~Mayur FF Will Love You Forever~ updated on pg 141 - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago
so romantic update
i loved ittt
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
SIS...
edited my comment on pg.80
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Mari
it was beautiful update..
loved mayur romance- it was so beautiful
but mayanks dad was arrogant... i think he didnt like NUPUR..:(

Mayur got hurt by his behavior,.. i hope ki he doesnt create any barrier b/e mayur
beautiful update
precap sound very interesting..
keep it up


me also...
well.. no one could...
bring barrier.. between our mayur
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww... dat ws really sweet update mari!!!
bt yeh mayu ke dad kuch naya bakeda na khada kar de!
precap is interestin!
cont soon!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing and romantic update
loved Mayur and loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing n romantic update/...
loved it,...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for d update!!!!!!!!
love u SIS...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
well about story,till yet you have seen the development in Mayur relation and in the coming parts you will see the lots of happenings in Mayur's life,their are lots of turns coming in story..
keep reading the story.🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Will Love you forever

Mayank leaned on her again giving her peck on her lips "I love you" he said in hoarse and shaking voice pulling her towards himself for hug and wrapped his arms tightly around her, "I love you too" resting her head on his chest she said in breathless voice, they kept hugging each other like that for a long time to save those beautiful moments in their heart for forever, she wanted the Love always which finally she found in Mayank.

She slowly pulled herself apart and this time he let her go,her eyes were lowered due to shyness and her face was turned into crimson red due to blush as she was still feeling the warmth and soft touch of his lips over her.

Mayank smiled to see her blushing he leaned his face on her a bit and whispered near her ear.

"Nupur you are blushing like a new bride"he grinned saying these words in teasing tone, her heart skipped and she bit her lower lip in nervousness and raised her eyes in order to looked at him who was enjoying her expressions.

"I am not blushing "gathering some courage she said in shaking voice embarrassedly looking at him with the corner of her eyes.

"but I can prove it"he leaned a bit on her face looking at her passionately while smiling naughtily and Nupur's heart skipped a bit and she looked at him "do you want me to prove it"he chuckled looking at her crimson red cheeks and her heart beat raised to feel his intense gaze on her face while a smile spread over her face.

She tried to move away a bit from him but he held her wrist and pulled her towards him, she collapsed with his chest and he slightly pressed his hands over her shoulders. she stared into his eyes who were looking at her with so much loved she could feel his love for her,he crawled up his arms around her and pulled her more closed to her she taken aback at his sudden action and lowered her eyes shyly.Mayank could not help but grin to see his effect on her.

"I think I don't need to prove anyone as one can see the effect of my love on you"he moved his face closed to her and gave her quick peck while she closed her eyes in order to save that moment in her heart and her lips curved into smile.she looked up into his eyes and he stared back.they did not need words to convey their feelings to other as they even could hear their heart beats.she get closed to him and Mayank gave her confused look.she gave peck on his cheek and moved away from him stepping towards door left him speechless. Mayank was hell surprised at her this love gesture and looked at her with widened eyes.

She looked back at him and smiled whole heartedly who was still in surprised, "bye Mayank"she said in low voice and entered in her house.

Mayank touched his cheek with his fingers where she just gave him peck and grinned.

"Bye Nupur and I love you" he murmured in his mouth.

Dropping her at her home he too moved towards his house'..

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Nupur entered in house with grin and straight went towards her room to change her dress.

Radha who had been seeing Nupur with Mayank was in shocked "Ye Nupur ke saath kaun tha??kahin Nupur is larkeee"her voice chocked as this thought came in her mind "nahi'meri Nupur aisa nahi kare gi"she tried to shrugged off negative thoughts from her mind but she could not as her past had started haunting her and she wiped off her sweat with trembling hands..

"Radha tum se ab mera koi rishta nahi aur ye meri beti nahi hai"

His words started ringing in her ears,she kept her hands on her ears to stopped those voices but those voices were haunting her,

"main Nupur ke saath aisa nahi hone doon gi'.."she tried to recollect herself and wiped off sweat from her forehead and gasped some air to stable her breath while tears formed in her eyes to recalled the worst moments of her past..

