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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Buddies,

Thank you so much for your super duper comments.

I guess, I am left with barely some 20 days to end MMM. So i am moving the story a lil bit faster. Hope you would like it.

Part 60

Without Maan's knowledge, some words skips from his mouth...

M: Geet! tum aur ye vicky dono bilkul meri mom jaise

Geet is shocked by Maan's words.

G: (st) Why Maan is talking about mom? He doesn't like anyone talk about her na? Now how come he himself talks about her?

Maan himself is shocked by his words

M: (st) ye maine kya bol diya? Why i am talking about mom?

Maan goes to MSK mode

M: Geet!

Geet senses the coldness in his voice

G: ji

M: Seat belt pehenlo

G: ji

Geet fastens her seat belt. Maan starts driving. For the rest of the journey, both didn't talk to each other.

Both are lost in their respective childhood thoughts. Maan is remembering the good times he had with his mother and how his life changed after his mother left. Geet is remembering how Maan's mother faced lot of troubles in raising Geet, Ajay and Vicky.

Finally Maaneet reach the khurana mansion. Both are silently getting down from the car and walks towards the mansion.

Dadima, jugnu mama, dev and annie are waiting for Maan in the drawing room. They didn't know anything about Maan's confession to Geet. They are thinking that Maan is still searching for Geet and that is why he didn't return to the mansion yet.

Dadima and jugnu mama are praying to god

Dadi: (st) hye bhagavan! Soon, Maan should accept geet

Jugnu: (st) bhagavan! Maan should bring back geet to the mansion

dev and annie are happy that Geet has left the mansion. at the same time they are sad that Maan has gone in search of Geet

annie; (st) why the hell maan bhai is searching for that geet?

dev is recalling how restless was maan when he learnt that geet has left the mansion

dev; (st) the way bro behaved in the morning comfirms my doubt. He might have married that geet secretely. But does bro still love that geet? she was the reason for karan's death na?

Our chandu bhaiya is also sad that Geet is not there to help him

Chandu: (st) hey bhagavan! Geet madam has left the mansion all of a sudden. Now who will give me tips to impress maan sir. Please bhagavan! Send geet madam back to the mansion very soon

Maan and Geet are entering inside the drawing room. Dadi notices Maaneet.

Though Dadima is happy to see Geet again, she wants to get an assurance from Maan that he will never send Geet out of the mansion. so she decides to be harsh on Maan so as to persuade him to take a firm decision.

Dadi: rukhiye Maan! andhar math ayiye

Maaneet are shocked. They are stopping at their current position and looks at each other.

Jugnu mama and chandu are haapy to see Geet but they are shocked by dadi's words.

Dev and aniie are shocked to see Geet.

Dadi walks to Maaneet and asks Maan in a cold voice

Dadi: Maan! now why have you brought Geet here?

Geet is confused by dadi's behaviour. Maan gets angry

M: dadima! ye aap kaise sawal pooch rahe hai?

Dadi: hum bilkul sahi sawal pooch rahe hai Maan. ab jawab deejiye

Maan gives dadima a stern look. Geet is silently watching Maan and dadima

Dadi: Maan! i am tired of all these things. One day you are asking Geet to leave you. The other day you are searching for her like a crazy man. Ye kya horaha hai beta?

Geet expects that Maan will say something about their confession. But Maan is silently staring at dadi.

G: (st) why Maan is not saying anything?

Dadi: Maan! what you are doing with Geet is not good for both of you. zindagi koi bachhon ko khel nahi hai beta. now tell me Maan, what have you decided in Geet's matter?

Jugnu mama and others are looking at Maan and expecting a reply from him.

Maan didn't reply anything. Geet couldn't understand why Maan is not saying anything

Dadi: Maan! hum aap se kuch puch rahe hain. Ab jawab deejiye

Geet couldn't bear to see that dadi is questioning Maan in front of everyone. She tries to stop dadima.

G: please dadima! aap Maan se yesa...

Dadima gives Geet a stern look and talks in a stern voice

Dadi: Geet! hum hamare pautha se baath kar rahe hain. Aap se nahi

Geet is shocked to the core. Maan has lost his patience and shouts

M: bas. Bohat hogaya

Dadi goes mute

Geet gestures him to calm down. But Maan couldn't control his anger

M: dadima! ye aap Geet ke saath jo kar rahe hai na wo bilkul teek nahi hai

Dadi: wo hi tho hum bhi bol rahe hai Maan ki ye aap Geet ke saath jo kar rahe hai na wo bilkul teek nahi hai.

Maan and Geet are looking at each other

Dadi: Maan beta! Geet has a life too. But you are treating her like a doll. One day you ask her to leave you, the other day you run away from her and blame her that she is the reason for your troubles, the next day you want her back into your life. for how long will you continue like this?

geet understands that dadima is worried about them and that is why she is behaving like this.

