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Chapter XXVIII
It was late and abhay dropped the girls to the hostel and went to his mansion with laksh and aleena. He was now more satisfied that Lia was always with his piya to keep her safe from the dangers surrounding her. He could now have a peaceful night alone in the darkness while piya slept cozily yet safely.
Laksh was happy that things were now getting into place and none had and suspect that why they were here? It was really easy but being undercover for long wouldn't be so easy. Lia would surely be doing her work with piya on knowing her likes, dislikes, past, present and future. Both of the twins had a great opportunity to prove themselves in the supernatural world by doing this for the princess. Lia was pro at getting truths out without getting caught but piya wasn't so straight.
Laksh met Chand and Haseena who were glad to see him and then offered him with one of the rooms and left him for his further investigations on the other super naturals lurking in dehradun. He was here for a motive and he had to focus to fulfill it but that curly brown haired feisty girl was driving him insane by coming in his thoughts again and again. He could hear her giggles till now and he remembered the color of her face that changed suddenly when he met her eyes. What was so different about her?
Laksh: what is happening to you man? You are not at the right path'.. She is not your types'. She is so childish'. You can't love a kid'. This is not love'. Just attraction'. Stay focused now'.
Laksh brushed those thoughts away and went to his bed and switched off the lights to have some sleep but slumber was far away as his mind was already occupied by someone who was also feeling the same way somewhere else.
Things were so different for misha. The moon looked to be bigger and brighter, the wind seemed to be lovelier when it touched her milky white face brushing her brown curly locks. She loved standing and gazing it for long.
Misha thought: ye kya ho raha hai mujhe? Main baaki bimbos' ki tarah kyon behave kar rahi hoon? What is all this? Just go and sleep misha'. It's really late'. Kal Uss laksh ki toh khair nahi'. Woh hota hai Kaun meri neend leine waala' ulloo ka pathaa'
Misha also went and slipped into her warm blanket beside panchi who was already fast asleep but was it so easy to keep her mind away from the new guy who took away her peace of mind. Why was she feeling so feminine when she thought about him'? So girly?
Girls' hostel, mount college
Piya was on cloud nine after abhay's confession in front of everyone. She was still in dreams filled of her abhay who made her feel like the most special girl of the universe.
Lia was really happy to see her cute little princess drowning in her dreamland of her dark prince happily forgetting all her sorrows.
All the things had no value for piya in front of her angel who saved her every time she needed him. Nothing was truer; nothing was more special to her other than him. Her all thoughts were woven like a tight sweater around him. What else she wanted if she had the most handsome yet loving guy of the universe who was Eveready to put his world beneath her feet.
Every time she thought about him, his face came floating in her mind, his rarest smile that sparked her heart, stopped it for long, sent chills down her spine. His chiseled out features, marble like pale yet perfect skin, his engrossing voice and most importantly his hypnotic eyes always casted a spell over her. He was her very own Mr. hypnotist.
Lia zapped her out of the dreamland.
Lia: piya'. Mujhe lagta hai tumhe aur abhay ko ek saath hi rahne dena chahiye tha'. Tum mere saath ho kar bhi nahi ho'.
P: hmmm'. Kuch kaha tumne'..
L: haan'. Yahi ki mai bore ho rahi hoon'.
P: so then what should we do'?
L: we can talk but no Abhay talks please'..
P (blushed): yeah'. I promise I won't'..
L: okay' so tell me'. Where are you from'. about your parents? Where do they live?
P: fine'. See, I am an orphan'. I lost my mother when I was 8 (piya's voice was weak and soft as she grew sad thinking about her mother)'.. My father had abandoned us before my mother's death due to cancer and then never came back after her death also'. So my mom left me with Aunt Martha who was a widow and lived in Indore where I and mom used to live'.
L: I am really sorry piya'. I shouldn't have asked'. I mean you lost your parents at a very tender age' was Aunt Martha a good care taker to you'?
P: a lot'. Aunt Martha is really a good lady and she loves me a lot'. She had already adopted Jeh as she had no children of herself before my mom handed me to her and all her property to her'. Aunt Martha raised both me and Jeh like her own children'. And fulfilled all our whims and wishes'. Jeh was like my brother'.. He spoilt me a lot and always saved my back from auntie's scolding's'. we both grown up together'. Same class'. Same batch'. Same grade though he was a year elder then me'. And then finally, I got a scholarship to mount college'.. Jeh got it too'.. Then I came here and I found my new friends'. And a new hope to live and cherish'.
