I think He is perfectionist. He is capable of being a good soldier and He loves his mom a lot." Everyone clapped at this.

Now, came the turn of shalini: - "Neev is very helpful. He is a fun-loving person which makes me doubtful that is he really Raj's brother." Everyone laughed at this and she continued: - "He is very responsible. Although he is funny but he really knows how to react in sensitive issues and 5th one is his love for Raj."

Neelu now comes to centre now: - "Bhai ke bare me 5 qualities yeh hongi ki - He is a grt computer maniac. U can can him for his help anytime. He is one adorable person. He is a grt actor and I think he is very strong which he has proved himself by joining KMA."

Everyone clapped at this too and now, was time for Naina...Raj was actually wanted to hear this: - First quality about Veer is that He is really a good person. Second will be his emotions. U know guys, U can always see him smiling. Third one is that He can make anyone fall in love with him. U can witness it very well that Neev is my brother but he calls me bhabhi because He loves Veer more. Fourth is that He is one of the best soldier our country has. Fifth one is his ability to forgive everyone. It doesn't matter how many mistakes u have done, Veer will always be there to help u as a guide, teacher and above all as a teacher."

Everyone clapped at hearing all this, Raj's eyes were moistened but for sure, everyone agree with Naina, because they have always seen these qualities in him.

Shalini: - "Wow, very well Naina...I think we all agree with ur points because no one can know ur Veer that well that urself and that was very sweet of u."

Ali: - "AB aate hain, apne 2nd round par. Ab is round me sabhi ladko ko apni partners ke liye ek song dedicate karna hoga; to chaliye Huda Bhai shoro ho jaiye..."

Huda came in the centre and has almost dragged Pooja with him too and then he started: -

khambe Jaisi Khadi Hai Ladaki Hai Ya Chhadi Hai
Shola Hai Phooljhadi Hai Pattakhe Ki Ladi Hai
Aankhon Mein Ghussa Hai Labon Pe Gaali Hai
Dekho Jara Dekho Yaaron Khudako Samajhati Hai Kya

Everyone really had a hard time to stop their laughter; while pooja was making faces at him.

Ali : - "Ab turn aati hai Aalekh ki, chaliye Aalekh bhai shoro ho jaiye"

Aalekh came in between and then started singing the song : -

Hum rahe ya na rahe kal
Kal yaad aayenge yeh pal
Pal, yeh hain pyaar ke pal
Chal, aa mere sang chal
Chal, soche kya
Chhoti si hai zindagi
Kal mil jaaye to hogi khushnaseebi
Hum rahe ya na rahe, yaad aayenge yeh pal

Everyone clapped at his lovely song...

Now, came Neev who has to sing song for Shalini...: -

Hay Hay Re Hay Yeh Ladki Hay Hay Re Hay
Karti Nadaaniyaan Kyon Poochho To Hay
Kabhi Yeh Humse Ladti Hai Kabhi Akadti Hai
Karo Door Se Chhed Khaani
Yeh Ladki Hai Deewani Hai Deewani
Deewani Deewani Deewani
Du Du Du Du Du Ru Du

Everyone laughed at Neev's selection of song.

Now, came Yudi; who had to sing a song for his sister which was not so difficult for him...: -

phulo kaa taro kaa sabka kehna hai

ek hajaro me meree behna hai

saree umar hame sang rehna hai

Everyone clapped and Neelu hugged him.

Now, comes Raj's turn. But Sanjana came there before him.

Sanjana: - "Guys, jaisa ki aapko pata hai aaj bhabhi ka birthday hai; to aapko bas ek paragraph hi nahin balki ek poora song ganna hoga bhabhi ke liye."

Raj: - "no way Sanju, Mein koi song nahin ghane wala."

Neev: - "Bhai please, aap bhabhi ke liye itna nahin kar sakte; please bhaiya please plase na..."

Raj: - "Ok theek hai, tum dono itna bol rahe ho to tum dono ke liye."

Raj comes in centre and start the song: -

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu

Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Ho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai

Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane

Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo

Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane

Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha????
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera

Teri Yaado Main Rahoo

Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo

Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai

Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

When he finished the song; He can see that Naina's mom dad and even his mom dad had tears in their eyes, Naina was just looking at him and everyone else was also had tears in their eyes.