Maan remains silent. Geet is confused by Maan's silence. She tries to tell dadi about their confession

G: dadima! main aur Maan...

Maan realises what Geet is trying to do. He stops her

M: Geet! chup raho

Geet couldn't understand what is going on in Maan's mind.

Dadi: Maan! ab saaf saaf batayiye ki Geet aap ke liye hain kaun?

M: sab kuch

Geet's heart skips a beat and she looks at Maan with tears in her eyes. He gestures her not to cry.

Dadima and others didn't expect these words from Maan. Both are very happy by Maan's words.

Dadi smirks. Jugnu mama smiles.

Dev and annie are almost getting heart attack.

Chandu is also very happy

Chandu: (st) ye kya hai? picture me naya twist?

M: chalo Geet

Maan grabs Geet's wrist and walks...

Dadi: ek minute Maan

Maan stops.

Dadi: now you can't bring Geet inside

Maaneet and others are shocked again

M: dadima! what is wrong with you?

Dadi: i am perfectly alright Maan. andhar jaane se pehle muj se vadha keejiye ki aap Geet ko kabhi bhi is ghar se bahar nahi bejdege

M: sirf ghar se nahi dadima mere zindagi se bhi Geet ko main kabhi bhi bahar nahi jane doonga. Ye mera vadha hai

Dadima and jugnu mama are very happy that finally Maan has promised that he will not send Geet away from him.

Dev and annie are fuming.

M: chalo Geet

Maan walks holding Geet by her wrist and Geet follows him silently

Chandu: (st) acha hua bhagavan! Hereafter Maan sir won't play the day and night game. During day time also Geet madam can stay in the mansion without the fear of being thrown out by maan sir.

@ Maaneet room...

Maaneet are entering inside their room...

Maan releases Geet's wrist and he goes and sits on the bed.

He is very upset by dadi's behaviour. Geet didn't know what to do. She goes and sits next to him silently. Maan takes her hand into his. Geet stares at his face

M: Geet!

G: ji

M: now you are wondering why i didn't tell dadima about our love. Hena?

G: woh...

M: main jaantha hu Geet

Geet looks into his eyes

M: par Geet...i have a reason for not telling dadima about us

Geet looks at him questioningly

M: Geet! before telling this to anyone, we need to sort out some issues between us

Maan feels that, before taking their relationship to next stage, he should tell geet about the connection he has with Nandhini's death. but he didn't know where to start.

G: Maan! mujhe kuch samaj nahi aarahi hai

M: samaj ne ke koshish karo Geet

Geet is confused. Maan couldn't imagine how geet is going to react when he tells her about nandhini's death. he musters some courage and starts talking

M: Geet! it is only 7 days since you came to the mansion. Though we love each other very much, we are yet to know a lot about each other. Hena Geet?

Geet didn't know what to reply. She remains silent

G:...

M: geet! I don't know how much you know about me. I want to tell you a lot of things about me. At the same time I too don't know anything about you, except few things. though we have our whole life to know about each other, we have to start at some point. Hena geet?

Geet fears that the conversation may lead to questions about Maan's mother. So she tries to end the conversation

G: Maan! can we discuss this on some other day? I am very tired. Please Maan

Maan is disappointed. But he too thinks that Geet needs some rest and he agrees with her

M: teek hai Geet. you take some rest

Maan kisses her forehead, gets up from the bed and walks towards the door to leave the room. Geet feels bad. Maan is about to open the door to go out...

G: Maan! i know you since my childhood

Maan's heart skips a beat, he turns around and looks at Geet. he couldn't believe what he just heard.

Hi buddies!

Hope you loved the update. I will continue later.

have a nice week end guys

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Tonya


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Posted: 14 years ago
fabuls update. vn will geet r allow maan to say how he married her??
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
dadi n jugnu mama r very happy n even our chandu bhaiya also very happy...
sooo sad that u r soon ending MMM... :(
continue soon dear...


jyothi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg...amazing update:)
thanks for d pm:)
continue soon:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update... luved it... hope geet hears him out n eases him off his guilt... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
dear ossum
lovley part
wowww
why u stopped
dear
where are the 2 parts dear...waitng for the next part eagerly to know what she says now to him

omggg pls continue soon


love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
its very awesome n wonderful part
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Daadi'the best actress!!! kya drama kar rahi hai apne poote ko confess karane keliye😆
Yeh Dev-Annie ko bechari Geet se kya problem hai😡donomko US, Canada, jaha jaanahai bejdo jaldi...
Last dialogue from Geet left me confused, what exactly is she going to tell????

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