L; why hasn't Jeh come here with you' he also got a scholarship with you so where is he?
p: yeah actually he would come soon... he had some paper work left there in indore so he would join me later...
l; he seems to be good...
p; and you seem to show lot of interst in him... tum chaho toh tumhe usse milwa doo... he is smart... intelligent, handsome, just like a gentle man should be...
Liana found pia to be a really tough girl with a beautiful heart and strong will. She was nothing less to an angel who had a hard childhood compared to other normal children but everyone gets his or her fair share of happiness so she was getting it now. It was really nice talking to her'. Knowing more'. Knowing deeper'.
But one thing irked lia that piya didn't talk much about how she felt for her father? Whether he is alive or not?
L: piya'. If u don't mind then can I ask about your father'.? I mean'. Did you ever try to find him? Where is he now? Do you hate him?
P (it made piya feel glumly inside thinking about his father): lia'. I just don't hate him'. But I don't particulary like him too'. I just feel sad for him that he left my mother who loved him so much'. I never tried to find him but destiny brought us together in a single frame where I cant run away from or he could do the same'. I know that he is alive, he is near abd doesn't know about my existence and I don't want him to know about me'.
L: why? He has a daughter'. He must know'.
P: no' (tried to sound straight) I like to be indepent'. I was born always like this and I don't want to love this way of my life for anyone'. He has a big family of his own now with an untainted respect in the society' a wife'. Daughters with her other wife' I don't want to become any problem for them'. Can we not talk about them' it really hurts deep down'.
L: okay'. So how do you like things, then? Simple n straight or twisted n complicated'.
P: things should not be fake'. Whether may it be simple and straight or twisted and complicated' it makes me feel non desirable, incapable'. When someone tells that he or she is telling lies or hiding truths to protect anyone'. I just like things straight to face' abhay did it for a couple of times and I forgave them' but not anymore' my existence was on the basis of a lie and at last it ruined it at all' but I don't want to reapeat the same thing again' I have the capability of facing anything then why to fear of loosing what I have?...
P: ek minute'. Tum mujhse itne question kyon puch rahi ho? Kind of interrogation'. Koi spy ho kya (piya noticed the sudden change in lia's face like being cought)'. Just kidding'. Lets talk about you know'..
L: okay then shoot now'. (calmly)
P: come on dumbo'. Apne baare mein batao'
L: see'. Main aur laksh twins hain' I am elder than him' we lived in shimla with our family'.
P: what about your parents? Where are they now?
L: parents'.. actually they never stayed with us'. They are alive but could never be with us' for different reasons'. Please can we sleep now? I am tired after travelling' its late na'.
P: hmmm'.
Piya didn't dig anything more about lia seeing the sad expression she earned after thinking about her parents but something was there about ia that was surely not normal which piya could easily feel'.
Next morning
Piya came out of her late slumber when she received about 10 calls and 15 messages from misha. She immediately called her back.
Piya: hello mish… kya hua tumhe…. Itni dher saari missed calls aur messages kyon kiye…
Misha: shut u dumbo…. Ek toh itni der se phone nahi utha rahi aur abb bhashan dene lagi ho…. Mujhe pata hai…. Ki agar meri jagah Uss kharoos ka phone aata toh tum jaroor utha thi…. Achcha mujhe raat bhar neend nahi aayi hai…. Aur abb aa rahi hai… so could you please submit my assignment …. Main thodi der se aaongi….
Piya: okay…. Par tum raat bhar phir kar kya rahi thi…. Ladoo bana rahi thi kya….
Misha: no…. mujhe Kisi ko majaa chakhana hai…. Jaldi college pahuncho…. Phir se abhay ke dreams mein mat kho jaana….
Misha cut the phone and piya blushed on misha's last statement…. She got up from the bed and saw Lia already standing in front of the mirror all ready in her funky white top and matching black jeans….
Lia: good morning princess…. Abhay tumhara intezaar kar raha hai…. He called to tell that he would come to pick you so get ready….
Piya: okay…. Just few moments…
Piya got ready in just few minutes to see abhay soon. She dressed in a beautiful knee-length gown with large purple floral designs on the white chiffon background and put some light lip gloss and left her curls to fall back over her milky white skin to give her an angelic look.