Shalini smiled through her tears and started clapping. Everyone also came out of their world and joined her soon but Naina was just standing there. He was not sure what happened to Naina, so he moved towards her and just hold her hand to catch her attention and this was it for naina and she was not able to control her tears. She started crying and hugged Raj. Even Raj has tears in his eyes now, and he was just holding Naina close to his heart. When after sometimes, Naina stopped crying; he looked at her and she smiled at him.

Naina: - "Thank u so much Veer mujhe itna pyaar karne ke liye."

Raj: - "Kya hua Nia, aise ro kyun rahi ho?"

Naina: - "Bas aise hi, vishwas nahin hota apni kismet par..."

Raj: - "Vishwas karna sikho Nia, ab sab kuch aisa hi rahega, hum sab hamesha saath rahenge; theek kaha na mene?"

Naina was not able to speak anything but she just nodded her head and soon others join them, all were happy to see them together. Just then, Raj got a call from Major General Arjun Sharma, he excused himself and attended the call and was very happy after it.

Raj coming towards them: - "Mom Dad, mujhe aur naina ko jana hoga?"

Prerna: - "Is waqt par kahan?"

Raj: - "Wo Dad ne bulaya hai, mujhe aur nia ko abhi issi waqt unhe report karna hoga.."

Naina: - "Is waqt, koi problem hai kya?"

Raj: - "Nahin nahin, koi problem nahin hai, everything is just fine, to chalein?"

Naina nodded and they left the place and around after half an hour everyone decided to leave. On the other hand, Raj and Naina drived for half an hour before Raj stopped the car at Major's Farm House. Raj and Naina entered insie but doesn't found anyone there. Naina was getting curious so she asked raj about it.

Naina: - "veer, tumne to kaha tha ki sir ne humhe yahan bulaya hai, par wo to yahan nahin hain?"

Raj: - "Wo yahiin hai Nia, hum unke pass chalte hain."

Raj took her to the store room of that house, he took some books out of the rack and then, he swap a card in one of them and she was shocked to see that, Then raj whispered some password and the wall in front of him opened and she can see major General in there. She hesitantly entered there with Raj.

Naina: - "Yeh sab kya hai Veer?"

Major: - "Mein batata hoon Naina...Pehle tum yahan aao..."

She moved towards him and he placed his hand on her head and wished her Happy Birthday and in reply Naina touched his feet.

Major: - "Ab hai tumhare gift ki baari?"

Naina: - "Gift...Kaisa Gift?"

Major: - "Wo to tumhe tumhara Veer hi batayega..."

Naina looked at him with questioning eyes and He came towards her and held her hands.

Raj: - "Nia, tum mujhe batao ki aisa kaun sa insaan hai jo hamare beech ho kar bhi hamare beech nahin hai? Jisse hum dono ek jaisa hi pyaar karte hain aur jis ke bina hamari zindagi adhori hai???"

Naina just has tears in her eyes and was not able to say anything.

Raj continued: - "Kiske jaane se hamari zindagiyaan ruk gayi thi, yahan tak ki hum ek dosare se bhi alag h gaye the...Jaanti ho na ek aise insaan ko?" Naina just replied with a nod and Raj continued: - "Aaj me ussi insaan se tumhe milane aaya hoon..."

Naina's eyes open wide in a shock and she was not able to believe what she had heard...She whispered: - "Naveen Bhaiya?"

Raj nodded his head and took her to a room where she can see Naveen. She just run to him and hugged him...Tears were flowing through her eyes, But she got curious when she doesn't get any reaction from Naveen. She raised her head and looked into his eyes to found nothing; his eyes were not showing any sign of life. She looked at Raj, he came towards her.

Raj: - "Mein janta hoon kit um Naveen ko aise dekh kar pareshaan ho, par mein tumhe yeh sab baad me bataunga, abhi humhe jana hoga. Hum zyada der yahan nahin ruk sakte, kisi ko shak nahin hona chahiye."

Naina: - "Nahin, mujhe bhaiya ke pass hi rehna hai. Please Veer..."

Raj: - "Mein Naveen ke liye hi to aisa bol raha hoon na, zyada der yahan rukenge to kisi ko shak ho sakta hai."

Naina gave him a nod and she hugged Naveen once again & came out of the room with Raj. After 10 minutes, Raj and Naina left the place. The journey to academy passed in silence; where Raj was happy that finally he is able to bring a smile on Naina's face and Naina's happiness has no borders today, she was smiling but still she had so many questions in her mind.