"Maa khana ready hai.mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai"Nupur's voice brought her back to again in reality and she hurriedly wiped off her tears so she could not see them,Nupur entered in kitchen and hugged her from back while Radha smiled forcefully..

"khana ready hai.."she barely complete her words and turned her face towards Nupur who was looking very happy whatever she had seen few minutes ago she knew there was something between Nupur and Mayank she wanted to ask her about Mayank but firstly she wanted to confirmed her doubt whether it was true she had feeling for him or it was just her doubt. She decided.

"maa mujhe ap se permission chahiye"as Radha turned her face towards Nupur ,Nupur crawled her arms around her neck and asked her permission.

"kaisi permission" she asked confusedly looking at her face who was finding words to tell her about shilpa's invitation.

"maa wohhh'"Nupur hesitantly said while looking at her and Radha signaled her to complete her sentence.

"maa wohh kal mujhe apni friend ke ghar jana hai,meri friend ki mom ne mujhe invite kiya hai lunch pe"she asked hesitantly while pouting and Radha stared at her face she could see her changing expression, her blush while talking about him,she knew she was talking about Mayank.

"Nupur per main akele tujhe wahan kaise jane de sakti hoon"it was not a question but was a reply that she did not want her to go there and Nupur understood but she wanted to go there as Mayank had invited her and she could not refused his invitation.

"maa please"she pouted again looking at her helplessly and Radha gave her surprised look at her behavior as it was the first time Nupur was insisting that much. she never asked for anything and today she was insisting for just an invitation.

"theek hai."she said in chocking voice and grin appeared on her face. "Thanks Maa."Nupur kissed her cheek.

"you are best maa"she said while grinning and Radha smiled forcefully in response she did not saw her that much happy before ,the shine, the dreams she was seeing in Nupur's eyes had made her upset as she did not want her to feel the same pain which she had been felt.

She decided to talk to Nupur about Mayank..

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After college Mayank took her in his house,Shilpa was so happy to see Nupur again in their house while Nupur too happy to get motherly affection from shilpa.

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Shilpa was making food for lunch while Nupur was helping her in spite lots of warnings from Mayank as he was giving her signaled to spend some time alone with him but Nupur could not do anything as Shilpa took Nupur with her in kitchen and now Mayank was listening her warnings whenever he tried to entered in kitchen.

"Mayank boys are not allowing in kichen"Shilpa aunty strictly warned Mayank and he looked at Nupur with pouted face and Nupur gave him helpless look, the same was happening from the past half an hour whenever he tried to talked to Nupur or entered in kitchen he got glare in response and Nupur got instructions from shilpa

"Nupur if Mayank try to disturb you, tell me hunh!!"

Mayank tried many times and finally he got chance when he saw shilpa going towards her room,he rushed towards kitchen.

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Someone hugged her from back and she squeezed her body she knew his touch, he placed his chin on her shoulder tightening his grip around her waist

"I love you Nupur"Mayank whispered in her ear and her skipped at those words and her already glowing face turned red due to blush,Mayank raised his chin and moving his face a bit looked at her "well I was expecting same words in response" he whispered naughtily and she smiled shyly moving her face towards him. "hmm right now I am busy,so I have no time for reply"she said playing with him trying to hide her smile "ohh so you are busy"he stared into her eyes and she nodded her head,he held her from shoulder and turned her towards him "Nupur its not fair,you are ignoring me,we have decided to spend time alone,you have promised me yesterday and now you are breaking your promise" Mayank pouted showing her anger and Nupur giggled to see his irritating expressions.

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Precap..

"I want every little information about this girl"Ravi threw Nupur's picture on table and a man standing infront of him took that.

"ok sir"he said and keeping Nupur picture in his pocket went out his office.

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here is next part.i hope u ll liked it
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG..so many parts to read...
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