She walked out of her hostel and saw abhay leaning over his black car flaunting his infectious smirk and piercing his hypnotic deep blue eyes deep in piya's heart to have and everlasting imprint.
Abhay was casted under the spell of piya's beauty. How could she look so innocent yet tempting at the same time? She was no less to an angel in his life….
Abhay gentlemanly opened the door for piya and she sat down after returning a smile. Abhay also came and started driving.
Abhay: you look beautiful piya…. Like an angel…
Piya blushed scarlet with blood rushing all to her cheeks. Abhay was trying hard to control himself and remain calm.
Abhay calmly: I love this color of your cheeks…. Did you sleep peacefully..?
Piya: a lot….. and your cousin is so friendly…. I like her….
Abhay: I know…. Did she eat your brain with her rubbish fashion talking's…
Piya: no…. instead we talked a lot about each other…. She didn't eat my head…. She is really sweet…
Soon they reached the college talking about other things…. Both of them walked together through the college corridors with hands in hands. lots of people were still staring them but nothing did make them uncomfortable. They entered in the classroom and sat. piya sat with Lia who was already sitting and abhay with laksh and Kabir.
Lia: piya…. Misha kahan hai…
Piya: who next class mein ayegi…? So rahi hai….
Lia: abhi…. Okay….
Ms. Dasgupta entered the classroom.
Mrs. Dasgupta: students…. Since there are some exchange students that have joined us so please let them feel comfortable and help them…. The already given assignments will be compensated for them but they are asked to complete and submit further assignments on time with no excuses…. Now everyone submit your assignments…
Everyone submitted and piya submitted misha's too.
Ms. D: piya, where is misha?
Piya: madam she is having headache so she come in the next lecture….
Ms. D: ok…. Just inform her about next assignment….
Piya: okay…
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Misha reached soon to the college with a super exciting plan in her mind. She knew that t was interested in every new boy who was handsome and laksh was her next target as Abhay was already taken by piya. This time misha would fulfill her enemy's wish for her own selfish reasons…. She loved to push everyone's nerves when it comes to fun and this is what she was going to do.
She wrote on two chits: I am your biggest admirer…. Please meet me in caf de plaza at 7pm…..
Firstly she went to girls' locker room and placed one chit in t's locker and the other one in laksh's locker leaving no clues for anyone to guess who did it….
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sorry for the late updates... was busy in the college and other assignments and tests...
p.s. updated the next chapter also...

regards...

swati...
Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 13 years ago
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comented on pg 78!!!!😊

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Comment Updated on Page 78.😊
Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago
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Wow I loved this update of urs.Mish is so naughty haahah😆😆.And Pia-Lia r now gud frnds.Pia hate ppl who lie.I dont know how she'll react whn she'll come 2 know abt Abhay-Lia & laksh's truth.Swati after ages u wrote this FF😳

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is the update over, or still more to come?
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Chapter XXIX
Misha was super excited about her plan but still she check whether both t and laksh will reach the spot she chose for them. She had chosen caf de plaza for her latest prank which she was going to play on her two bakraas'..
Laksh went to the locker room after the classes and saw the chit and crumbled it into a ball and threw it away which hit Kabir. Kabir opened and saw the chit'.
Kabir: dude'. Tera koi admirer tujhse milna chahta hai' tu jayega nah'
Laksh: no'. I know this is some stupid bimbo'. Let her alone spend her evening'. I am not interested in bimbos'. I like feisty girls'. Not china dolls with high maintenance'.
Kabir: oh' toh tumhe misha ko contact karna chahiye'. Perfect for you'. Tumhare dimaag thikhane lagadegi'.
Laksh thought: uska toh naam bhi mat lo'. Ladki hai yaa patakha'. Mere dimaag par parasite ki tarah chadh gayi hai'
Laksh: no'. better I would go with this one only'. Akhir dekhein toh sahi kon hai'
Misha was also standing nearby and listening her plan going to its right direction' she was sure that t would surely come as she had a chronic disease of picking new handsome man every now and then and she won't leave this chance at all'.
Caf de plaza, 7pm
Misha had already reached the caf beforehand and had booked a beautiful table for the two of her bakraas' she soon went away and hid in the nearby bar mixing in the crowd but still keeping a close eye on her table'.