They reached the academy and entering the gates, he said Naina to go inside the room and he will be there within 15 minutes. He needed to do something. Naina nodded and start walking to her room through the corridor, when a voice stopped him.

Voice: - "So, Lt. Aap apna asli haksad bhool rahi hai?"

Naina: - "Captain Nair?"

Nair: - "Ji Haan, Lt."

Naina: - "Aapne mujhe aise kyun roka? Kya chahiye aapko?"

Nair: - "Mein bas aapse yeh pochna chahta hoon ki yeh sab aap kyun kar rahi hain?"

Naina: - "Yeh meri zindagi hai Captain aur mein jo chahu wo kar sakti hoon..."

Nair: - "Bilkul yeh aapki zindagi hai...par mujhe laga tha ki aap apne bhai se itna pyaar karti hai ki aap apne pati ko kabhi maaf nahin kar payengi, par mein galat tha; aap apne bhai se itna bhi pyaar nahin karti?"

Naina: - "Mein apne bhaiya se bahut pyaar karti hoon..."

Nair: - "Haan tabhi to aapne apne bhai ke katil ko maaf kar diya...Mujhe laga tha ki yeh sab aapka natak hai, tanki aap Major Rajveer ko aur bhi dukh de sake, but I was wrong..."

Naina: - "Nahin, natak hi tha, wo sab natak hi tha; mera veer se maafi mangna ek natak tha, usse phir se dosti karna ek natak tha, uske bare me sochna ek natak tha, usse pyaar karna ek natak tha, sab kuch ek natak tha..."

She finished and looked above to find Raj standing there. She can see a shock and a lot of pain in his eyes. Watching all this, Nair smirked and left the place.

Naina was really shocked to see raj there. She moved towards him and hold his hand: - "Veer, mujhe maaf kar do; mujhe laga tha ki wo sab...isliye mene..."

But Raj was not in a condition to listen anything, He moved his hand out of Naina's and just whispered: - "Sab natak tha...sab..." and he started moving back...and just left the place.

Edited by -.Preet.- - 14 years ago
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I know mene bahut late se UD kiya hai, but Guys kabhi kabhi time hi nahin milta ki UD kar paun and also I want to say u all that the UD will be after 2 weeks, my brain needs some rest na, so thodha time to chahiye; But I promise UD's will be regular...and I am eagerly waiting to read ur comments/criticism/suggestions. Thanks a lot - Sumi, Gugulu, Mana, Priii...These Guys have always wanted me to continue my fics...
Edited by -.Preet.- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...i'm so shocked that naina was acting all the way...rajveer will be so heart broken
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Welcome Sherni...kya baat hai!!! Sabse pehla comment sherni ka hai😉😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update...i'm so shocked that naina was acting all the way...rajveer will be so heart broken



Thank u so much Dear and about Naina - she just want justice for her brother; and she did what she thought was right and Raj is really heart-broken...But he will be Ok soon!!! Thanks for the comment 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome updates.
loved them
continue soon.



Thank u so much Rakhi, and sure will try to continue soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for continuing this fic...

Thanks for the update...

Waiting for more cont soon...
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Originally posted by: golu_1677

thanks for continuing this fic...

Thanks for the update...

Waiting for more cont soon...



U r most welcome golu...glad to see ur reply here, will update soon 😃
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awesomeee blossom!!!
and thanks for listening to us finally and continuing...
baaki comment aaram se karti hu...😃

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Hio Preet
gud to see that u started this fiction again..😃
Now coming to the latest part ,it was really gud.👏👏
Naina was indeed in turmoil...she was have difficulty in betraying Raj's trust but sge was doing all this for her brother's innocence.
Raj gave alovely surlrise to Naina on her birthday..she didn't had words to thank him..
he loves her way too much.😊
Huda is too full of himself😆😆😆 poor pooja cudn't speak of even one nice quality in him.
That song which Raj sang is just too gud and it perefectly described his motions for Naina..
It was a shock for Naina to see Naveen alive.😲😲😲 How did this happen??
All this time Naina was lying..she hasn't forgiven Raj and all this was some plan to take revenge
Raj's world is completely shattered after knowing this..
I hope Naina is able to win back his trust again..😊
Bye

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