She saw laksh entering in the caf in his casual attire yet looking hot and sizzling as ever' she couldn't take her eyes off him and was literally floored by his cool self. For a moment, she forgot her motive of being present there and thought to go and tell him that she was the one who is his biggest admirer' but she came to earth as soon her sight hit the girl she hated the most'. Her entered Miss. Tanushree Ambolkar'
T hadn't expected laksh to be here at this time and that too waiting for him as he didn't seem to give her more importance than any other common girl. It was like she won a candy when she saw him waiting on the reserved table'.. she was star struck'.
On the other hand, laksh thought that he was surely going to get suffocated for this night or to be sure, get died by t's over girly love' misha was enjoying the unusual 36 different expressions on laksh's face' she was surely enjoying this'
T came and hugged laksh'. Both of them sat and t started her nonsense making laksh feel like killing her' food was ordered and served while t kept boring laksh with her oh- so-boring-I-am-diva talks'.
T: I didn't know that I had so many admirers L, I feel so lucky you know'.
Laksh: L' What is this?
T: yeah' l sounds so sweet'. Just like T sounds to fashionable matching to my spirit'
Laksh: yeah'. As if it makes some change'.
Both of them were about to leave after having a close dance which seen that only misha and t enjoyed when t came near laksh and stamped her lipstick on laksh's cheek'
Misha enjoyed the situations before and was ready to leave but something caught her attraction and she felt like burning in rage' she didn't know why but she couldn't see t kissing laksh, it made her burn'. This is it'. She knew how to fix this'. Misha walked to them where laksh was standing with t looking shocked with t's sudden chain of action'.
Misha: excuse me T'. laksh, I thought that you would wait for me, I took so much risk in putting that chit in your locker and you spent your evening with this bimbo'
T: what' you called me bimbo'
Misha: yeah'. And what do you think? Laksh arranged all this'. Sorry, but It was I who arranged this date for you miss'
T stamped her foot in anger and went away leaving an angry misha and shocked laksh alone'.
Laksh: why did you do this? I mean you arranged a blind date for me that too with t'. she really sucks man'.
Misha: so what'. I had to take my revenge from both of you'. She is so bitchy and you'.
Laksh interrupted: what me'.? What did I do? I came here last night only and you want to take revenge from me'
Misha: yeah'. You have made me mad' I don't know why but I feel so edgy near you and I wanted to make you feel the same way'.
Laksh was very happy that that he wasn't the only one who was feeling different, misha also felt like the same way he did last night'. Was he falling in love with her?
Laksh: and you thought that arranging my date with t would do it for you' actually I felt more like boring than feeling like the way you felt'. You could have told me or confronted me'.
Misha: and you would have made fun of me'
Laksh: no'. I know and I'd like to tell that I find you a really special'. More like my types'. I would have helped you'.
Misha: okay'. I am sorry'. Now can we be friends? (misha stretched her arm)
Laksh shaking hands with her: friends'.
Misha: okay... its late I should leave'. Do you want to have a lift'?
Laksh: okay'. But I'll drive'
Misha: holla'. We are going by bike and I am going to ride it'. You will sit back as misha dobriyal doesn't sits on the passenger seat'
Laksh: okay madam' but please remember that I have a sister to look for and a long life to live so please drop me to the raichands in one piece'.
Misha: aye-aye captain'.
Laksh paid the bill and sat back on the bike while misha drove it off' she was constantly talking while laksh was more interested in her slender figure and thanking the slight breeze to make her hairs flow with the speed banging them with his face' her fragrance was so divine like some wine with a chilling effect'
Soon misha dropped laksh and went to her house after getting satisfied by the day'
Raichand mansion
Abhay was sitting with aleena waiting for laksh.
Aleena: bro' tum kahan they'.
Laksh: restaurant mein'.
Aleena: kiske saath?
Abhay: misha'.
Laksh: no'. she just dropped me to home'. Main Uss ulloo t ke saath tha'
Abhay: kyon?
Laksh: long story'. Main thak gayaa hoon' going to sleep'. Good night'
Abhay: good night'
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Hecate
Hecate, in Greek mythology, goddess of darkness, and the daughter of the Titans Perses and Asteria. Hecate represented its darkness and its terrors. On moonless nights she was believed to roam the earth with a pack of ghostly, howling dogs. She was the goddess of sorcery and witchcraft and was especially worshiped by magicians and witches, who sacrificed black lambs and black dogs to her. As goddess of the crossroads, Hecate and her pack of dogs were believed to haunt these remote spots, which seemed evil and ghostly places to travelers.
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Mount college, girls' hostel
Lia as usually chirping while piya was listeining songs and reading her favorite novel'. ROMEO & JULIET'
Suddenly something struck her mind'. She remembered that last night Lia didn't talk a lot about herself'.
P: liana'. I want to ask something'
L: go ahead' I am listening'
P: it's something strange'. I mean whenever I am near you' I feel something different' some sort of pull' it's so different' intense' not normal' or to say human' I mean it's not bad but feels warm and more human' you understand nah' what I am trying to say'
L: okay'so what do you want me to do?
P: I want you to tell me the reason I feel so different with you' I don't feel the same way with you'. I mean the way I feel with misha is lot different from the way I feel with you'you both are equal to me but there is something more with you' you don't remain normal all the times' sometimes it feels fishy' and last night you didn't tell me about your parents also' you asked a lot about me' like you are some kind of secret agent' keeping an eye on me'
L (tried to cover the coming trail of questions): I know' its abhay who wants me to see that you aren't in some kind of danger' I mean that incident with you in mussorie forest and then the photographs got burnt'. He doesn't wants you to get into some other trouble' so he asked me to be with you all the time and get some info about you' because he is also investigating about that person you burnt your mother's photos'.
P: so he could have asked me on his own' and this is not the real reason' you all are hiding something from me'. I know it'
L: okay' I will tell you what you want'.
P: really'
L: shoot'
P: okay tell me about your parents first' and I want truth' no more lies' I can handle everything' I am not a kid anymore'
L: okay'. do you know about Hecate?
P: Hecate'. Who? , are you taking about Greek goddess Hecate'.?
L: hmm'. Same'
P: so, what's with Hecate?
L: she is my (hesitates)'..
P: what is she yours'.?
L: mother'.
P chuckled: you must be kidding'. (Piya saw Lia serious)'. I mean you have to be kidding'. She is goddess'. Myth' how can she be your mother?
L: see' you feel so intense and attractive near me'. Not so normal' because I and laksh are not normal'. To be specific'. I am an ancient witch and laksh is a warlock'
P gasped: oh my god'. Is this real'. I mean pinch me' this stuff doesn't exist (piya's face showed every color from red to pale white in utter disbelief)'.
L: I knew that you won't believe'
P: no'. I mean you are saying that you are a witch and laksh a warlock'. How old are you'.?
L: 319 yrs old'. Laksh also as he is my twin brother'
P: and where does Hecate fits here?
L: see, the Greek gods and goddesses are not myths' they are real and exist' Hecate is the Greek goddess of witchcraft'all the witches and warlocks worship her' my father is a warlock'. Laxman' but being the last of his type and only one' he didn't have anyone with whom he could extend our type'. The head witches asked him to find a way to extend his coven'.
P interrupted: so' he married Hecate'
L: no stupid'he didn't marry mom so easily'
P: so how? Did Hecate have a swayamvar'?
L: it's not so funny'.aur waise bhi Greek goddesses kabhi rakhi ki tarah swayamvar nahi karti thi' it's like' all the witch and warlocks worship Hecate and take their powers from her and my father also used to worship her and when Hecate was very impressed by his worship' she came to visit him and asked him to have his only wish'.
P: so he asked her to marry him'. Wow' how romantic?
L: as if' then dad used his chance and asked mom to marry him and have children with him but mom put her own condition'
P exclaimed: what condition?
L: mom was a goddess and she couldn't lead a normal life with my dad so she said that she would marry him only if he would come with him to her palace in heaven after she gives birth to us'. Dad agreed and then they were married in presence of many witches and gods and goddesses' they fell in love so deeply after and mom gave birth to us soon'and took dad with her to her palace in heaven'.
P: why didn't she take both of you with her?
L: actually'. The heaven allows only pure bloods to reside there forever' I mean my mom was a pure blooded goddess' dad was a warlock but I and laksh are kind of hybrids'so she couldn't take us with her and left us in care of the other ancient witches'
P: hybrids' hmmm' you mean mixture of a goddess and witch'.. Interesting'
L: yeah'. We are not the only kind of hybrids'. There are many more and you would come to know about them soon' I love what I am and I am happy to be not normal' it's really good to be this way in one way but then' it's so frustrating to be this way forever' stuck in this age'from 319 years, liana hales' stuck here not moving forward'.
P: it's the way you see yourself'. I mean if you take it as a boon then you would like your existence but if you think it as a curse then you would only be sad so chill and be happy with what you got and what you are' you are really special'. My most special witch'.
L: thanks piya' you are so gracious' I mean no human has the capacity to take these things so seriously' all they think that we are either harmful or evil' but I like your spirit a lot'
P: okay' I love you a lot' achcha tell me' have you seen your parents?
L: no' no'never'
P: ever'
L: no' mom took dad as soon as she gave birth to us' she couldn't spend any time with us' but whenever we both are in some kind of trouble or something then we are able to hear mom's voice' she guides us and dad always uses his special powers to shield us from all the evil things' I just love my parents yet I haven't seen them'
P (with tears filled in her chocolate brown eyes): sorry' I shouldn't have asked it' I know how it feels to not have your parents with us when we need them, when everyone has their own'. And we don't have'
L: piya' I know and I can feel that both of our mothers must be watching us from heaven'they must really be happy for us and somewhere in our hearts' they still reside'
P (tried to change the topic): hmmm'. so do you have any special powers?
L: I have the special power of curing everyone either supernatural or natural and memorizing many spells'laksh has special powers of checking the emotions shown on a long-term basis. Being ancient laksh is experienced and charged with extreme powers of controlling elements of nature while I have unmatched defensive and offensive skills and both of us make a total package being the last white sapphire witches'we can also channelize mom's extreme powers of witchery when we need but I haven't tried this ever'. Never needed'.
P: wow' this is really amazing'now I have a witch goddess in my backup so you can do my homework' wow'
L; no' no miss jaiswal'. And I am not witch goddess'. I am a demigoddess'and you are so lazy' do it yourself'and never ever spill this secret to anyone'
P: does abhay's family know this'.?
L: hmmm' and laksh knows this that I have told you so he would have already told abhay and others that you also know now'
P shocked and exclaimed: how did you tell laksh'? I mean you haven't used anything'
L: telepathy babes'
P: one more thing'
L: now what?
P: are Abhay and aleena also like both of you'? I mean they also act like you and I feel almost same with them too' they also don't seem to be normal'
L: because they aren't' they are not like me or laksh but different'. I mean they are not human but not witches too'
P; then who?
L; ask Abhay or aleena'. I won't tell anything without their permission'. It's not my part of truth' it would be bad to tell you anything without asking them'. But I want to tell one thing that abhay loves you a lot' he just don't want to pose any threat to your life so he hasn't told you anything' he fears that you would leave him or hate him when you will come to know about his real self'. Just don't let his fear become truth' if you really love him them I would ask you to find about him and then accept him the way he is'
P: I know' I am trying' and I also love him a lot' he must have trust in me'and tell the truth'.
L: okay now go to sleep or abhay will kill me for not letting you sleep' good night'
P: good night'

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Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 13 years ago
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amazing dr!!!!

lia has questionesd pia like a cob!!!! n lakshi is falling 4 misha n misha also have d same feelings!!! dats gud!!!!
abhay n pia are always cool!!! loved abhays style.. d way he came 2 pick pia is cool!!!
misha decided 2 take revenge 4m laksh!!! blind daye with t...😆😆 i m imagining his condition!!!!
n at d end misha spill out d truth... dats cool.. n droped laksh 2 d raichand!!!
now pia knows d truth about lia n laksh!!! i loved d way he reacted!!!! n i hope pia came 2 know about abhay truth soon n accept him in his real self!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!
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Awesome Updates!😊

Laksh is getting attracted to Misha & same is the case with Misha & loved that date & bike scene. Waiting for Pia's reactions after she gets to know about Abhay's reality & hope that she'll accept him, the same way as she accepted Laksh's and Lia's truth. Continue soon and thanks for Pm dear.
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awesome update
loved it
I hope Piya comes to know about Abhay's truth
continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both the chaps we awsum misha arranged blind date with t for laksh god kaha phas gaya lol chalo dono ek dusre ke pyar me padne wale he achi jodi hai and ur greek god explanation thanks yaar so pia the jasoos ne sab pata kar lia abhiya were nice thanks for pm

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